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Reviews For Catch Me if You Can
I like that Harry for once actually realizes how qualified Severus actually is and that he aknowledges it in a way too, and I like that Snape picks up on the attitude, he truly is not one that does well with attitude :) I like the plot so far, Sev making sure that they get out of Hogwarts safely and doublechecking with Malfoy, though I really dislike that man, and Sev obviously does as well. Great idea to have Sev play him like this. The only thing I was missing here was the interaction between Sev and Harry, but honestly, if I would have to find a spot for them to "interact" more, I wouldn't know where to put it, so I guess you did a great job, again. Can't wait for the next one, now that I stuck to my side of the deal :)
First: I really like this idea, I always wondered while reading the books how Snape could willingly let dumbledore play with Harry's life so if he truly only ever wanted to protect him, so him taking matters into his own hands seems very promising. Second: Harry having this need to stay in the commonroom without any reason does incline that there is some connection both are unaware of and maybe even will stay so, but him being open and willing to listen to Severus, who truly has never sugarcoated anything for him, is totally in character. I'm going to skim over the next one and then review that as well and then I won't be able to wait for the third :) The only thing i was missing is Snape's normal illthinking of the boy, at least in regard to his father, there was no sneer, not anything that reminded me in some extent to the vile professor he always tried so hard to portray, but still great chapter!
Author's Response: I am truly honored that you wrote that :) Thank you so much!
I'm interested to see how you will develop the story.
Will they be on the road for a long time? Years? Are they gonna move from place to place, change their names and all that? Love it.
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