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Title: Only Half 29 May 2010 3:23 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Draco, Draco, Draco... What are we going to do with you? Wow this was a happy chapter. It made me warm and fuzzy inside. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Title: Only Half 25 May 2010 12:24 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    ou have brought the character of both boys in their world to life here.
Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 9:31 pm
Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah!!!!! Amazing! I loved it. There's not much constructive criticism I can give on this one. I really liked it.

    Draco can be blind, can't he?

    Good work, and get working on the next chapter! Please?

    Zabby

    Author's Response:

    Zabby,

    Thank you!! :) I loved your praise. Draco is a little blinded at the moment, yes :P. I have already submitted chapter nine to my beta and the chapter after this one is ready to be submitted, however the story will be over too fast if I updated too quickly. But I will update again very soon! Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 8:56 pm
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey Mel, not sure what happened, but you may want to double check on the editing stuff I did. Something weird's going on...I think that for some reason many of the things that I suggested to be deleted, plus typos/misspellings/etc. are still there. I don't think this was intended, but you may want to check, you probably know better than I what went on. Maybe something happened in the upload?

    Anyway, as usual, the story and plotline are coming along great, and I can't wait for Draco to come 'round! I want to see some Draco/Harry/Severus bonding all happening together soon! *hint hint* ;)

    Keep it up!
    ForEll

    Author's Response:

    ForEll,

    Yeah, it's been a while since I applied the beta'ing to my copy, therefore I forgot how I did it, cmparing and editing etc. Got is straight now, so all the others will be fine. And no, it wasn't intended! Although the upload was being difficult.

    Draco is a little slower in the matter than Harry, based on the fact that Harry knows what it's like to be lacking a family he never had a chance with. Draco has his parents, so in a way he's not entirely connection the dots...yet. There will be more bonding soon! Haha. Thanks for everything.

    -Mel :)

Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Thanks for the update!
Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 6:10 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oops! I'm sorry, I got the name of the other story that I love form you, mixed up with another author's !

    "Always a Snape" That's the other one that is my favourite from you. are you going to update that one soon?

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Yeah that's fine, hehe. I am going to update it soon, yes. I know it's been a while and have been trying to write it but I think because it's so short it seems to different to my other fics. I'm planning on making the chapters longer as a result. Should be updating quite soon, although no later than a week or so.

    -Mel :)

Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 1:52 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story! Although I'm loving seeing Harry and Draco get the father that they deserve, I'm so anxious for them to return to their other world, because I have a feeling that this is going to be really funny when they try to warm up the "other" Snape! I just can't wait to see the other Snape, if Harry and Draco were to call HIM Dad!

    You write such wonderful stories, and so many of them AND you update so quickly! I'm so impressed.

    I can't even update two stories very quickly.

    I think that this story, and "A Boy Who..." are my favourites, although I love ALL your stories.

    Great work!

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Thanks! Thrilled to hear it, and I love your reviews. You're the first one I'm aware of that is actually looking forward to when they leave this semi-perfect world, which is a relief, hopefully not everyone will hate me when they do leave, lol. And yes, I have something funny/interesting etc planned for when they do return. I think you'll quite enjoy it, hehe. Although the point of this series is that first they are shown the world they could have then realize they want it and then strive to get it, hense the parts.

    You're impressed? Thanks! It's mostly because I can write so easily and quickly, I am actually working on more than I have uploaded. I only upload those I don't get stuck in. Once I get others more along, you'll see them up here too! Thanks!

    -Mel :)

Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 11:48 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Thats is sad for Draco Hopefully he will get it.
Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 11:07 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that Harry is going to have to spell it out to Draco. Severus and his boys shared a powerful bond of love and happiness and the portrait represents it. Severus and his children are real family and that's what this Draco isn't seeing. Severus felt like he had lost his family, because the Harry and Draco he was seeing over the last few days weren't the boys he knew and loved. It was breaking his heart. Now that he has noticed it, Harry is trying to rectify that wrong and he will need Draco's help to do so.

    Author's Response:

    silverstargirl,

    Yes, Draco is going to need a little help to see the full picture here. I like your description of their family and bond, it's right on, you're entirely correct! :) Thanks for the great review!

    -Mel :)


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