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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Safe 02 Jan 2010 5:49 pm
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for finally updating! You know, I was thinking that if I was Harry I might finally let loose and cry a bit during this talk - about 2 seconds before scrolling down to the part where Harry gets teary-eyed. Yay! He's finally opening up a bit! *Huge grin!!!* Let's move this along a bit more and actually have them connect all the way, no more of this stalling stuff with Harry still reverting back to 'unfeeling cranky hates everything that comes out of Snape's mouth' mode.

    Please update sooner this time, if you can manage it; I know how writer's block goes, but just hang in there! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I can't promise that Harry won't backslide a little - he dictates his moods to me, I just write them. It's frustrating, but I think it's more realistic that way. This sort of thing is frustrating to deal with, and I refuse to do it the disrespect of writing it too easy. That said, I think we are finally making some real progress. The next update should be out in roughly 2 weeks, and Outcast's Alley should update in a week or so. Thanks again for the review! Glad you liked! :0)
Title: Safe 02 Jan 2010 2:10 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh poor Harry, a crack in his tough shell, it can only be good for him and for Severus, lets hope he can get inside it and help Harry deal with his issues :D

    Author's Response: Yeah, this wasn't an easy chapter for either of them, I think. (Or for me!) But hopefully it's good progress. Anyway, thanks for the review!! And happy new year!! Rhiannan
Title: Safe 02 Jan 2010 3:15 am
Reviewer: lostit02 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lol, enjoying

    Author's Response: yey! :0)
Title: Safe 01 Jan 2010 6:21 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wonderful chapter

    Author's Response: Yey! Glad you like! And happy new year! Rhiannan
Title: Safe 01 Jan 2010 6:33 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I was so happy to see that you updated! It was very angsty/sad, but loveable!

    Author's Response: :0) Glad you liked! Yeah this chapter was kinda tough to write, but I pretty much like how it turned out. Thanks for the review, and happy new year! Rhiannan
Title: Safe 01 Jan 2010 6:31 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Safe 01 Jan 2010 3:17 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    again (if u read my email), i must emphasise that i never would have guessed 'you' are 'you'.

    'Carebears' (carebear countdown, 5, 4, 3, 2, !) i used to love that show! I wonder who many ppl actually know what they are.

    Nice chapter.

    Author's Response: LOL yeah, sneaky sneaky, right? I never actually watched a lot of Carebears, but was always aware of their existence. LOL 90s kids. Anyway, glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reviewing, and happy new year! Rhiannan
Title: Safe 01 Jan 2010 2:36 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus is beginning to break through Harry's resistance. Harry wants to be loved, but doesn't yet know how to accept it, which complicates things, but in time I'm sure that Severus will prevail.

    Author's Response: :0) Glad you liked :0) Thanks for the review, and happy new year! Rhiannan
Title: Safe 01 Jan 2010 2:28 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for an update!

    Aww, Harry at the end made me so ad. Poor boy. He just doesn't know!

    Sniff. Good chapter! I'm already looking forward to the next update! :-)

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you liked!! Yeah, this chapter was kinda tough to write. I had to stop a couple of times 'cause it was depressing me. Anyway, the next update should be up in about two weeks, and the update for Outcast's Alley in about 1 week. Thanks for the review! Rhiannan
Title: Safe 01 Jan 2010 2:06 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Every chapter just keeps getting better. They all deserve a 10. You've been so fabulously patient with getting Severus and Harry to where they are now. Blaise and Theo are great choices for friends. Blaise's cool logic is a great match for Harry's confused Fire and Ice attitude while Theo lightens up everyone.

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like so much!! I like your descriptions of Blaise, Harry, and Theo. I hadn't really thought about it that way, but that's a very eloquent way of putting their relationships. :0) Thanks for the review! Rhiannan

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