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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: It's Hard to Overstate My Satisfaction
| 25 Mar 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Great so far! Keep it up! NOTE: Harry is a parselmouth not a parseltongue
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: We Do What We Must
| 08 May 2010
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I like this so far!! Keep it up!!
Severus survived the war, but something is wrong. Harry is asked to rectify it, but what happens when he can't?
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Misc
Title: Chapter 1: Understand Me
| 01 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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AWESOME!! Very dark, but very cool, and very well-done. Poor Harry! Poor Snape!
Drabble. Snape leaves Harry alone in detention for ten seconds. He returns to find that his private potions ingredients have been destroyed.
Takes Place: 7th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 21 Apr 2009 / 21 Apr 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Snape's Broken Cabinet
| 21 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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LOL. I like. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue)
| 30 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Good so far! I'm really wondering where you're going to go with it. I really like Snape's dream. A note, though - Voldemort is not that explicit about when he's going to punish someone. He's more like, "I am disappointed - crucio!" then "I am going to punish you." I'm enjoying it, though!!
Author's Response: Thank you! (I wasn't really thinking 'Voldemort--no talky' when I wrote it. I was just trying to further plot. I'll keep that in mind and remember that for the next chapters!) I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've never really done a plot before much less Harry Potter.
Title: Chapter 2: Counting Down to the 31st
| 13 Jul 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I like so far! I like your characterizations especially. Sev is Sev, DD is DD, Malfoy Sr. is Malfoy Sr, and Malfoy Jr, Malfoy Jr. I especially like the subtle uncertainty of Draco, like he's TRYING to be cruel to Harry, but doesn't quite WANT it. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you. When I was walking down the corridor at school just before I graduated, I heard my boots echo and I seriously thought I was in Malfoy's dungeon. Making people feel like they're <i>them</i> (and sort of just watching all this happen around them) is really important to me because that's what I love to feel as a reader. And foreshadowing, foreshadowing with Draco. But don't say I told you. :P (I was worried people wouldn't get that as it's rather hard for me.) Thank you muchly for the review!
Title: Chapter 1: My Little... Collection
| 04 May 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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ROFL!! I LOVE this. Freaking HILARIOUS. DANG!!!
Author's Response: ::snicker:: Thanks! =]
Title: Chapter 1: His Son
| 04 May 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Interesting. I really like how you left it ambiguous. I find the whole thing very disturbing, and so didn't really ENJOY reading it, but it is really good, regardless.
Harry is caught cooking in the Kitchens by one Severus Snape. Harry manages to stay without losing house points, but what happens afterwards? Written for the Hogwart's Kitchens contest.
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Misc
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 2
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 14 May 2009 / 11 May 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: Hogwart's Kitchens
Title: Chapter 1: Cake for a Potions Master
| 11 May 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I like it! I think you should leave it as a one-shot - you've got it set up that way, anyway, with the last chapter.
Title: Chapter 8: Awakening
| 04 Jul 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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*sharpens claws* *stalks*
lol I'm just playing. You're mean, though. Really mean.
Hehe thanks for the update, and for taking this off hiatus. Much fun. :0)
Author's Response: *backs up a bit* I hope you are...I don't wish to get more scratches. Harry already decided I needed to be punished for putting him through such havoc the entire story. Thanks for your Review though.
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