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Title: Disillusioned 06 Oct 2018 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting take on cannon
Title: Disillusioned 28 Feb 2017 11:53 pm
Reviewer: That_One_New_Pokemon (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm kind of thinking that perhaps it was a boggart or something, judging by her 180 in emotions. Either that, or someone is certainly doing some spell work. I like this story. I hope you eventually come back to it.
Title: Disillusioned 09 Jul 2009 2:02 pm
Reviewer: Marielle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like where this is going! Am going to read next chapter now....
Title: Disillusioned 16 May 2009 4:36 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    -makes wild guess-

    Uh..Ginny is secretly a ...uh...ANIMAGUS BADGER!

    ..Maybe I should just read it.
    In any case it's really good. But...Mrs. Weasley?
Title: Disillusioned 07 May 2009 4:54 am
Reviewer: hypercell (Signed) [Report This]
    it had better be a really good reason why she is OOC...a Really, really really good reason...becasue she is mega mega mega realy ooc...
Title: Disillusioned 10 Nov 2008 3:07 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wait one bloody minute
    I can't go any further
    just wait..... give me a few....



    WHAT THE BLOODY HELLL DID YOU DO?????
    MRS. WEASLEY???
    How did you fix it in your twisted little mind to make her sound so mean?
    I'm crying! Do you know how rare it is for me to cry over a fic????

    I haven't even gotten past the great hall yet.

    You're evil.
    I hope you know it.
    :'( My poor Harry.
Title: Disillusioned 11 Jun 2008 1:34 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I was intrigued enough to start your story, but I have to say, regardless of things to come, I HATE a sadistic, cruel, Molly Weasley. I gather that Ginny has also been mistrated by her mother. Perhaps your premise is that Molly never wanted a daughter at all. That's why Ginny was resorted.

    And as for abused children having a specific house...are all abused children full of cunning and guile? Why can't they be brave and chivalrous, or clever or all of the above to be sorted into other houses.

    And it defies belief that Severus Snape could be put in charge of abused children when he is quite happy to abuse any children (psychologically anyway) who are not in his house. He can feel empathy for Slytherins, but hatred for all the other kids in the school.

    But I sincerely hope that Harry and Malfoy aren't going to end up best friends and I just know Ron is now going to hate Harry for being a Slytherin.

    Curious to see where you're going though. You write well, BTW. Sorry for all the negativity.

    Author's Response:

    Haha, don't appologise for constructive criticism, I don't mind it at all!

    And let me say first, that I also hate sadistic Molly Weasley. It was done intentionally though, as a major part of the plot line that won't show up until a little later in the story.

    Also, I agree that abused children can have other qualities. No one can doubt that Harry is brave, and he was originallly sorted into Gryffindor, for example. However, many abused children are incredibly cunning and can misdirect people unbelieveably well. Otherwise, I can just say that's it is an AU story, and not everything will follow canon 100%. I do try, with my characterizations and such, though.

    As to Draco and Harry, and Ron's reaction, I can't really give anything away, but it will be coming soon!

    Thanks for reviewing! - August Sky

Title: Disillusioned 03 Jun 2008 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, just wow! Great story idea so far. The chapter was long, grim and perfect. Thanks so much for writing this, I can't wait to see where this will go. Mrs. Weasley was just horrible, worse then Umbridge. I hope there is a very good reason for her to be like that. Polyjuice or something?

    Author's Response: Haha. Thanks! There's certainly a reason, but I won't say just yet. Thanks for reviewing! - August Sky.

    Author's Response: Haha. Thanks! There's certainly a reason, but I won't say just yet. Thanks for reviewing! - August Sky.
Title: Disillusioned 02 Jun 2008 8:37 am
Reviewer: akblake (Signed) [Report This]
    *Very* intriguing. You have a promising start and I'm eager to find out what more you have in store for us!

    Author's Response: Thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Disillusioned 01 Jun 2008 11:29 am
Reviewer: LaToya_Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great start update soon what in the hell is going om with mrs weasly pls tell me she gets her just deserts

    Author's Response: Hmmm... Not so sure about just desserts, but you'll see when we get to that point. Thanks! - August Sky

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