I am thoroughly intrigued. Update soon, I can't wait to see where you go with this!
| Title: False Peace
| 03 Mar 2010 11:08 pm
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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OMG I like where the story is goin,I am just waiting for something to happen!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
wow i really liked thelast two chapters. thanks for explaning the broom thing to me. im glad they fixed the garden. i wonder what snapes reaction will be when he finds out that harry and draco are not his harry and draco. keep up the good work and please update asap.
| Title: False Peace
| 01 Mar 2010 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I wish we could have a little backdating on why Severus has adopted them in this world but I suppose we must be patient! Great chapter thank you I loved Dobby beating Harry at chess!
This is really interesting, quite a unique way to bring Harry and Draco together. I enjoyed this immensely. Looking forward for the next chapter. ;)
I hope everything will end well for them, especially Harry. It will be very hurtful and shocking if he is to be taken into real world after experiencing a better life.
Thank you for the story. ;)
I'm glad that the boys did fix the garden. I wonder how different Harry's friends will be in this universe? Severus certainly seemed surprised that he wanted to invite them.
Great chapter!
| Title: False Peace
| 01 Mar 2010 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Glad they fixed his garden. When will snape find out, or will he, I like them here, like harry said, food and comfort, what any child should have. Great chapter.
Oh goodie, another quick update! :D Hmm, not much happening in the way of action in this chapter - but alas, we cannot have that all the time, now can we? Otherwise the time would just fly by and we'd get caught up in the maelstrom of movement!
I'm very glad Draco and Harry are finally starting to realize that working together is always better than working against each other. Boys! *sigh* Hopefully this truce is a breakthrough that will lead to some more trust-building.
I wonder if the birthday party and Harry's not having had one - ever - will come up in a conversation with Draco in which they finally discover that neither of them lead the lives they thought? (Wow, that's a kinda long and confusing sentence) I was thinking when I read that part, that that might be a jumping off point for a heart-to-heart between the two. If you're planning that type of conversation, that is (which I would assume you are at some point).
Anyway, your tenses are much better! There may have been one or two in there, but if there were, I couldn't go back and pick them out now. Obviously they didn't hinder me that much then! :) Now, if only the chapters were a little longer...*puppy dog eyes* Lol, I live for long chapters, but yours are pretty long compared to the average, so you're doing good in that respect. Although if you'd ever desire to make them longer, I'd be the first to open the door.
I'll send you a pm about the possibility of betaing.
Keep 'em rollin'!
| Title: False Peace
| 01 Mar 2010 6:11 am
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| Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous)
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This is such an interesting story! I felt so sorry for Severus and his garden, I'm glad the boys decided to fix it. Thanks! I'm looking forward to read more of this story
Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying this story. It's so original and very well-written. I love that the Room brought both boys to this alternate world where they have what they truly need: a loving family and a true home.
But of course it is so awkward for them now, and neither really knows how to react, especially Harry with this Severus being a kind and concerned guardian. I imagine that it is going to be very hard for him in particular to go back and face a Severus who despises him. I hope that it will be the catalyst for some big changes in their 'real' world though.
I'm glad that Draco went to help with repairing the garden and that Severus is noticing that something's not quite right with the boys.
Looking forward to more!
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