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Everywhere that Severus went, the fawn was sure to go... Snape’s convinced his life is a cruel joke. “Expecto Patronum...I await a protector."
Takes Place: 7th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Creature!fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 4
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Completed: No
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Updated: 22 Jun 2010 / 30 Jun 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Man Was in the Forest
| 30 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I like this!! Very nice start! (The image of Snape with a fawn trailing behind him is great lol)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading the first chapter! I loved the image in my head too and then a bunch of ideas for a fanfiction came up. I hope you can stick around to read the second chapter!
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 04 Jul 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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ROFL oh, this is great. Fantastic. Amazing. Poor Sev.
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Until Spring
| 09 Jul 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Wonderful!!! I like muchly. Poor Snape. He's so doomed. Doomed, doomed, doomed. And Harry's adorable!! Thanks also for the chapter end note: my mum used to work in a nature center and every year they'd get in 'abandoned' fawns that people had found and taken from their mothers. So good work! (And even if white-tailed deer are not native to GB, Harry could still be one. Dogs and cats are hardly native to Great Britain, after all.)
I never liked Rita Skeeter. My muses surprised me completely, when they brought me a fluffy bunny story, where Skeeter is a hero (kind of). Oneshot. Rated for some swearing. Post OotP.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 13 Jul 2009 / 13 Jul 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Better Late than Never
| 13 Jul 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I like!!! It's cute!!! I don't like Skeeter, but at the same time I could see this happening. She's not evil, after all.
Author's Response: Thank you! I disliked Skeeter through the books and many fanfics as well. Who knows where the idea for this little fanfic came from. Mila
Title: Chapter 4: Strange Occurrences
| 05 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Interesting. I really hadn't expected that one. How is THAT going to work??
Author's Response: You'll see, but I promise there won't be a magic potion that just makes everything okay. It'll be a hard and long road.
Title: Chapter 5: Just a Child
| 08 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I like! Though I really wonder what Sev just signed...
Author's Response: I don't know what he signed :P. I guess you'll have to wait and see...
Title: Chapter 7: Crawling Waves
| 13 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I like!! I love the mural. I would LOVE to have something like that in my room! I also really like Sev's insistence on pain medication, though you should keep in mind that Vicodin is VERY habit-forming. Anyway, good chapter, I'm on to the next!
Author's Response: Thanks. I would love to have one, too. It's like the only part I like about the beach. I know Vicodin is very habit-forming. (I watch House LoL), but it would be totally out of character for Sev to have wimpy Tylenol lying around.
Title: Chapter 8: Defense Against the Headmaster's Manipulations
| 13 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Neither won. They came to a relatively equitable agreement. Well, maybe Snape won. It sounds like he got pretty much everything he needed/wanted and Dumbledore was disappointed on a few points. Anyway, great chapter. I like the bit about the latex allergy. Those can be dangerous, and it's always good to inform the populace. :-)
Author's Response: I think it's a toss up, too. We'll have to see how it plays out to see who really won.
Title: Chapter 10: Secrets and Lies
| 18 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I dunno if I would want to eat a 'cookie' baked by Snape. He'd probably poison it or something just to prove that he doesn't 'do' cookies. Anyway, I like! Keep it up!
Author's Response: LoL. Good point. Assume it's actually a cookie not laced with poison or some potion. I was going to offer cookies made by me, but those have more chance of being inedible than Sev's cookies.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 0
| 11 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Hiya!! I'm not willing to beta, unfortunately (my own story takes up too much of my free time as it is!) but I can help on one point of English - 'inky' means very, very, dark. As such, an 'inky Christmas evening' turning into a 'dark night' doesn't make much sense. It sounds almost like the night is lightening up, which of course is not the case.
That said, I like the chapter. The conversation between Sev and Minerva is interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. *thinks* I hear your reasoning, but I still think I said what I wanted to say: that they are equivalent.
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