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Reviews For Letting Go
Title: A Proper Introduction 26 Nov 2009 9:38 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I'm so glad that Harry is getting his potion, and Snape and him are finally breaking the ice.

    Nice chappie, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Draco and Harry become friends, and how will Snape and Harry's relationship progress.
Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare 21 Nov 2009 3:54 am
Reviewer: helga1967 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting tale.
Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare 16 Nov 2009 3:15 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Um...the end? really? may I assume there will be a sequel? it seems like a rather random story if there isnt one, it was more like a good start to a story rather than a complete one :)
Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare 11 Nov 2009 9:57 am
Reviewer: Lady Rosewolf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was so good... but it would be much better if you continued!!! Pls write more!!
Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare 10 Nov 2009 2:49 am
Reviewer: Jenny70503 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this!! So angsty, so intense. Perfect!!!
Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare 10 Nov 2009 2:27 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a good story. A sequel to it would make a lot of readers very happy. There are loose ends to clear up and father and son need to get to know one another.
Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare 09 Nov 2009 9:13 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeesh. *blinks back tears as the story tugs on heart-strings* Great story.
Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare 09 Nov 2009 3:41 pm
Reviewer: AJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story so much! It's well written and most of all, the description of the workings of each characeter's mind is astonishing!
    Please please pleeeease do a sequel!!!

    Author's Response: No sequel, but I will be adding more chapters to this story.
Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare 09 Nov 2009 9:07 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Quite an angsty chapter! It felt very good to finally have Harry spill his guts figuratively (after he spilled them literally) to Snape. It does seem rather an abrupt ending, though. If you wish to end the story here because your title seems to be the endpoint, that's fine. But the story does feel like you've stopped it where it feels like it should be taking off. Might I suggest a sequel? Think about it first, of course. Now that Harry has connected to his father, and Severus has discovered he has a son, a whole new world lies before them both. Whatever you decide as writer, it's up to you.

    One correction, offered with respect. In the paragraph beginning: "My whole life, has been a wasted lie," Harry finally managed to choke out, confusing Severus even more. What was he on about? Now that Harry was there sitting in his office crying, a CHORD was struck in him..." The saying is a musical analogy, like an important harmony being heard for the first time.

    Anyway, thanks for all your hard work. Good story.

    Author's Response: Yes, the musical analogy was what I was going for, but it was very late when I was writing and was apparently too tired to spell anything right.  Thanks for the help though.
Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare 09 Nov 2009 3:02 am
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my God, you wrote this in ONE NIGHT??? Are you nuts? You must be. In a good way though. ;) This story is so good! I love angst and drama, and this one is just chock full of it! Please please do continue, I can't wait to see when you update!

    A point of critique now, I somehow don't think that Severus would come to quite an accepting stance quite that quickly. But if you continue with it, I'm sure you could put in enough problems and head-buttings to compensate. Still though, that last spoken line of Snape's just didn't seem to flow with canon. Maybe if it had been thought and he said something simpler....Not sure what though. Simple yet elegant for this spot. I don't know, that line just seems too cheesy for me in context with the rest of the story so far for someone such as Snape to have said to Harry.

    Just my two cents, I'll be checking back frequently to see if you've updated. :D

    Author's Response:

    I have decided to continue, but the next chapter may be a few days in comming.  As for Severus accepting Harry so quickly, I thought it should be like that because Harry showed him all of his emotions in his mind as well as what had actually happened.  It was like an immediate understanding for Severus of Harry's inner-workings, and once Severus knew that he was his son, he really felt bad and wanted to help him.  This will be explained a little more in the comming chapters.  Already Severus has begun using that special tone with Harry that was previously only reserved for Lily, and has found himself in a place where he is seeing Harry as part of Lily rather than all James Potter, so I felt it was easy for him to make the transition after the thought/emotion sharing to Harry being a son that he wanted to help.

     

    Thanks for the review!


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