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| silverwritingquill [Contact]
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| Emily (undisclosed)
| Member since: 03 Mar 2008
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| I'm a wanna-be writer who spends WAY too much time on the internet, reading books and fanfiction, and searching for chocolate. I love HP fanfics where the main characters are Harry and Snape struggling through something, so kudos to whoever started this site. I have my own fanfics, but I doubt I'll actually put them up on here. If you're interested, look me up on FF.Net. I go by Shulblaka Saphira--I made it while I was going through my Eragon phase...lol [Report This]
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Very good story! I love the idea of Harry being something not entirely human, and also the slight tendencies to act a it like Snape. Great job, keep up the good work, and update soon!
It's interesting. Not amazingly so, but...pretty good if English isn't your first language.
If I may suggest, try making the dialogue relax a bit more. You seem to forget that Harry is fifteen, and trust me, at fifteen, no one talks, or THINKS like that. Snape's thoughts are okay-ish at best, but what he says is perfect. Completely in character.
Which brings me to another point. I know you said that this was an AU and that the characters would be slightly OOC, but Harry is WAY too much.
I understand what you're trying to do-make him appear abused and hurt, and whatever, but REALLY, Harry can't just roll over and suddenly like Snape.
He can in the end, you can't just STOP hating someone for four years and then suddenly like him.
So, SNAPE, he's fine. HARRY isn't.
All in all, though, the story is very interesting, and I can't wait to see what you plan to do with it! Keep up the good work!
He didn't care about him anyway.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 25 Sep 2004 / 25 Sep 2004
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Very well written. I especially loved the last line "He didn't care about Precious Harry Potter anyway." It seems a bit laughable to think that Snape would ever care about Harry, but throughout the story he stayed with him through his nightmare.
So great job, keep up the good work!
Answer to Fic Fest Challenge # 6- Little Harry Potter is very sick at Number Four, Privet Drive...who will help him?
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 17 Jan 2006 / 17 Jan 2006
Series: None
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Challenges: Sick little Harry
Is there more? Fantastically written, btw! Keep up the good work!
AU: Harry Potter wasn't quite as undamaged as Albus Dumbledore thought.
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Misc
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Torture
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 23 Jan 2006 / 23 Jan 2006
Series: None
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Challenges: None
So what? Did he kill all the wizards or something?
"This conversation never happened. I did not cry," his mouth twisted distastefully, "and I certainly did not use the word 'love'."
Probably the BEST line of the ENTIRE story. Which makes me ask, is there more to this?
Harry Evan's mother died for him on Hallowe'en night, and he was left to the hands of the Dursleys. During his third year, he enlists his two best friends, Ron and Hermione, to help him search for information about his mother and the identity of his father. A photograph points the Trio towards Lily's two best friends during Hogwarts, Remus Lupin and surprisingly, Severus Snape, and starts them on the adventure of a lifetime.
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 4
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Completed: No
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Updated: 16 Aug 2007 / 13 Mar 2006
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: In Which Harry and Ron Recieve Detention, and Hermione Is Still Annoyed
| 03 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed)
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Great story, I love the plot! It seems a bit strange that not even Petunia knew a LITTLE bit about whoever Lily was sleeping with--then again, she hated Lily for her magic...Oh well, keep up the good work, and update soon!
At the Dursleys the summer after Sirius' death, Voldemort sends werewolves to attack Harry. Taken to Grimmauld Place by his rescuer, Severus Snape, Harry devises a disastrous plan to rescue Sirius from the veil, resulting in his being transfigured into a baby. Snape is the only one who can brew the potion to restore him, and is the only one to realize that Harry still retains his 16 year-old-mind. Over the summer and the first two potions which restore him to age eleven, Harry begins to feel that Snape is the only one who understands and can protect him. Is he right or has his deaging muddled his thinking? AU story for 6th year.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 26
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Completed: No
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Updated: 14 Nov 2007 / 15 May 2006
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 26: Settling in to Hogwarts
| 06 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed)
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What an amazing story. I saw it before on Fanfiction.net (I think, if I'm not thinking of something similar...) and at the time I didn't like it much. But as I kept reading, things just got more and more intense, and I just couldn't stop reading.
You do seem, however to have a small problem with spelling, or rather, to be more specific, you leave out letters or replace them with others making up whole new words or using a word that doesn't fit the sentence.
Other than that, great job, keep up the good work, and update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, you're right, I'm horrible at spelling. I do have a betta and I hope that she catches as much as possile, but I don't catch everything. I hope it doesn't bother you to much. Thanks for the review.
[ONESHOT] Harry has always Known.
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Misc
Poor Harry...such a horrible dream....
lol, loved the last line. Great job, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: :-) Thank you! ~Ptyx
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