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When Harry and his new, pretty neighbor are rescued from Privet Drive on the eve of a Death Eater attack, Severus becomes Harry's reluctant guardian and healer in the weeks following. Old prejudices are challenged as Harry's new friend casts her own spell over Hogwarts' Potions Master.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Dec 2008 / 10 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Odious Task. 19 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    Another absolutely terrific chapter!!

    The tension and chemistry you are building is very well done. Am I correct in assuming that it was Severus' hand comforting Erin?

    Author's Response:

    Umm, no sorry. Not Severus' hand. Severus was sitting on the opposite side of the table to Erin. it was Minerva's hand, and Erin even assumes it was Minerva, thinking to herself that Minerva seems to have taken it upon herself to be her  official comforter.

    No, Sev is reluctant to touch Erin to date, because he is worried about the electric shock he might get because he is attracted to her.

    Thanks for another great review. Glad you enjoyed it.

    Lesley


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Diagon Alley 25 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    Another great chapter, although I think that the cruelty he shows Erin may be slightly OOC.

    In canon, it always seems that severus treats women with at least the basic amounts of civility and courtesy.

    Once again, thanks for sharing your gift with us.

    Donna

    Author's Response:

    Snape being nasty is OOC. He treats women with a modicum of civility? I don't remember that. He treats Minerva as a colleague but his interactions with her are very stiff and just barely civil. He is very nasty to Tonks about the change in her Patronus, and apart from interactions with female students, whom he is just as foul to as he is the males...Hermione specifically, there are only two other instances I can think of where he interacts with women. Don't get the movie Snape, who is nowhere near as nasty a he is portrayed in the books, mixed up with his canon self.

    The scene with Bella and Narcissa. Yes, he is reasonable, but he is also acting, pretending that he is on their side. Open aggression would hardly convey solidarity. And he is still not exactly pleasant.

    And then there are the childhood scenes where he is not only nasty, but actually hurts Petunia. Lily is the only female he makes an effort with and even then, he finds it difficult to remain pleasant

    As for Erin...he is particularly nasty because he is attracted to her and is doing everything he can to dispell this impression as he cannot imagine that his attraction would ever be reciprocated.

    It is interesting to see people's different takes on Snape.

    Thanks for you review Donna. Hope to hear from you again.

    Lesley


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 04 Dec 2008
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    Excellent characterizations! I hope Severus and Erin are able tohelp Harry heal.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for continuing to review. Glad you like the characters.

    Lesley


Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 05 Dec 2008
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    OH MY GOD! This is an absolutely amazing story. I love how you are keeping Severus IC, but still allowing him a rational development of feeling toward Harry.

    This last chapter has been my favorite yet, what an amazing cliffie! Please update soon.

    Donna

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Donna for another lovely review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter so much.

    Lesley


Harry insists there are monsters under the bed, despite Severus assuiring him there's no such thing. But what if Snape were wrong and there really is something there . . ?

A Halloween fic set in the NA universe

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Oct 2008 / 21 Oct 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: Halloween
Title: Chapter 1: Something There 13 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    Another great story! Thanks so much!

    Author's Response: You're very welocme.  Always a pleasure to write one.

Changing relationships, changing appearances, new friendships. What if Snape was Harry's real father, but nobody knew it? What if Harry was more than he let people see? What if love really was the key to ending a war? Harry/Hermione. Ignores HBP and DH

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 16 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Feb 2010 / 22 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Unrecognized Faces 06 Feb 2009
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    I am enjoying your story immensely. Please update quickly!

Title: Chapter 8: Calm Waters 30 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    Great chapter, I look forward to the next update.

Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected 21 Jul 2009
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    This was atruly great chapter, but I think you're very evil for leaving it at that. Please update quickly.

After the final battle, Harry goes back into Snape's memories. What he finds, shocks him and turns what should have been his happiest days, into a living hell.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 2012 / 27 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Post-DH Sevitus
Title: Chapter 22: Realm of Dreams 24 Jul 2009
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    I've just found this story and I am really enjoying it. Somehow, this softer Snape is much more believable than many I've seen and the dialogue is very well written.

    Thanks for the great story!

    Author's Response: Oh thank you very much.

Sev’s partner goes on vacation, Harry volunteers to dogsit, and the puppy from hell is unleashed in Snape’s home. Told from Harry’s POV!

Takes place after Mother’s Day.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 8 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Dec 2008 / 18 Nov 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: Puppy Challenge
Title: Chapter 3: A Blasted Nuisance 24 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
    I'm enjoying this story very much, thank you for another look in Harry and Severus' lives.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I love writing this one, it makes me laugh and I really need it considering what my life is like now!


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