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Harry is eight years old and is sent to live with Snape. Will Snape ever lighten up enough to notice Harry's problems? Abused!Harry, Guardian!Severus, No slash.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Aug 2009 / 20 Aug 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen 21 May 2008
Reviewer: Elizabeth Starchild (Signed)
    I love this story! I love how you switch the perspective back and forth between Harry and Snape. And the way you capture their thoughts is just beautiful. Thank you!!

Sequel to A Time and Place to Grow - After spending a summer with Snape, Harry begins his sixth year at Hogwarts. But Snape is keeping an eye and a firm hand on him, and a new teacher, split loyalties and a looming fight with the Dark Lord await Harry.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 May 2010 / 02 Apr 2007
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Finally Telling 27 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Elizabeth Starchild (Signed)
    I was so excited to see that you had written another chapter! Thank you!!! I loved A Time and Place to Grow, and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Bonded 08 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Elizabeth Starchild (Signed)
    Well, first of all, thank you for taking some time away from writing your thesis to write another chapter! It gave me a nice break from writing my own thesis! :) This is one of my favorite chapters yet. I love this story. You used a couple of literary devices here that I really liked. I liked how the chapter started out in the middle of the *action* and then went back to the beginning. And I liked the subtle use of foreshadowing throughout. Your writing was good to begin with, but I think it is getting even better with time!

Harry is 7 years old and treated literally like a dog by the Dursleys. Will he be rescued by the wizarding world? Will he ever be fit to take on the mantle of The Boy Who Lived? Now Complete!

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Sep 2007 / 18 Jul 2007
Series: A Boy Called Whelp - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 08 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Elizabeth Starchild (Signed)
    I really liked how you stayed true to the personalities of the characters. Thanks for an excellent read!

After Snape's visit to Surrey, Harry writes a thank-you letter that triggers an extended correspondence and a tentative friendship between the two of them.



Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Age Difference Romance, Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Sep 2009 / 25 Aug 2007
Series: Chivalry - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Upon Receipt 19 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Elizabeth Starchild (Signed)
    This story is incredible. Thank you for writing it! The way that you've been developing the relationship between Harry and Snape is very realistic. Please update again soon! :) I can't wait to find out what Snape's going to do to Etching and Greenleaf.

    Author's Response: You probably won't see much of Etching and Greenleaf after this, just know that they're in for several weeks of scrubbing dungeon classroom floors  with toothbrushes.

Very AU story of what might have happened had Minerva put her foot down when Albus decided to leave Harry with the Dursleys. Five years later, Harry lives at Hogwarts with his Nana Minerva and two (yes, two!) godfathers: Sirius and Severus.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Sep 2008 / 23 Sep 2008
Series: Encounter With... - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Encounter with a Squid 25 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Elizabeth Starchild (Signed)
    I loved this story. It was very well-written. I hope you write more like it!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'll post a prequel next - let me know if you'd like more with Harry too.

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