😁 At first I sympathized with Severus, since I've had to grade students' essays and know what a grind that can be. But then I began to sympathize with the maddening aspect of the relentless Ding Dong refrain that plagued him -- I've had certain songs that kept playing in my mind (tho' thankfully not while grading essays!). But in the end I kept laughing aloud as oddments popped into Sev's thoughts, no matter what he was doing. And Harry's comment to Charity about his Daddy trying to w-- w-- the book (trying not to include spoilers, coz it was too precious!!!) absolutely brought the house down! Thank you SOOOOO much for a story full of joy and laughter -- I really needed that today!!!
Title: Chapter 1
| 21 Jul 2017 9:33 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely story
Author's Response: thank you for your pleasant review Fmh ;)
Brilliant! Can't pick out which bit I liked best, but I think I'm going to be smiling all day. Probably humming Ding, dong... to myself as well.
Author's Response: Thank you ;) I'm glad I made you happy, one smile a day makes my day and what's better than making others smile and hum catchy rhymes?
Oh, naw, I like seeing what new stories you cook up! It's rather inspiring to find a person who is this enthusiastic about writing. I love writing, but I don't think I've ever written as much as you have in this short amount of time. I kinda envy your motivation. Embrace it. Poor Severus. The Junior staff member is always the easiest so mess with. I loved that he made his class write a compliment letter to the author! I laughter out loud. Thanks for the entertainment! (~.^)
Author's Response: Thanks ;) it really is nice to know that you like my writing style, and my mind is a messed up place full of bunny plots waiting to morph into giant stories! I merely give them some room to grow on me before writing them and I embrace them with open arms. Totally agree about the junior staff, I've seen if happen many times :-*
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