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Reviews For Through a Glass, Darkly
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Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update today (after a few final editing touches), so stay tuned!
I don't think I've reviewed this chapter yet... Anyway: Much better. No eleven-year-olds' essays, thank Minerva. A tad short; I'd have liked to have seen more of Severus' thoughts, as well. And I'd definitely like to see more hints of Harry's home life - I'm interested to see your take on the abuse; everyone has such differing ideas, it's hard to gauge what 'Abusive Dursleys' on the warnings list for a story actually /means/. Also, I've got the idea that I'm bringing down the fic's number of chocolate frogs. I'll apologise for that now; it's not that I dislike the story (no matter what I say in reviews or ratings), but I don't sugar-coat, and I'm rather sure I've never rated an amateur literary work as 10/10. There might be two or three professional works. But in any case, don't be put off by it. A seven is as close to praise as I'm likely to give. ~Lakhesis Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you approve ;). Chapters will get longer as the story progresses, and you'll learn about Harry's home life and the Dursleys in due time. Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: Let me say this, Snape's going to have his hands full... thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: Hey :)! Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Author's Response: Next chapter should be up tomorrow :)!
Author's Response: Glad you like it, thank you for sharing your thoughts!
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