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Desperate to escape his guilt and nightmares after the third task, Harry transforms into a hawk by accident and ends up breaking both wings and suffering partial memory loss. He is found by Snape, and while the professor nurses him back to health discovers the truth about Severus and who are really his friends and enemies at Hogwarts.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 May 2009 / 20 Mar 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: Animagus Accident
Title: Chapter 25: Laying Old Ghosts To Rest 29 Apr 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Now, that was rough--but I think Harry will start "getting better" now. Especiallly if Sev keeps his eye out for relapses in self fagulation (Harry's specialty). I was right though, Even with the angst--thta went better with both of them "willing" participants.

    Looking forward to your next update--BTW-that sneak peak doesn't look happy at all--are you sure we can't just smack Ron now BEFORE he causes more trouble? (Puppy dog eyes)

    V.

    Author's Response:

    He will, now that he's learned to let go of his guilt and see that he was not to blame for anything that happened that night.  Severus will be sure to keep an eye out for that.

    I think any kind of lesson goes better when all participants are willing to learn and to teach.  The book Occluemncy lessons were doomed from the start due to extreme reluctance, distrust, and preconieved notions on both of their parts. 

    Ha--well, if you can catch Ron, feel free to give him one!


Title: Chapter 26: Anger Management 01 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I like it! Sev teaching Harry to Box as anger management. I'm not a big boxing fan myself (at least not as a sport) but as a self defence/anger management tool it looks like it could really be a good thing.

    THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING YOU DID TO RON! I so have wanted to smack the git, but this was even better. And now they are friends again--but Ron had best be careful to not back-slide, Harry just might not be there to catch him back up.

    More soon please!(First day of teaching--shiver--I remember my first time in front of a class, I was terrified! and He's only 15? Poor boy the firsties will see "fresh meat"!)

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I don;t like the sport, but it is useful to workout and get a handle on his temper, he needs to do that.

    You're welcome, He deserved what Harry did to him.

    Shudders, I remember my first day too and sometimes I wish I didn.t.  They will indeed!


Title: Chapter 27: An Unruly Potions Class 02 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Well, that Could Have Been MUCH Worse. No dead bodies is a good thing. (I remember the first time I took a group of High School Students into a Chem lab--It is my goal to Scare them Witless of the lab for safety sake.)

    I do like how Sev handles Harry--He is getting much better at knowing what to say to his apprentice.

    Looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response:

    I know EXACTLY what you mean.  You can't just tell kids not touch this or don't turn that on, because they're like--LETS DO IT ANYWAY and who cares if half the school blows up! Then we get to go home! One kid in my elementary school lit the woodshop on fire by using a band saw or a grinder to strike a spark off something metal, I think it was a pipe, and it landed in some sawdust and next thing you know there's a fire.  His excuse was "I wanted to see what would happen."

    Insane!

    Sometimes kids NEED to be scared to death, so you don't end up with a dead child. 

    yes, Severus is learning how to talk to Harry a lot better.  Thanks for reviewing as always.


Title: Chapter 28: No Excuse 05 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    OK, You replaced one idiot with another. Ron now Siri. and the old dog just may NOT be able to learn a new trick this time--unless Moony can shake some sense into him.

    That conversation/arguement was very well crafted, by the way. I could feel the emotions rolling off of the page. Well done.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, sometimes it happens that way.  Moony will be lucky if Sirius listens to him. 

    Thank you, i try really hard to keep my dialogue believable and let my readers feel it.


Title: Chapter 29: To Outwit A Dark Lord 07 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I'm glad Harry and Siri made up. . . especially if you are following canon for the next event--(Please don't kill him off!! )

    V.

    Author's Response: Yes, they needed to.  As for what I'm following . . .you'll see!

Title: Chapter 30: Snaring Darkness 09 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Well, at least you didn't kill him out-right. So there is still hope ( I always hated that Siri died in that battle--even worse than the other deaths in the series--well except for Moony at the end). Yep, Harry is going to feel loads of guilt--Siri was protecting him from a curse ment for Harry alone. Good luck Sev.

    V.

    Author's Response: No, I never liked that either or Moony dying or Sev dying . . .I felt there was WAY too much death at the end, it was more sensationalism than anything else.  Harry will be feeling lots and lots of guilt and Sev has his work cut out for him. 

Title: Chapter 33: Rivalry's End 16 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I'm dancing the Happy Dance! Siri is healed--Sev and Siri have a truce--Bella is in severe "pain"--and Draco was humiliated in a spectacular fashion. I bow to your genious!

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Aww, thanks! *blushes*

    I had a really hard time deciding what to do for the prank too.  And how Sev should handle Bella, since I didn;t want her to die yet.

    Glad you liked my solutions. :) XD


Title: Chapter 34: Freedom's Way 18 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I have enjoyed this story SO MUCH and I look forward to your sequel.

    You wrapped this up well and, I must admit, I LOVE Hedwig--She doesn't take nonsence from anyone--not even Warrior! With her keeping an eye on our boys Things will work out well in the end--i'm sure.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    No, she doesn't, LOL!

    My Hedwig is very much her own bird and can hold her own with both boys in whatever form they have at the moment.

    I think every wizard needs a strong familiar, since familiars were supposed to be helpers and advisors to wizards according to the old definitions.

    Things should, all right!

    Thanks V.

    Looking forward to seeing what you think of both my sequels.


July 31. Harry Potter is kidnapped on his 16th birthday from Privet Drive. Draco knows what happened, but will he be willing to tell? What does Snape have to do with all of it? (In-Progress.)

Takes Place: 6th summer, 7th summer, 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Violence
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Jul 2009 / 30 Apr 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Draco is the Only Witness
Title: Chapter 2: Counting Down to the 31st 06 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I think you are doing a fine job on your story. One "criticism" might be that your time jumps are a bit hard to follow. . . but that might just be me getting used to your writing style. I'm looking forward to where you take us on this adventure.

    V.

DEATH EATER KIDNAPS BOY WHO LIVED! read the newspaper headlines across magical Britain. SS, HP/HG. Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. Response to the Unmagical Harry Potter Challenge by Jan_AQ.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 May 2009 / 05 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Unmagical Harry Potter
Title: Chapter 1: Running Away 05 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    :-)

    I loved it!
    V.


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