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Reviews by Ponytail Goddess
After the war, Harry Potter is given the option of being reincarnated. He takes it, asking Snape to be his new father. This is the story of Evan Snape.
Not Deathly Hollows Compliant. Songfic. Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging, Resorting Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Dec 2010 / 19 Dec 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
Very nice writing. I look forward to finding out how potent Snape's potion was. -P.G. Author's Response: That would suck, wouldn't it? That would make for a dark little story. I'm glad that you enjoy the writing. Hopefully you will continue to like it (and hopefully the built in song lyrics didn't seem too strange).
I'm so excited for this fic--please update soon! -P.G. Author's Response: Wow. People don't usually tell me they're excited by my fanfics. I'm glad that you are, though, that's really encouraging. I'll try to get through another chapter tonight. I'm trying to do a couple of pages a night so that I don't have an excuse to quit. Now that I've beaten NaNoWriMo, I know it's possible to finish stuff, so no excuses (hopefully!) I'm glad that you can tell already that Evan is different. That's kind of an important part of the story- just because Evan came from Harry doesn't mean Evan is Harry.
Too late now though. Yay for Severus show Harry affection openly, even though it's not what he's used to. And poor Harry, I felt so bad for him when he felt safe in the closet. It must be so weird for him to not understand where his feelings are coming from. I could really get used to daily updates *hint hint*. Please update soon! -P.G. Author's Response: Daily updates would be nice, wouldn't they? I am attempting it, although who knows what will happen when school starts back up again. I might end up making this fic kind of short, just so that I can be all happy and say "hey, i finished one"! I've found that small encouragements make me do better in the future. I might make it into a series tho. I'm not sure.
Thank you for your reviews. They are incredibly encouraging :)
I love the deep emotions of this fic. -P.G. Author's Response: Haha, Poor Sev, right? He expects the boy to be able to tell him what's wrong, and of course Evan doens't have any idea what's going on. Perhaps he does need to look into Harry's old life, I hadn't yet decided how much he should now about it. Thank you for the review and the encouragement. I really appreciate it. ~Cait
Nice work! I'm loving this story! -P.G. Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying it. I've found that if I do a bit of writing before bed, I can get about a chapter done a day. (Of course, "chapter" means between 2 and four pages, but that's a different story). I think that's the way to do it... That way it's like I can be satisfied with just getting a little bit done at a time, instead of feeling like I have to find time to write ten pages. None of that has anything to do with your review... But I believe you said at one point that you were liking the daily updates? That's why you get stuck with my "proud of myself" update rant. I'm glad that you liked the conversation between Dumby and Snapers. I didn't want it to get too harsh, but at the same time I felt like something needed to be said. But I'm glad that it didn't drag or come off sounding forced or contrived or anything. Thanks a ton for your encouragement :) ~Cait
I hope Severus is able to figure some of these things out that concern his son. Not being able to say 'thank you' might be a hard thing to live with, especially when Severus is trying to teach the boy manners. I look forward to more! Thanks for all of the fast updates! -P.G. Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying it, and I'm glad that the chapter has left you curious. As for Evan being alright with Snape being gone, it does show that he is a bit more trusting than you might have thought... Sometimes. Like most children, Evan will be sort of contradictory at times-- he might be okay this time and throw a fit the next time. It's hard to say.
I was so excited that you updated--I hope to read more soon! -P.G. Author's Response: You would think he would learn... but he thought that Harry would listen to his directions, and his house was warded, so it wasn't as dangerous as Hogwarts. He's starting to learn what kind of trouble four year olds can get into, though The tree was gone. But it still got what it wanted. Severus had to admit to that.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2009 / 21 Dec 2009 Series: Seasonal winds - Challenges: Yes to Lemon Drops
-P.G. Both Harry and Severus get what they really want for Christmas.
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Dec 2009 / 22 Dec 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
-P.G. Author's Response: I always thought he did...Have a Merry Christmas P.G! Just a piece of random fun about what would happen if Snape had been the one to tell Harry that he was his father in Tug. Written in response to Taryn’s Star Wars challenge. This is just written by an insane author and is not cannon to my non-cannon fic. (Did that even make sense?) Thanks to J.K Rowling and George Lucas. (Gotta love those two!)
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Dec 2009 / 23 Dec 2009 Series: None - Challenges: Star Wars
-P.G. Author's Response: Well, I had to get "Use the Force, Luke!" in there somehow...wouldn't everyone automatically think of doors in that statement? lol No, but thanks for reading this. It helped with writers block amazingly enough. |
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