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Reviews For Filling the Void
Author's Response: Thanks! I think it's important to show that they're both changing, not just Harry.
Great angst. I can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Heh, no he didn't. I just love putting him in situations like that!
Author's Response: If there is anything I've learned in writing these stories is that making Harry vulnerable without appearing weak or weepy is HARD. Very, very hard. In some ways I cheated, because I made him so young -- vulnerability is easy to ascribe without appearing overdone. My hat's off to those who've managed it so well with an older Harry (aspeninthesunlight comes to mind). So thank you for the compliment and the review!
I'm sure there's going to be some discussion around the corner about that whole cupboard thing. And how they're going to move past Harry's little sleeping problem. One thing, if Severus did suspect that Harry had a concussion, I wouldn't have though he would have let Harry go to sleep quite so soon afterwards? I so love this story and even though this chapter was short, it was perfection. Can't wait for more. Best be off to finishing writing an essay. Sigh. Take care! Author's Response: My justification for the concussion thing is that Harry woke when he was moved to the sofa so all seemed well. Plus, off-scene Severus woke him a few times in the night. And yes, there will certainly be a discussion of the cupboard. Once Snape figures out how to approach the subject. He's a little out of his depth. Thanks for reviewing!
I hope you can find a little spare time to update soon! : ) Author's Response: It was sweet of him, and I wasn't aware that he was going to do it till I wrote it, heh. I had originally intended for him to try to put Harry to bed in his own room only to have Harry wake from a nightmare while Dumbledore was there. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: I know, I'm mean. But he does have Severus, so things are getting better!
Wonderful story so far. I absolutely adore "Reading the Signs" and am very glad you are writing a sequel. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy to BE writing a sequel because I couldn't quite let go of these two yet.
Author's Response: Heh, it's funny because when I started writing I was sure this chapter would be filler. Apparently not. Thanks for reviewing!
This chapter... is touching. Especially ending. Severus trying to not think and loosing. Wonderful. He will think and think and then he will ask Harry or he will just know by himself. I think it will be the second one, because he is smart and cunning and he understands a lot. I'm waiting impatiently for next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, I'm pleased you liked the chapter :) |
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