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HBP Alternative Universe. Harry acquires a surprising new ally as he struggles to overcome his grief and accept the burden of the Prophecy.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death
Chapters: 31 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jun 2008 / 01 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 15 Dec 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Interesting conversation between the two. Severus' apologizing was a surprise. As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you, Teddy!

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 28 Dec 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Finally a new chapter - yeah!

    Dumbledore's lesson was just the right length. Sometimes, scenes (in other stories) are too close to the book and become really boring then. Here, you efficiently managed to avoid that :-)

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter - obviously the three are in for trouble?!

    Greetings :-)
    teddy

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!  Yes, that's kind of what I was thinking about the Dumbledore scene.  As for the trio being in for trouble?  What makes you think that?  *whistles innocently* 

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 30 Dec 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    That was really a fast chapter *wow*
    And a great chapter as well...
    Your cliffie... well, I'm sure you will let Sev and Dumbledore heal him - otherwise you should add 'character's death' to your warnings *smiles*
    Anyway, thanks for the quick update, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter :-)

    Author's Response: Aw, but Teddy, there is a 'character death' warning for my story!  Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 06 Jan 2008
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Another great chapter! I liked how worried Severus was about Harry. The part of defending himself because of putting Harry in his own bed was great as well as Severus apologizing to Harry's friends.
    Looking forward to the next chapter - interaction between Severus and Harry!
    Greetings :-)
    teddy

Harry and Severus struggle to come to terms with their painful history. A glimpse of an AU of HBP.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Sep 2007 / 27 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 28 Sep 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Although I'm really waiting for your update on your other story... *smile*, I must admit that this one is a very cute short story - just as I like the relationship between Harry and Severus. Thanks for sharing it with us :-)

    Author's Response:

    Hi, teddy!  Thank you!  I hope to get chapter 7 of "Potions Professor" up sometime this weekend.  I'm glad you liked this one, too.  It's sort of a look at where Harry and Severus are headed, and I had such a good time writing it.

    Btw, I'd love to see more of your story, too! 


Abandoned on the streets, then placed in an orphanage, and finally adopted by a loving woman. Things are finally getting better for young Harry… or are they?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Aug 2008 / 18 Oct 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 26 Oct 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Oh, poor Harry. But nevertheless it's a very cute chapter - thanks for sharing it. I hope someone will rescue Harry soon :-)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review and Harry will in fact be rescued soon!


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 23 Nov 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    I liked Snape coming out in this chapter and I'm looking forward to seeing him more in the (hopefully near) future :-)
    A great chapter as usual - thanks for sharing it with us :-)

    Author's Response: Snape will show up again soon in a couple more chapters. Thank you for the review!

The first Christmas after Voldemort's defeat is a time for both joy and sorrow.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Fic Fests > #5 Winter, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Nov 2007 / 23 Nov 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 23 Nov 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    A great story, sad, but very well written - thanks for sharing it :-)
    Greetings
    teddy

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!

Just a Christmas fic. Open it up. Oh ya, for the Fic Fest.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #5 Winter, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Nov 2007 / 24 Nov 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Snowball Challenge, Christmas
Title: Chapter 1: An unexpected, but not unwanted, guest... 19 Dec 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    A funny story, I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for sharing it with us :-)

What if Lily and James survived the confrontation with Voldemort yet still gave Harry to the Dursleys? What if Harry was adopted after only 9 months on Privet Drive? Alternate Universe and OOC. Severus adopts Harry.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 May 2009 / 27 Nov 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Villa Principessa 27 Nov 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    A very interesting beginning, and quite unique! I'm looking forward to see how the story will develop :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think it's unique....I do worry that it can seem rather like the many other Severus/Harry fics that are out there - many of which are much better that I could ever hope to write!


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