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Reviews For Shadows of Desperation
Uh..Ginny is secretly a ...uh...ANIMAGUS BADGER! ..Maybe I should just read it. In any case it's really good. But...Mrs. Weasley?
I can't go any further just wait..... give me a few.... WHAT THE BLOODY HELLL DID YOU DO????? MRS. WEASLEY??? How did you fix it in your twisted little mind to make her sound so mean? I'm crying! Do you know how rare it is for me to cry over a fic???? I haven't even gotten past the great hall yet. You're evil. I hope you know it. :'( My poor Harry.
And as for abused children having a specific house...are all abused children full of cunning and guile? Why can't they be brave and chivalrous, or clever or all of the above to be sorted into other houses. And it defies belief that Severus Snape could be put in charge of abused children when he is quite happy to abuse any children (psychologically anyway) who are not in his house. He can feel empathy for Slytherins, but hatred for all the other kids in the school. But I sincerely hope that Harry and Malfoy aren't going to end up best friends and I just know Ron is now going to hate Harry for being a Slytherin. Curious to see where you're going though. You write well, BTW. Sorry for all the negativity. Author's Response: Haha, don't appologise for constructive criticism, I don't mind it at all! And let me say first, that I also hate sadistic Molly Weasley. It was done intentionally though, as a major part of the plot line that won't show up until a little later in the story. Also, I agree that abused children can have other qualities. No one can doubt that Harry is brave, and he was originallly sorted into Gryffindor, for example. However, many abused children are incredibly cunning and can misdirect people unbelieveably well. Otherwise, I can just say that's it is an AU story, and not everything will follow canon 100%. I do try, with my characterizations and such, though. As to Draco and Harry, and Ron's reaction, I can't really give anything away, but it will be coming soon! Thanks for reviewing! - August Sky
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks! There's certainly a reason, but I won't say just yet. Thanks for reviewing! - August Sky. Author's Response: Haha. Thanks! There's certainly a reason, but I won't say just yet. Thanks for reviewing! - August Sky.
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Author's Response: Hmmm... Not so sure about just desserts, but you'll see when we get to that point. Thanks! - August Sky |
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