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Reviews by Ponytail Goddess
Part 3 of the A better Childhood series. It's Christmas, and the fourteen year-old Severus has to face Santa. Harry and Hermione are there with their own little families as well. HP/NT, CW/HG, AD/MM, AM/PP
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging Categories: Reverse Roles > Big Brother Harry
Rated: K
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Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Dec 2009 / 24 Dec 2009 Series: A Better Childhood - Challenges: None
-P.G. Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! Abandoned in the wilds of northen England, lost and alone, Harry stumbles across a small town and discovers a street called Spinners End...
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Child fic Categories: Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Dec 2009 / 24 Dec 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
Nice work! -P.G.
-P.G. P.S. I think you're right about first bikes being red; mine was! Severus visits his son and grandchildren for Christmas. But nothing is peaceful in the Snape household and Severus needs to get things under control.
H/Hr. Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Dec 2009 / 26 Dec 2009 Series: How Many Drops? - Challenges: Christmas
-P.G. Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. And thank you very much for reviewing! Harry, having learned of his uncle's plans to step up the abuse against him, decides to run away. At the same time, Severus Snape, having been dispatched to ensure he is safe, discovers that Harry is abused and decides to kidnap him.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive Tags: Child fic, Evil!Albus, Runaway Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Out of Character, Violence
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Apr 2014 / 26 Dec 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
-P.G. Author's Response: Unfortunately, you are right. People often do attempt to ignore the obvious if they don't like its implications. Kinda sad, huh? I'm really glad you like the chapter. Thank you for reviewing.
Great work! -P.G. Author's Response: Albus is going to be difficult to get around, but in the end it will be worth it. Thanks for the review.
I'm very interested in what's going to come next. Please update soon! -P.G. Author's Response: You're right. Severus should have left already with Harry, but there are a few things left to do on Privat Drive........ Summary to the "HBP Alternate Ending" Challenge by Ponytail Goddess. A world where Draco isn't up to the task of killing Dumbledore and Snape is called to the rescue.
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Jan 2010 / 07 Jan 2010 Series: None - Challenges: HBP Alternate Ending
I hadn't actually pictured Draco being in this fic, but it was nice to have an explanation for why he chose not to do it. It was nice to see him in a more courageous role for a change, taking a stand against the darkness, no matter how small it is. Sure, he's doing it to save his own hide right now, but if he returns to school, he will have to be brave to face all of his friends who will know what he failed to do. I'd love to read more. I think it would be interesting if Snape was to help Harry plan his Horcrux journey, possibly helping him along the way. Thank you so much for writing my challenge; you did a wonderful job with it! -P.G. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I wasn't planning on having Draco involved either, but he worked his way in. Darn Syltherins. :) If I make it into a longer fic, Snape would definitely be in on horocrux hunting. :) I enjoyed writing it.
-LJ Angry with Snape, Harry goes down to talk to the professor only to witness Snape's downfall when someone else comes to speak to the former Death Eater.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
What an excellent description of Severus making potions--I think that was my favorite part of the chapter. Excellent work; I can't wait to read more! -P.G. Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this first chapter. And yeah, everyone's been worried or mad at me for what I did to Snape. But you'll all see what happens next chappie. And I'm glad that you liked that description. Thanks for the review, P.G.!
I also really enjoyed Harry's panic and emotional state during this chapter. It was portrayed quite realistically. Nice work! -P.G. Author's Response: Glad you liked Harry in this. I was going for the shell shock affect, him torn between hating Snape, but also not wanting anything really bad to happen to the man. We all wanna kill a teacher at times, right? So that's the side I was going for in the first chapter, but in this, he realize just what would happen if Snape had really died. And Yay thinking! It's not illegal, so I'm glad you're using your brain. ^_^ And you'll see what's happening next chapter. Promise. Thanks for the review, P.G.! |
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