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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 24 Dec 2008
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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You definitely have to write a sequel. How would Dumbledore react? The same with Ron, the Slytherins, and the Death Eaters that managed to avoid Azkaban. How would they react? Not to mention how this "path not taken" will effect the second war. This could be easily become an interesting series covering the rest of Harry's time at Hogwarts and the second war against Voldemort.
Title: Chapter 7: School and Insecurities
| 04 Feb 2009
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Good story. I remember, there's a story called "Bonds of Betrayal" where Harry and Draco meet at a young age. Severus wasn't Harry's guardian. McGonagall was but Severus nice to Harry and was hoping Harry would be a good influence on Draco since Draco would spend the day at Hogwarts every now and then. Like your story, "Bonds of Betrayal" dealt with Harry being rescued from an abusive situation when he was a small. In "Bonds of Betrayal", Harry continued to have relapses even when he was 13. He was friends with both Draco and Ron but Draco and Ron didn't get along with each other. If you want Harry to team up with Fred and George, it would be interesting to see how them and Draco would interact. Also, about Harry spending time at the Malfoys with kids who are from families that don't have a favorable opinion of muggles... I think Dumbledore would be concerned about that as well as the therapist. There's a chance that kind of ideology might rub off on him and given his expireance with muggles, its a disaster waiting to happen. I think if Severus wants Harry not to be predjadice again muggles and muggle borns, he needs to be exposed more to the muggle world. Anyways, keep up the good work.
The third and final story in the Watcher in the Shadows series. Albus discovers that Harry has been adopted by Severus over the Christmas break.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 14 Feb 2009 / 14 Feb 2009
Series: Watcher in the Shadows Series
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Christmas Guardian: The Reaction
| 14 Feb 2009
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Please continue this series! The possibilities of where it could head are limitless.
Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all... NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat'
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 7: World War II - part 1
| 20 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Turn Snape's office into a barn yard? I've hear of turning the Dursley's house into one but never Snape's office...
Author's Response: Yah Harry\'s a daring little blighter, isn\'t he? :-)
Title: Chapter 12: Care
| 03 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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What's going to happen to Flint? Please don't have Flint get a slap across the wrist and only be expelled.
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see... *evil grin*
Title: Chapter 15: A Dog, a Cat, a Harpy, a Bat, a Friend, and a Freak
| 19 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Here's an idea for a prank. A rain cloud that's large enough to get him and everything with in a few feet of him wet that constantly stays above him.
Author's Response: LOL That could be good. :-) Thanks!
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: We Do What We Must
| 08 May 2010
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Of all things Severus could mean in Parseltounge, I guess bat would be expected... Anyways, keep up the good work!
Title: Chapter 1: Fate
| 01 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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While I have no problems with others using the idea of Snape going back in time to help Harry (it wasn't my idea to begin with), but to use the exact same title as my story for a story with the same concept is going too far. Please change the name of your story to avoid confusion between our two stories. I haven't abandoned mine. I'm in the process of going through it and correcting things before I continue.
Author's Response: I didn't realize that I was using your title. I'll change it as soon as I can. Sorry about that.
Title: Chapter 30: Gauntlet
| 13 May 2010
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 31: Call to Arms
| 15 May 2010
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Let Smidgen live. I like Smidgen too much to see her die...
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