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Reviews For Filling the Void
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it -- I thought it was important to show a bit of the silliness. Harry and Severus are growing more comfortable with each other and letting their guards down a bit. They're starting to *play* :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
I liked this chapter, especially Snape and Harry's conversation at breakfast. Emotions are hard to deal with for the both of them... Author's Response: Heh, yeah they're both stumbling around a bit emotionally, but they're getting there. Slowly. Thanks for reviewing!
I do feel so sorry for Harry, though, as he struggles to overcome the past and heal from the abuse he has suffered. Congratulations on your promotion! Author's Response: Hi Kristeh, thanks once again for reviewing! I wanted that bit in there to show that Harry *can* be just an average (wizard) boy, just given a good night's sleep and a sense of security. (Plus, I wanted to show Silly!Severus). Don't feel too badly for Harry. He's got someone in his corner now!
That whole exchange was just gorgeous, with Harry discovering Severus could be a little silly, and the attempt at poking him awake. And I like that all the cupboard stuff is out there, it would be nice if one day Harry felt he could confide in Snape a little about that stuff without being prompted or forced, it's sad that he's so nervous about it all. Can't wait to see more summer escapades from these two! On a side note, I'm glad real life is going well for you. Congratulations on the promotion! Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you're ready! Author's Response: Once again, the impetus for this chapter was the idea of Snape turning his head and snapping at Harry's finger. It was a small moment, but it lightened things between them. While I do think Harry will confide all to Severus one day, but it will be a way off...like not in this story. But it will happen. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Author's Response: I know, right? Time flies! I hope life gives me time to update soon as well. It's hard to describe without sounding crazy, but even when I'm not writing, the story is happening in my head. Thanks for reviewing! |
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