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What's in a name? The-boy-who-lived, prophesied defeater of the Dark Lord, son of the supremely intelligent Lily Evans and talented James Potter, Golden boy of Gryffindor, part-time punching bag and house elf of the Dursleys and the bane of Severus Snape's teaching career, Harry's used to labels. Who would want Harry when they can see instead whoever they like instead? Having never been entirely sure who he is makes him a little too open to suggestion though and unfortunately for him, Umbridge wants to banish his old list of names and create a new one of her own.
Beneath the names others have branded him with will anyone be able to find Harry?

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 16 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Sep 2010 / 10 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 17 Jan 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    My favourite part of the chapter was teh description of Severus grinning as he realised that he was finally free of his spying duties. I just have to say that however long it takes you to write and post this is one of the most compelling and powerful HPSS gen fics I've ever read. I thought I loathed Umbridge before but I REALLY hate her in this fic. You've exposed all the sadism that was hiding under her fake smiles and make her into an utter [expletive deleted] villain. I can hardly wait to see Severus confront and conquer her. He is going to do that, isn't he? Eventually?

    Author's Response:

    Oh I’m so glad you mentioned that! Thanks!  That’s one of my favourite moments too, I do so love the giddiness of discovering freedom and it’s fun to write too ^^ Oh *gives you hugs and cookies and muffins* thank you so much!  That’s such a hugely flattering, sweet thing to say and I’m kind of overcome by it, thank you!!!  And I’m glad you don’t like Umbridge... there’d be something wrong if you did ^^ and oh don’t delete your expletives... she’s all of them and deserves worse so I wouldn’t worry about offending anyone... we’re all thinking worse ^^ - and Sev will get a chance here or there to have his vengeance for Harry, though it’s unlikely Harry will get his own opportunity to – you never know but he might still be a bit too down to do anything while she’s still around.  Thanks so much!  Points and muffins and cookies, oh my!


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 20 Apr 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    I'm late sending this (mea culpa) but my favourite mokment was: Snape smiled, then laughed at the hilarity of it all. Despite his less than perfect state, Severus was in a rather good mood. A rather great mood. 'He was free. Completely and wholly his own man once more, free to do what he wanted – to an extent – and free to stay away from a man who frequently took out his frustrations on him in the form of rather painful magic. He was free.'

    I can just see that little hint of a smile on his face and the relief that his spying days were over. Of course, now he's going to have another difficult job to do...bringing Harry back and helping him heal.

    I still don't understand why Poppy didn't see anything wrong when she scanned Harry, unless Umbrage used an imperious or something to instruct her to report that everything was fine regardless of what hte scans actually said. Poppy is too good of a Healer to be so unobservant.

    I really want to see Severus go after Umbridge eventually. I hope you will oblige us, as I'm sure I'm not hte only person who feels that way.

    An excellent chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  And I’m so glad you liked that moment of Sev’s freedom, I wasn’t sure when writing it if he would be so openly happy but I think anyone would be if they suddenly found themselves free like that (especially when he didn’t expect to come out of it alive). Poor Sev, at least I gave him about five minutes of happiness before I ruined his night... again... I’m so very cruel to my characters (ignore that pesky disclaimer, they’re totally mine ^^) – I’ll have to make it up to them ^^

    And when it comes to Poppy, well, don’t blame her for that... it wasn’t Umbridge’s influence or her own negligence, just another case of people’s best intentions and *whispers* it might have had something to do with Dumbledore...

    Umbridge will get hers and I’ll strive to make it as satisfying for all involved as I possibly can (I think it’s more a case of narrowing down the many gruesome options ^^).

    Thanks!!!


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 20 Apr 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Oh, my goodness! I knew thatthings were bad, but I hadn't been aware that the blood quill had done quite that much damage! Like Snape, I am hoping very hard that Harry's mind and psyche can recover from this. I'm not silly enough to believe he won't have mental scars when all is said and done.

    Hmmm, my favourite moment between Harry and Severus in this whole fic. Honestly, even though Harry's unconcious, it the last paragraph of this chapter, especially the last line: 'And if his hand stroked through Harry’s hair and cradled Harry’s head in his large palm for longer than necessary, well, that was completely accidental.' That sentence says SO very much about the change in the relationship between the Head of Slytherin and the Gryffindor.

    Sorry, I can't help you with the pic posting problem (oops! sorry about all the alliteration), I've never tried postign a photo into the story notes before.

    Don't worry about the length of time it takes to post. The quality of your writing is well worth waiting for and I'd much rather wait longer for a chapter that is well done than get a mediocre chapter that shows up immediately. You're writing a very powerful story here and the time you take to "get it write" (as my English Composition professor used to say) shows in the finished product.

    I'm glad to hear that you love university and hope you have wonderful professors throughout getting your degree. If you don't mind me asking, what are you reading? I'm reading Classics and Literature for my Bachelor of Liberal Arts degree.

    BTW, I'm a Slytherin alumnus, when it comes to awarding points.

    Bravissimi!

    Author's Response:

    Hello again! ^^ yes, I think I may have gone a tad overboard in hindsight (what a wonderful thing it is), but like I said in my story notes, I’m just so fascinated by the blood quill and the things it could be developed to do (one of my more morbid fascinations I guess ^^) – I think it’s really quite amazing what a person can recover from, and Harry will have a fair bit of support, I wouldn’t worry too much ^^.  Thank you!!!  I’m thrilled that you liked that part so much; especially given the fact that you seem to have this knack for saying your favourite moments are the ones I worry most about including ^^  thank you!  Very glad you like some protective Sev too.

    And nevermind about the pic, I’m going to try making it smaller and seeing if that works and if not, well, there’s a link there still, at the very least people will still get to see Fab’s gorgeous pic (I giggle madly with happiness whenever I do ^^)

    “Get it write” – I like that ^^  Your composition prof sounds great ^^ - and hopefully I can get cleanly written chapters out faster over the next few weeks, though that I have one person reading who understands how time consuming uni can get is comforting ^^ (the wait I’ve put people through really has been ridiculous, no doubt half the people reviewing this fic do so to prompt me to update faster because they know how long it’ll be otherwise ^^) – hehe as much as I wish I was reading Classics and Literature and completing a degree in something to further my writing I would only be doing it because I want to, not to get any particular job or begin a career in it (Liberal Arts sounds interesting though, what do you learn about?), I’m actually not reading anything for my course right now (and a few weeks ago I was reading about iconoclasm in the Renaissance) for my Bachelor of Design (Visual Communication).  It’s really interesting and despite feeling like I have no talent in it I’m getting decent marks... it’s something I feel like I could do for money day in day out you know?  As opposed to writing which I studied last year and found is to spare of the moment for me to want to do for a living.  Now if I won the lottery... ^^

    Thanks so much for such lovely (confidence-building) reviews, I hope you continue to like this little fic of mine ^^  and good luck with uni! ^^   


Harry comes to school missing one eye, and pratically mute. He is sorted into Slytherin. Severus Snape dislikes all things Potter. Can he get over his hatred to see the truth?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 May 2010 / 11 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: More Than Meets the Eye
Title: Chapter 11: Flight Through the Castle 28 Feb 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    I'm supposing it's a portrait of Salazar Slytherin. Excellent chapter!

    Author's Response: You'll find out. Glad you liked the chapter, TftR.

(UPDATED: APR 02 2011) Snape wakes up from a coma to a new world in which Voldemort is dead and gone, defeated by Harry Potter. Deciding he has nothing more to live for, he tries to end his life, but things don't quite work out the way he planned. Harry gets pulled in by Dumbledore to assist with Snape's...little dilemma.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Aug 2010 / 11 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 33: The Bigger (W)itch 19 Jan 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    This was the best chapter yet! I just can't stop smiling. Thank you for that.

Title: Chapter 36: The Reason 02 Feb 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    The adoption! Now that Harry is going to be OK, he feels that he can make the guardianship permanent! Oh, this was a great chapter! And I absolutely loved the reference to House M.D.

    Hee! You've made my day!

Title: Chapter 36: The Reason 02 Feb 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    The adoption! Now that Harry is going to be OK, he feels that he can make the guardianship permanent! Oh, this was a great chapter! And I absolutely loved the reference to House M.D.

    Hee! You've made my day!

Title: Chapter 37: Approaching Storm 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Geeat chapter and worth the wait. I sympathize with you about coding in LaTeX. I'm doing a lot of stuff for a professor in our math department using it. I'm so glad that you can post your fics here in a much simpler way. I'm looking forward to the next chapter whenever you have time to work on it.

Title: Chapter 39: All I (Really) Want for Christmas... 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    I loved the chapter but I think you meant to use the words "goes through" in regards to the adoption occurring, rather than "fall through". If the adoption falls through, then Harry and Ginny will lose Severus. If it goes through or comes through he'll be their son forever.

    Using the verses of the Christmas song to separate the little vignettes worked very well and I could just see everything in my minds eye as I read. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Hello!

    Thanks a lot for the review! And thanks a lot for pointing that out! :-) That is indeed what I meant. I just didn't realize that's what that phrase meant. I thought the two were synonymous. But hey! You learn something new every day! ;-P I changed it the moment I read your review. Thanks again and the next chapter should be up within a few days. :-)

    Winger


Title: Chapter 41: On Top of the World 12 May 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    This was an absolutely wonderfully done chapter. I wantto rip Malfoy's head off, of course. I just know that the wretch will get his in the end. Karma won't leave things that unbalanced for very long. Congrats on finishing up your classes and on graduating!


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