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| My Pet: Scorpia
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| Scorpia [Contact]
| Better be Hufflepuff!
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| Moriyah (female)
| Member since: 09 Jan 2008
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| I'm Moriyah, a 28 year old lover of words who discovered fanfiction at 14...14 years ago, dear Lord. Though I love writing, procrastintaion and a tendancy to get wrapped up in work means that several stories have been on hold for years. Getting back into it is so difficult when you've been away. I'm currectly an Advanced EMT, Firefighter and on a Covid Taskforce in West Virginia while in Paramedic Class. This has been the busiest year of my life, and reminded me how much I missed the quiet joy of sharing what you love with others, in particular, stories. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Letters
| 03 Nov 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Love your writing style in this story! :) How Harry continues to write Snape, determined to let him know that he's appreciated, yay! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I love letters. Now you know my secret :)
Being sent to stay in a psychiatric ward at St. Mungo’s isn’t exactly the most enjoyable way to spend a summer, so naturally, Harry’s pretty angry when he finds out that’s his destination, regardless of whether or not it might be good for him. Facing a full summer of being cut off from the Order’s plans, Harry’s even taken to envying Snape, because at least Snape knows what is going on. But when Harry arrives at St. Mungo’s and discovers that a fire has changed his destination from the teen ward to the adult ward, everything is turned upside down. Enter his roommate - suicidal, depressed, and none other than Severus Snape. They are both willing to bet that their summer will be a total disaster, and maybe it will be, but even the surest of gamblers are not always right.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Depressed
Tags: Hospitalization
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 35
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 03 May 2015 / 14 Feb 2014
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 25: Together, We Fall
| 11 Oct 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Wow. I just love how realistic and believable your writing is, I went through a time in my life when I was younger when I felt like I was going to die, just like how you described Snape's life, and I was like, "Yes, that's exactly how it felt." I didn't know how, or when, but I felt like I was going to die soon, I even wrote out a list of small things I wanted to do before I died. I wasn't being abused, but my life wasn't going anywhere, I never left the house, never had any friends, and each day was the same, sad, bleakness I'd come to expect. Nothing to look forward to, and I was just waiting to die. Thank you for putting it more eloquently than I could, and thank you for writing this chapter! It was terrific.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Scorpia for sharing your thoughts and experience. It is amazing how many people share the experiences I have been putting into this story. What is most heartening to me is that despite the difficult times it is obvious many have suffered, they are still here. That speaks of something, whether it courage or the ability to adapt, or something else that cannot be named. Again, thank you for putting your own thoughts into words. It is difficult to move on after such a difficult period. I am glad that you are here to put words to that time in your life, as I have done so through my own writing. Hugs, Whitetail.
Title: Chapter 26: Daggers
| 03 Nov 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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That's SO sweet that Harry wanted to share a room, sweet but completely understandable!
Every time I see an update from you I do a little dance, ^_^ It's just SO GOOD, and you care about making the characters so real and true to the way JKR wrote them, it's awesome.
Loving that Harry opened up a little, even though it was difficult for him to do so, and the fact that Snape certainly gained some trust by being patient and listening to him instead of snarking--I'm proud of him. *Grin*
Wonderful chapter, as usual, :D
Title: Chapter 27: Visitors
| 03 Nov 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Ohh, Ron about made me cry with his, 'He wondered how Harry got by, with nobody to tell him that.' *Sniffles*
It's nice to see a Ron that cares about his best mate, and isn't completely oblivious. Harry under the table was cute, and so was Snape's reaction. Lovely chapter m'dear! Don't let school get you down!
Author's Response: Hey Scorpia! Great to hear from you. Thanks a lot for the well wishes regarding school - your comment cheered me up immensely! I am glad that you enjoyed Ron's involvement, as well as the table scene. I rather liked that one myself. Cheers, Whitetail.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Happy Place
| 08 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Nice beginning! I look forward to seeing how long it will take Harry to trust Snape, since the man's treated him with such disdain before. Thanks for sharing!
Harry Potter is located in London in the dead of night. How exactly did he end up there, and what has he been doing? Well, any kid with half a brain knows not to talk to strangers.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Streetlamps
| 10 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Holy moly Abie! I may find myself abandoning JKR and preferring this story to the original! :D So awesome so far, yay! :D Thanks for sharing such a beautifully written chapter...I hope many more follow.
Title: Chapter 2: Good Instincts?
| 10 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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If I could just write Snape like you do, I'd be a very happy person...I don't know enough big words to write him correctly though, haha. Love your version, :D Can't wait to see where this goes!
Title: Chapter 3: Too Good to be True
| 10 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Ahhh! I hope Snape finds out about his nightmares, :D
Title: Chapter 4: Shattered Glass
| 10 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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I have a love/hate thing going on with cliffhangers, but because there is another chapter to read this time, I'm just very, very happy with this awesome chapter!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Accident
| 09 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Hey there! Poor Harry--but I tend to treat him badly myself when I attempt at writing a fanfic. I'm looking forward to seeing how this will advance. :D Will Draco have any part? Guess I'll read on!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! And yes, you will just have to read on :-)
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