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Call me: P.G. (female) Member since: 24 Dec 2008
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About me:

On May 28th of 2002, after a lot of deliberation and thought, I became Ponytail Goddess on fanfiction.net.  Looking back, I can't help but wonder why I chose such a silly name.  Clearly, I never thought I'd grow out of my ponytail phase during my freshmen year of high school.  Oh, how things have changed...

Anyway, I guess I could tell you a few less than interesting facts about myself, such as the fact that I am a music education major or that I live in Illinois, which is known for it's unpredictable weather.  However, that's not too terribly interesting, so I will bore you no longer.

I am here to write a few good fics and my main focus as an author is creativity.  I strive to write intricate fics with highly detailed plots that have not been seen before.  I like tricking people into believing one thing when they should believe another.  I also believe that a story can be satisfying with a less than happy ending.  Not everything in life ends happily, so why should all fics end happily?  Variety is the spice of life, so I'm going to flavor my fics in different ways to please you.

Please enjoy my Harry and Snape works here and do take a moment to check out all of my other works on fanfiction.net.  I think you'll enjoy them if you give them a chance.  Thank you for your time and for supporting my writing! 

08/19/2010:  Hello all!  Thanks for stopping by my profile!  I've had a terribly busy summer, but will try my best to post some new stuff very soon!  Have a good one!

-P.G. 

Current Projects:

Her Secret Obsession-A Sev/Lily pairing with mysterious connotations.  Harry plays a very interesting part as well; please enjoy this time traveling adventure.

Wish Upon a Star-Found on fanfiction.net, Severus wakes up and finds himself in a different world where he has apparently been leading a very different life.

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Snape was Harry's father, now he's locked between life and death forever.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Nov 2009 / 15 Nov 2009
Series: How Many Drops? - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: One Drop too Few 26 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    Wow--that was very interesting. I'm off to read the next installment!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this story, I hope you like the next one. :)

Everyone makes mistakes, even great men like Dumbledore. But was placing six-year-old Harry Potter with Severus Snape the biggest mistake of them all? Or maybe…it could work out after all. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: Bravery is Overrated and Boggart Under the Bed.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #9 Prompt Fest 2009
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Nov 2009 / 16 Nov 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 17 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    Ha! Oh, I love the ending! That was a delightful read--a perfect first fic for the fest! I absolutely adored your Severus' sullen and obnoxious attitude, as well as his snarky thoughts towards everyone, particularly, the comment about the lemon drops and how his 'burden' had arrived.

    I can't believe Snape actually pretended there was a boggart under the bed lol. It would be funny, if you did a continuation like you suggested on the chatbox and there really was a boggart under there one day (Snape could check every night, lol)!

    Anyways, nice work! I really enjoyed this piece and hope that you choose to write more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review! It's so lovely to hear that you liked it! I was all surprised when reviews started to come in, I didn't know the fest was starting that day so I got all worried that I'd accidently posted it myself or something! I don't know how I would have done that, but knowing me and my dunderheadness (Snape informed me of my condition this morning) I would have found a way. I was thrilled to have been the first fest fic uploaded though, it made my day! I'm definitely doing to do a continuation to thank everyone for their lovely reviews but I'm not sure when it will be up, when exams are over I hope.

    Thanks so much!


Harry, once again, forgets to look before he leaps. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: ‘He crawled through the long, tall grass on his hands and knees.’ and ‘Hang on tight, and don’t let go.'

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > #9 Prompt Fest 2009
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Nov 2009 / 18 Nov 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Sinking Feeling 05 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    Great fic--I don't know how I missed this one coming out! You had some pretty epic quotes in here too, like 'Though who knew the man liked to doodle kittens on spare pieces of parchment?' and 'I'm the one berating him now!' Lol, very nice work.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Ah, well I'm terribly behind in reading ANY of the fest fics, so don't worry ;) but thanks for reviewing anyway. I'm glad you found it quotable!

Sev, Lily, and Harry are trying to live as a happy family, running an apothecary in Diagon Alley, after Lily divorced James years before. But James keeps trying to sabotage their relationship out of petty jealousy and tries to get custody of Harry by badmouthing Severus and attempting to ruin his reputation, using all his money and connections to do so. Features a Good! Tom Riddle. An eventually redeemed and de-aged James Potter also. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: Scourgify! and Needle in a Haystack

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Bashing, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity
Chapters: 32 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jan 2012 / 19 Nov 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly 21 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    Nice chapter--I really like the explanation behind this universe. It was clear and believeable because it did seem like Lily really wanted to make things work and didn't want to leave James, but in the end, somehow mustered up the strength to do it. You've painted her as a strong lady, but not totally impervious to weaknesses, which I like.

    While I personally dislike reading cp scenes, I think you handled it with finesse and made it sound appropriate to the behavior. Nice job, Snapegirl!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    She did really try and that's why it hurt her so much when she found that James was cheating on her, both the first and second time. It took a lot of courage for her to admit their marriage was a mistake and to then leave  with Harry and even greater courage to start all over again with Severus.

    As for the CP scene, I usually don't like writing them too graphically, but in this case it was necessary to the plotline and I'm glad I didn't turn you off.


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: James' Reaction 21 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    What a jerk! I have some select words for James that are not meant for Harry's ears! Good grief, why can't he just let it go!

    I must tell you, I really do like what you've done with the story and I think the universe is intriguing. Thanks for the good read!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he's really being an idiot here and not realizing the damage he's doing to Harry.

    Thanks and hope you like what comes next in this universe.


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That? 21 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    Aw! I love Sev and Lily together so much! I hope James has really been taken care of, but something tells me that he will try and take this to court anyways, though I don't know how he'd win. After all, Harry clearly loves Sev and Lily witnessed the spanking.

    Great chapter!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: james might just try something like that eventually. He probably wouldn't win, not unless he tried to buy off the judge, but Harry would probably have a lot to say about james doing such  nasty things.  Thanks!

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual 21 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    Remus and Narcissa! There's a match I've never seen before; how interesting. I am really enjoying this story. Please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thank very much! It's  a new pairing for us but we think it really works.

    We have just updated by the way!


Take one Severus Snape, one baby Potter, and one insane Headmaster; simmer gently and stir well. Don't forget to duck! AU Oneshot. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: "Duck!" and Headmaster Potter

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 21 Nov 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Menagerie 21 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    I think I've just melted into a puddle--I cannot believe how much cuteness you've packed into this little fic! I love several of Severus' quotes, including, "He'd love anyone who showed him a duck!" Lol! At first I thought it would be all laughs, but I love how you snuck the seriousness of the situation into the middle also. It's like you connected me with Harry and then you dropped the bomb and I was very upset to hear that he was being abused.

    Let's hope his Snake will take good care of him (and you and I both know he will). What a great read--thanks for sharing!

    -P.G.

A midnight escapade does not go as planned when Harry finds himself injured, locked in Snape’s storage room and worst of all, doused in Veritaserum. And this is all before Snape finds him. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: Locked in Snape's Storage Room and Veritaserum

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > #9 Prompt Fest 2009
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Nov 2009 / 22 Nov 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Forced Confessions 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    Great fic! Your Snape was fabulously in character. I love how he showed touches of other emotions here and there like curiosity and awkwardness, but was mainly has angry self. And poor Harry, forced to give up all that information, though it really was his fault for breaking and entering in the first place.

    I really liked the descriptions you made in here too. When Harry was woozy, we could tell. Then, the sickness afterwards was quite real too. All in all, very nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review Ponytail, ^_^

Severus is called to Godric's Hollow. Lily wants to talk to him and he wants to meet her son. An Unbreakable Vow is sworn and Severus nearly gains a son.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Nov 2009 / 23 Nov 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: An Oath to Her 23 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)
    Oh, bittersweet. You know, Lily said she wanted Severus to vow to love Harry but then she didn't follow through with it. I think she assumed he would without the vow. It's sad that it isn't so, but perhaps for the better because Severus would have a really hard time following that vow.

    Nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    You're right, Lily assumed that Severus would love without the vow and she didn't want him to end up dying because of the wording.

    Thank you very much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.



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