Yeah, take that you prejudiced hypocrites! I liked the tranquil tone of this beautiful, beautiful story. Only that last bit at the end about the Potter family seemed a little out of place, could've gone without it. Other than that it's a lovely piece of reading. I'm giving you thumbs-up and a lot of chocolate frogs!
That was cute! Love the headline ;-)
I honestly wanted to see more of their life in New Zealand. This really was a great fic, and the thought of Snape taking Harry away from the 'destiny' that Dumbledore had lined up for him, even if he didn't have his magic, was enchanting. I loved that Hermione was smart enough to see how the situation was going to go down, and left. Too bad for the Weasleys.
Great job.
Oh goodness, that was lovely! I really liked the letter Harry left to Hermione because it sounded like something a child would write. I also loved the scene where Harry is hiding in Severus' cloak and Severus says he is his. Finally, I really loved Alice and her 'because it's fun!' explanation, lol. Very cute story.
-P.G.
You've done a fantastic job here! I'm so glad that Severus took Harry with him and accepted him as his own...I felt so badly for Harry at the beginning with everyone hating him for no reason. He's such a sweet kid...he deserves to be happy and I'm glad he and Severus found one another (and Hermione, too).
A very creative AU idea and you wrote it very well!
Title: Running Away
| 06 May 2009 4:01 pm
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Reviewer: joe jo (Anonymous)
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Hi! I really liked this fanfic. So far, I liked it the best of the fest stories. Mila
so in the end Harry did have magic but was just afraid to use it right? that's the one part that confused me a bit. also was it Severus that obliviated everyone?? XD
Love it. I love such a happy ending. What a new and interesting ending to the story. I am worried about Ron and his family, however.
Well done. Thanks so much for participating!
That was great! I love the idea that Severus and Harry run away and have a happy life away from Britain. Can't help but feel a little bad for everyone after that last chapter, but I guess they deserved it in this story. Those letters were horrible! Thanks for the great story!
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