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Reviews by Leilia Snape
Desperate to escape his guilt and nightmares after the third task, Harry transforms into a hawk by accident and ends up breaking both wings and suffering partial memory loss. He is found by Snape, and while the professor nurses him back to health discovers the truth about Severus and who are really his friends and enemies at Hogwarts.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 May 2009 / 20 Mar 2009 Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: Animagus Accident
Oh. My. Cow. Harry's dead. When Harry and Snape get back to their quarters, Harry is going to be one dead duck. I loved how Harry came to Severus's rescue, and then Severus was very clearly ready to kill for Harry/Freedom. I just hope that Severus will forgive Harry for "deceiving" him. As always, great chapter. And I have to say that you astound me with how fast you are putting out these absolutely amazing chapters. I hope that you have a wonderful birthday!! ;-} Leilia Author's Response: Oh yes, he is!! One dead child! Sev's going to stuff and mount him. he was and eventually Snape might. Thanks so much and I really can't tell you my secret . . .it's a kind of magic LOL!
First off, I love the line: "Now Umbridge would learn the truth all students knew-screwing with Snape was like baiting a Hungarian Horntail-either way you ended up dead." When I first read that I almost fell off the couch. Absolutely Brilliant!! I love it!! How do you come up with stuff like this? Incredible! I have to say I was supprised when Umbridge tried to get away by running out of the castle. Great twist, I really wasn't expecting her to do that. ;-} Also I have a question, you said that "she (Umbridge) threw back her head and let loose with a magically amplified banshee screech." Does this mean that the High Wicked Bigot actually had creature blood? This might explain why she is so against them and some of her looks too. ;-} I also loved Minerva worked it out so that Harry and Severus could work together and spend more time with each other. Her line though: "No need to thank me. I think this is both what you need." I can imagine Severus and Harry's expressions right about then. Too too funny. ;-} As always, Superb chapter. And I can't wait to see what happens next. Leilia Author's Response: That line just . . .popped into my head. It's sheer improvisation, I don;t know where I get it from. It's not planned. It could indeed and you'll find out more about that next chapter. Yes, they would have both been giving her LOOKS! Thanks so much and the next one;s up now!
A Stymphalian Bird? Did you come up with that or did you find it somewhere? I thought that it was a wonderful way to kill off the Toad, by having her eaten by a gigantic bird. Another thing, does Hagrid know that this thing is in his forest? ;-} I was just wondering if it was another one of his "pets" ;-} Leilia Author's Response: No, it comes from Greek mythology, it's not my creation. More about it will be learned next chapter. Yes, hagrid knows, but the Stymphalian Bird isn't anyone's pet. So happy you liked her demise. I was originally going to have her eaten by a griffin, but changed my mind when I remember the Stymphalian Bird. As he makes the choices that define his life, Harry learns exactly what it means to be Severus' son. Third in the Lily's Charm series.
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Jan 2010 / 02 Apr 2009 Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
I love it! Great first chapter. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next in Harry and Severus's lives. What's the matter with Ron and Hermione? I hope that Harry and Ginny are able to talk some sense into those two. ;-} I liked the part with Severus and the Dursleys. You know that you nearly gave me a heart attack when Vernon came up on Harry. I thought that he had to be a dementor for a few minutes. Great job writing the confrontation between Sev, Vernon, and Petunia by the way. ;-} I love the little dragon. I know that Harry will always have Hedwig, but I think that he needs some type of pet that can keep him company all the time, even when Hedwig is doing mail runs. I loved the line from Harry to the kylaria, "I’m not dinner". I have caught myself saying that to my leopard gecko, who I would imagine is about the same size. "Just don't chew on me..." ;-} What would the kylaria eat? chrickets or fish or vegatables? I love the idea of the little dragons and now I wish that I could have one. ;-} One other really quick question. Can he fly? It would be great if he could and then Harry could go flying with him... Just a thought. ;-} Great job, can't wait to read more. Leilia Author's Response: Yep, our little kylaria friend can fly--he shall next chapter. :o) And he and Harry will have lots of fun together. Yeah, I wish I had too. I'm quite fond of this little guy already. Oh, and he eats fruits and veggies, our little Kylaria (mostly, though he does enjoy an occasional small insect for a treat). LOL Vernon was pretty scary, I admit. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway, despite the fear. :o) And more Ron and Hermione coming up next. Thanks so much for such a nice review. Glad you're excited for the story.
I hope Harry can keep his temper under control. ;-} Looks like Severus is going to be having that "chat" with Mr. & Mrs. Weasley after all. ;-} I hope that they listen to him. I'm not entirely sure about Harry going to fly with the Cannons. Something about Owen just seems to rub me the wrong way. I just don't trust him. I would bet that he was the one to tell that story to the press. Because I know that the Weasleys wouldn't have done something like that, neither would Daniel. And I'm sure that Draco wouldn't have, especially as he seems to be trying very hard to be friends with Harry. Which brings up a question, did Draco decide to be friends/friendly with Harry because he found out that they are related, or some other reason? As always, I love the story, and can't wait to see the next chapter. Leilia A new year means new perils and friendships for Harry, as he faces the Triwizard Tournament, a vengeful Dark Lord's return, and must try and master the secrets of Prince Manor. Can his family and friends help him succeed? Sequel to Heir to Prince Manor!
Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Vampires Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 79 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Dec 2011 / 20 May 2009 Series: Prince Manor - Challenges: None
Harry's riddle really stumped me, and then I read the answer and I thought of course. But I think that I know the answer to Nephthys second riddle. The answer is knowledge. I love all of your stories and can't wait for an update on any of them. ;-} Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wanted it to be a really tough riddle, because it was a challenge and the riddles shouldn't be easy for the tournament. AS for the second riddle, you could be right. You'll see when I post the next part!
Dudley and Harry flee Vernon - to Severus. A different Tom Riddle, Petunia is good. Lucius and Draco are helpful. Albus is a bit misguided. The twins are only a year older than Harry, so I can make them non-Gryffindor.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 137 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Sep 2014 / 28 Jun 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
I loved seeing Severus act so fatherly over Harry (and also somewhat Tom). The other thing that I loved was Lucius in his new "job". Poor man. ;-} I thought that it was funny that he had to have his house-elf come out to help him. ;-} The other thing that I thought was brilliant was the alias you picked for him. It took me a few seconds, but once I picked it up I laughed out loud. Very clever. ;-} All in all, I loved the chapter and I can't wait to see the next one. Leilia Severus is found out as a spy among the Death Eaters and runs for his life. Along the way, he makes some shocking discoveries about Harry Potter.
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jan 2012 / 23 Jul 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
Hahaha! Severus is going to burn that hat once and for all. ;-} I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks so much! And sorry for it getting messed up at the end. I really don't know why it did that. *grumbles* But I'm excited that you liked it! Thanks again! After a series of tests to discover why Harry's magic has become erratic, a secret is revealed, one hidden for over fifteen years. But not all secrets disappear without consequence, leaving Severus to learn that potions cannot heal everything.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 45 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2012 / 29 Jul 2009 Series: Alea Iacta Est - Challenges: None
I couldn't wait to see what would happen between Severus and Dumbledore, and you provided a superb chapter. I was waiting for Severus to get back to Harry so he could tell him that he is Harry's father, but you ended it too soon. Noo!! ;-} I guess that means that I'll just have that much more to look forward to in the next chapter. ;-} I think that Sev was very wise in saying that Minerva was to included in the meeting with Dumbledore. I have no doubt that Dumbles is not going to go down or let go of his control of Harry without a fight. I love the story, and can't wait for the next chapter. ;-} Leilia Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the showdown between Sev and Dumbledore. You weren't the only one waiting for Sev to return and tell Harry, but it deserved its own chapter and I didn't want the scene rushed at the end of a chapter. Sev was very wise to include Minerva in the inevitable meeting. It's always good to have someone to watch your back, plus it does concern Minerva as well. (UPDATED: APR 02 2011) Snape wakes up from a coma to a new world in which Voldemort is dead and gone, defeated by Harry Potter. Deciding he has nothing more to live for, he tries to end his life, but things don't quite work out the way he planned. Harry gets pulled in by Dumbledore to assist with Snape's...little dilemma.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Aug 2010 / 11 Sep 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
On to the review: I love this story!! This is my first Deaged!Sev story that I have read, I have read a ton of Deaged!Harry and Deaged!Draco stories, bot this is the first Sev story. And I have to say that I absolutely love it! I really like your take on how Sev's mind works now, how he has all of his memories, but none of the "learned behaviors". How did you come up with that? It is brilliant. Also, I loved how Sev nailed Sirius's nose. I can just imagine Sirius leaning in to take a closer look at Sev to see if it is really him, and then, Bam. ;-} I also loved that you included one of my favorite stores. IKEA!! And then you had Harry and Ginny have one of my all time favorite foods at IKEA, the meatballs! All of that to say, I really love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck on your midterms. ;-} |
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