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Title: Chapter 8: Lending an Ear
| 04 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Not inconsistent. Update soon. Know that's hard being in college as I am too. I've been wondering when Severus might see or find out about Harry's home life.
Harry Potter is hearing a voice in his head. It isn't the enemy, it isn't a ghost or even his own conscious... and that isn’t even the main problem. The Dursleys kicked him out, and after Harry's near death experience, Dumbledore feels it is best for Harry to go into hiding, and at the most unlikely place anyone would ever think to look... Snape Manor.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 02 Nov 2013
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
| 12 Dec 2010
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Oooh, I'm so excited! It's been so long since I've read a Forever Knight fan fic! I wrote a HP with a little bit of FK in it once but that was on another site. Thanks for the interesting story! I'm definitely looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 7: Quidditch Fanatics
| 19 Apr 2010
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I absolutely love this story so far! I've never read a story where Dudley came along before except one of my own about Dudley where he ended up in the Wizarding world.
Just a question: You mentioned Dudley will be going to hogwarts... he's not a wizard, so will he be going to school there? Or is he a wizard and you haven't said it yet?
I've noticed a few spelling errors now and again, but nothing too serious. Keep up the great work!
Your ideas are fantastic!
Title: Chapter 2: Topsy-Turvy
| 28 Sep 2013
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I really wanted to read this story, but the format is bothering me. It's ok to be different, but I just don't like the format of Harry telling the story like this to the entire school. It just seems not plausible to air his laundry like this in front of the entire school... in front of a friend maybe but not all the young kids and everyone.
Title: Chapter 4: Waltz of Treachery
| 09 Jan 2012
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I love your pleas for reviews. So inventive! Makes me laugh.
Title: Chapter 9: Testing boundries
| 09 Jan 2012
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I understand that you said CP was normal in the wizarding world, but that's a lot of corporal punishment, even for people to whom it is acceptable. Generally one or two spanks is enough. Even then, spankings on top of a lecture and a long time out is quite unnecessary. Aside from that Harry wasn't even given a warning. Good parenting practice is to at least give a child a warning to stop whatever it is they're doing first and then punish later if they continue the bad behavior they've been warned about. Harry is just taken by surprise after he's already been punished and then punished again, and severely. This may be Snape's personality, but I cannot ever see this as being proper parenting in the wizarding world. Other than the over-doing of the CP the story is good. It seems however that the entire story is based around and geared towards an overload of CP. Is that the point of this story?
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Orphan
Rated:
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 0
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 Jan 1970 / 01 Jan 1970
Series: The Darkness Within
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Anywhere But Privet Drive.
| 07 Apr 2012
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Well it certainly seems interesting so far. Vernon Dursley needs to rot in jail for child abuse! I feel so bad for Harry!
Title: Chapter 9: Candid Ramblings
| 07 Apr 2012
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Hm... I don't usually like to read stories where Snape goes to take revenge as I don't personally believe in revenge. That being said, specifically I think it was wrong for him to hurt a child. Even if Dudley were a bully, Severus has now become no better than Vernon for abusing a defenseless child. Very wrong.
As hidden secrets are revealed, Harry is forced to deal with a most unexpected, and unwanted, development. Sevitus. OOC maybe??? Maybe not???
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 10
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Completed: No
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Updated: 09 Aug 2009 / 01 Sep 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 27 Sep 2011
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Perhaps it's already been pointed out to you, but maybe not. It's 'Privet' drive... not privy drive. Lol. Great so far though!
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