Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 5 12 Jan 2009 2:05 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I read this when you updated and meant to go back and review, but forgot :-( Sorry. I do have to say that the scene with Harry's finger hovering in Snape's face was hilarious...and reminded exactly of something a bored eleven year old would do, waiting for his guardian to wake up. Nice job with that. I love that you devoted this chapter to the little "silly" things that go on. It's what makes a story realistic and the characterizations believable. :-) Nice job. I do so love this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!  I'm glad you liked it -- I thought it was important to show a bit of the silliness.  Harry and Severus are growing more comfortable with each other and letting their guards down a bit.  They're starting to *play* :)
Title: Chapter 5 06 Jan 2009 6:15 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww that was fantastic!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 5 03 Jan 2009 1:20 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you updated! :)
    I liked this chapter, especially Snape and Harry's conversation at breakfast. Emotions are hard to deal with for the both of them...

    Author's Response:

    Heh, yeah they're both stumbling around a bit emotionally, but they're getting there.  Slowly.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 5 02 Jan 2009 6:51 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, cute chapter! The whole bit with Harry considering poking Severus and Severus snapping at his finger was hilarious.

    I do feel so sorry for Harry, though, as he struggles to overcome the past and heal from the abuse he has suffered.

    Congratulations on your promotion!

    Author's Response:

    Hi Kristeh, thanks once again for reviewing!

    I wanted that bit in there to show that Harry *can* be just an average (wizard) boy, just given a good night's sleep and a sense of security.

    (Plus, I wanted to show Silly!Severus).

    Don't feel too badly for Harry.  He's got someone in his corner now!

Title: Chapter 5 02 Jan 2009 2:13 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh hell yeah! Seeing updates to your story is so exciting for me. I loved Harry thinking that Severus must dream about potions! Had me giggling.

    That whole exchange was just gorgeous, with Harry discovering Severus could be a little silly, and the attempt at poking him awake. And I like that all the cupboard stuff is out there, it would be nice if one day Harry felt he could confide in Snape a little about that stuff without being prompted or forced, it's sad that he's so nervous about it all. Can't wait to see more summer escapades from these two!

    On a side note, I'm glad real life is going well for you. Congratulations on the promotion! Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you're ready!

    Author's Response:

    Once again, the impetus for this chapter was the idea of Snape turning his head and snapping at Harry's finger.  It was a small moment, but it lightened things between them.

    While I do think Harry will confide all to Severus one day, but it will be a way off...like not in this story.  But it will happen.

    Thanks so much for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 5 02 Jan 2009 7:51 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow 2 months?! Anyway im glad life has allowed you some time to update! I love the first story and am loving this one too, I really love your Harry and Severus and how they are together, and I really really hope that life allows another update soon : )

    Author's Response:

    I know, right?  Time flies!  I hope life gives me time to update soon as well.  It's hard to describe without sounding crazy, but even when I'm not writing, the story is happening in my head.

    Thanks for reviewing!


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