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I love to write and edit. You know those tests you'd do in school where you had to look at 5 different words and pick the correctly spelled one? Or "fix" wrong sentences? I loved those. ;-)

I've always got numerous stories in the works. I absolutely adore music. It's right up there with oxygen.

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Set during the Final Battle. Harry's in a bit of trouble and needs help. You know who our favorite savior is...

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Jul 2010 / 15 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Vanilla Twilight 15 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    That was a nice little story! I loved Harry's determination to find Voldemort and how Snape was helping Harry, even though he was weak too. :-)

    Great job!

Harry's just a scared little kid but no one can see this behind all his bravado. Or can they?
Severus goes to collect Harry from the children's home where he's grown up.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Dec 2010 / 15 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Awww, I loved that! Especially at the end there where you sorta get a glimpse that as tough as he acts, Harry doesn't feel quite so all the time.

    His accent was cute too. :-)

    Good work! :D

    Author's Response: Cheers! Yeah he kind of uses his attitude to cover up insecurities so he's not nearly as tough as he thinks he is! :)

The first oneshot based in my Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat series. It takes place almost immediately after the last chapter of LADTH.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Aug 2010 / 11 Aug 2010
Series: Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Potions Incident 12 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Haha, I enjoyed this a lot. I loved how Dumbledore knew exactly what was going on and yet still played along with Severus. Very cute. :-)

    I still love this series!

    Author's Response: :0) Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!! Hope you enjoy the next ones!

When a front page Prophet article declares, "Harry Potter Got Me Pregnant!" Harry knows he's in for an interesting year, especially considering he didn't do it. Even the fat lady won't let Harry into the common room until he shows her he is a true Gryffindor. This revelation leads to a surprise for Severus Snape.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Pregnancy, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 9 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Dec 2010 / 18 Sep 2010
Series: JAWorley's Challenges - Challenges: Father Not to Be
Title: Chapter 1: A Wonderful Summer 17 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    This looks like a really interesting start! I thought Harry's embarrassment at Snape finding out he was still a virgin was cute. :-)

    Draco is such a little butthead. I know he did something here...

    Also, I appreciated the scripture at the top. I'm a Christian too, so thanks for putting it up. :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  I'm glad to see other Christians.  I'm always happy to meet others!

What happens when Severus Snape comes upon a heavily warded compartment on the Hogwarts Express containing two students--one of whom is naked. One-shot.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2010 / 05 Nov 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Naked Truth 21 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Aww, that was cool. I loved how angry Snape was when he thought about the Dursleys. You did a really good job on this!

Title: Chapter 1: The Naked Truth 21 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Aww, that was cool. I loved how angry Snape was when he thought about the Dursleys. You did a really good job on this!

Nightmares at night have kept Harry awake for so long that he can no longer keep his eyes open during class. Potions Master Severus Snape is determined to teach the sixth year some respect.

In response to the ‘Sleeping During Class’ challenge by Jan_AQ.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2012 / 28 Nov 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Sleeping During Class
Title: Chapter 1: Knocturnal 27 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Awww, poor Harry. I feel so bad for the poor kid. Sleep is important for anybody, but especially for a growing teenage boy.

    I cringed when Snape woke him up in Potions. How humiliating, and besides that, frightening.

    Can't wait to see where this goes!

Title: Chapter 2: Defiance 27 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    And the plot thickens.

    I'm enjoying this story very much so far, but the head hopping, where you switch POVs mid-scene are very distracting. You might wanna look narrative voice and consider that aspect.

    But technicalities aside, I'm loving this storyline. Can't wait to see what Snape is going to do about this poor boy's insomnia!

    :D

Title: Chapter 3: Fear 27 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Awww, you go, Snape! Poor, poor Harry. Hopefully now he'll get some much needed sleep and help.

Title: Chapter 4: Potions and Ponderings 27 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Gads, poor both of them! Harry's distrust of Snape is so sad, yet understandable.

    Good chapter!


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