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Reviews by Ivy-Green
It was the start of his second year when Harry couldn't force his realization away any longer. He needed a father, even if it was a bad, uninterested father...he still needed one. So what motivated him to ask Severus Snape?
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 19 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Dec 2010 / 05 Sep 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Ivy-green, *sniggers at comment*, ahhh yeah, guess that can be true. Although he had good reason. The awkwardness will remain for now since it's still new for them both, unfortunatly. Haha, "dumbles" funny name, I like. And yes he is. Thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Sev, a grinch? NEVER! Haha, well he is allergic to happines, remember? It's a medical condition! ;). He is enjoying it though. Hugging is always well-liked, even by me! Thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Everyone seems to love that line, I'm pleased! Thanks though. You may use it in your stories, although as you said...credit and all. Oooh yup, the plot thickens. Thank-you. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Heh, yeah but I will be updating soon so fret not :P. Thank-you for each of your reviews! Severus wants to take the plunge but you know know what he's like! They're both not used to getting happiness for themselves and are unsure, confused and a whole lotter other things but they'll get there ;). Although you're right, Sev does want to be a dad heh. Cute, in my option. I'm pleased to hear it and as I said: will update soon! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Ivy-Green, It was meant to be :(. Haha, sign of good writing is when a reason starts yelling at their screen. I'm thrilled to hear that you liked it and that the emotion was set just as I hoped it would be. Aw, *hugs* thanks for reading and sending me a review. Will update really soon. -Mel :)
'Where have I failed you if you no longer wish for me to be your father?'- my heart literally hurt when I read that. I felt so bad for Severus here! (I guess it didn't help that I was listening to the Schindler's List soundtrack either though lol) Poor guy! "one that could surely be fixed or else Snape wasn't a Slytherin."- I giggled insanely on this line. I just couldn't help myself. Very good! "Yes, potions have always been very understanding of their master."- okay, I absolutely ADORE this line! It was perfect!! I don't know why, but I think it's brilliant!! Fantastic phrasing, I think! :) "It reminds me of your hair: dark and weird' He frowned."- okay, here I BURST out laughing! I could just see Severus's face, this blank annoyance while Harry's just looking in the mirror oblivious to how he's offended Snape! Man, that was hilarious! ...but hmmm...Harry's hair is 'weird' like Snape's? Is this going to lead to anything else? Or am I totally off and it was just a gateway into letting Harry know Snape knows more about his real family? Oh! You need to update soon so I can find out! Well, water, I "oo'd" and "aww'd" all through out this. Wonderful chapter! I understand the delay, but I'm also excited to hear that I'll be seeing another chapter again soon. Thanks for the story!! :D Author's Response: Ivy-Green Thanks!! :P. Glad I made you smile, because I adore your reviews and they make me smile, especially your long ones! All those lines/quotes were my favourite too. Glad you liked them as well! Yes Harry's hair is a bit alike Snape's, although he is comparing himself to the man for a reason, mostly because he is starting to consider himself his son without really realizing it. I am not going anywhere with this, at least not until the potion is in effect, but this is still significant. Although it was also used as a gateway. And I will update very soon lol. Thank you so much for the review, I adored it!! Will update most likely tomorrow or the day after. Looking forward to hearing from you again just as you are for my update. -Mel :)
Oh water! That was too sweet! Sad, but sweet. What a horrible nightmare to have! I'd cry and call out to my daddy too! Not that mine would run to me since I'm five hours away, but still. Poor little Harry! Oh, the part where Snape fell out of bed to get to Harry was too funny! I could just see him snap awake, trying to think and do several things all at once only to fall out of bed. XD Hilarious image, really! :D And the whole kitchen scene, I felt so bad for Harry! Thinking Snape doesn't like him when the man clearly does. But I understand the uncertainty of things too. I'm just glad Snape was able to make Harry feel a bit better. When they got back though, I was SURE Snape was going to tell Harry that he loved him, but no, Snape had to be all high and mighty man about it and just tell him not to be late. *snort* I was just so sure...but then it IS Snape I'm typing about. I did find a little mistake though that really bothered me in here: "transfigured his clothes to search out the treat before his mind woke enough"- I think you meant "Threat" I make all kinds of mistakes like this, and I just thought you'd want to know too. If you want me to shutup next time tell me, because I don't want to be rude! But this was a great chappie water! You saved my day with it! (had a terrible day) So thanks so much for updating!! I anxiously await more! :) Author's Response: Ivy-green, Honestly your reviews are truly a wonderful treat indeed! Your "Stubborn man' comment made me laugh, I do so every time I read it. I can't imagine anyone not crying out after such a nightmare, I tried to make it as horrible as possible. I could strangly picture him falling out of bed. I also don't think he's used to such sound in his house since his parents had died a long time ago and since then it's been deathly silent. Ha! Snape wanted to tell him, but of course he's a stubborn man and refused it once again. That and I do try to keep him in character :P. Oh and thanks for pointing out the mistake, I do want people to let me know so I can fix or avoid it. I'm glad I turned your terrible day into a nicer one, your reviews have the same effect- I really love them! And thanks, I'll update again quite soon. -Mel :) Drabble written for Graciella's Dr. Seuss Challenge. Harry gets caught writing some interesting poetry during Potion's class...
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Sep 2009 / 11 Sep 2009 Series: None - Challenges: Oh, the Fanfics You'll Write!
Author's Response: Thanks; I'm glad I could make your day! -P.G. (UPDATED: APR 02 2011) Snape wakes up from a coma to a new world in which Voldemort is dead and gone, defeated by Harry Potter. Deciding he has nothing more to live for, he tries to end his life, but things don't quite work out the way he planned. Harry gets pulled in by Dumbledore to assist with Snape's...little dilemma.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Aug 2010 / 11 Sep 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
I love your take on how the books probably SHOULD have ended...without the de-aging part maybe... but the Snape wanting it all to end is very believable. I mean, first he lived and focused on Lily, then he focused on saving Lily, and then when she died he focused on protecting the only part of Lily left in the world: Harry. So naturally when the threat was gone, he'd want everything to be over. Poor man. :( But I LOVE Harry in this. Very good. Mad at Dumbles (the git) and warry of the other professor, and forgiving Snape (^-^) the way it all should be! This is just great! I'm only sorry I didn't start reading before! I'm off to the next chappie! |
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