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| LK Darling (undisclosed)
| Member since: 21 Apr 2008
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| Happily married for 20 years, this coming October. Two lovely daughters, four lovely grandkids. I always knew Snape was the most interesting character in the series! I love good writing, especially with good spelling and good grammar. [Report This]
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Lacrymosa is right! I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes right now, hoping against hope that you will have them get closer, in spite of Severus' limitations and fears. Go on!
Oh, I'm SO glad you decided to rework and continue this! What a blessing! (I'm also excited because Obama has just won!) What a great day!
Author's Response: YAY for OBAMA!!! Thanks for the review :)
Thank you so much for having given us another chapter. There's still more questions, but at least we're given some hope here. It seems possible the presence and innocence of Albus Severus can touch Snape in a way no one else can. Thanks for a better ending.
A Halloween story! Haha, I know, a bit early... I wanted to be the first this year *grin*
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Fic Fests > #3 Halloween, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 19 Oct 2008 / 19 Oct 2008
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Challenges: Halloween
Title: Chapter 1: Hug a Sad Little Boy!
| 14 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
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This one was terrific! Well done, well done indeed.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Mila
Nice little story--and right in time for Hallowe'en!
But the apostrophe in 'twas comes first, BEFORE the 't'. The word is a contraction for "it was", so the apostrophe stands in for the 'i' of "it". Again, very cute story!
Author's Response: Thanks, I love Halloween stories. Thanks for pointing that out to me, it was around five in the morning when I finished this one and was half-asleep, but I've since gone back an corrected all the typos . . .I think.
Changing relationships, changing appearances, new friendships. What if Snape was Harry's real father, but nobody knew it? What if Harry was more than he let people see? What if love really was the key to ending a war? Harry/Hermione. Ignores HBP and DH
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Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
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Chapters: 16
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Updated: 17 Feb 2010 / 22 Oct 2008
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Title: Chapter 4: Seeing Past the Surface
| 23 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
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Interesting story! Just one question: You introduced Patrick to us, but who the heck is Maya? Thanks.
Author's Response: Ah, thank you for catching me. Maya is a weird nickname for Hermione, pronounced MY-a, but I forgot to put it in my author's notes or make it clear during the story. Thank you! -purplemagik
Interesting chapter, with an interesting development! One minor typo needs correcting, tho: Padma's sister spells her name a little differently: it's PARVATI. Good chapter, tho!
Another Halloween story! I may be a bit obsessed this year... *grin*
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Categories: Fic Fests > #3 Halloween, Misc
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 25 Oct 2008 / 25 Oct 2008
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Challenges: Halloween
I like this story; you have done a fine job. Happy Hallowe'en!
Author's Response: Thanks! Trick or treat? Mila
Title: Chapter 1: Dumbledore's Betrayal
| 29 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
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Wow! I'm hooked! Keep going, keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you for you review, and I promise I'll do my best to keep going! This whole experience is new for me, but I'm enjoying it.
Wow! You've got me! Pray do continue...
Author's Response: I get very frustrated when a story is not finished, so barring any unforseen catastrophe, I will do my best to finish it to the end! Thank you for your review! ;) By the way Shannon, I got confused with the a & e thing in ingredient. I'll go check, can't remember "what" I did anymore! ;) i'll go consult my dictionary! Sometimes it's hard because some words we spell the same as the British, and others we don't. And my Beta is American, so some spellings are different for her too.
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