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I'm a huge fan of Harry Potter!

Severus Snape is my hero and favorite character by far. I have never forgiven J.K. for killing him off. I love to see him as a father figure to Harry. (Who needs James Potter? Not me!)

There are few pairings that I won't read about, but for some reason I cannot abide Ginny Weasley, unless she is a villian. I like her that way. Though that doesn't mean that I won't read fics with her as the love interest, it's just not my preference. Truth is that I adore reading and my tastes are rather eclectic, so bring on the stories, because I'm ready to review!

I have just started my first attempt at a Harry Potter fanfic and I hope that everyone will enjoy it. I welcome all constructive critism and any advice given will be noted.

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Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all...

NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat'

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Jul 2010 / 15 Mar 2009
Series: Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 29: Rat 11 Mar 2010
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    I think Sinestra just learned a valuable lesson. She will probably let Harry be for awhile, as she has suddenly realized that there is something going on with Harry that she doesn't understand. I wonder if she has realized yet that SHE not Harry is the problem. She was out of line when she decided to call Harry a rat, which I do believe is name-calling and juvenile. Harry was trying to be polite, she was the one that didn't want to maintain a neutral stance. In any case, she had no right to attempt to drag Harry anywhere, particularly not to Dumbledore. Next time she will keep her hands off...or lose them and her life.

    I'm glad that Harry did talk to Severus at least a little. Now, Severus knows that he is having an impact upon Harry and that Harry is beginning to depend on him as a source of support. Harry now knows that Severus can be hurt by him, which tells him that Severus must care about him.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like! Thanks for the nice long review!!

Title: Chapter 30: Winner takes All 20 Mar 2010
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    Good job, Severus! And I do mean that. He was right about not pushing too hard. His show of restraint will help Harry to trust him enough to eventually tell him what he needs to know. I know that he isn't angry at Harry for what happened and hopefully, Harry will realize that and lose some of his fear.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you liked!! And sorry it was so ridiculously short!! :0)

Title: Chapter 32: Homeless 26 May 2010
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    Poor Harry! He's gotten so used to all of his dreams turning to ashes that he's given up on them entirely. If he keeps up on this route, he's going to end up bitter, sad, alone, and friendless. It's rather unfortunate. I hope that someone will be able to break down the wall that Harry has built out of the fear of eventual rejection and loss, and soon.

    Author's Response: Yeah, poor Harry. His life kinda sucks right now. Thanks for the review!!

Title: Chapter 33: Reality 14 Jun 2010
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    All Severus has to do is tell Harry that he DOES want him...more than anything. Those are the words Harry needs to hear. No excuses or reasons, no trying to explain that he doesn't want to hurt him, just baldly tell him he wants to be his father. Better yet, come armed with adoption papers!

    Author's Response: LOL we'll see...

Title: Chapter 35: His Child 25 Jul 2010
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    I understand why Severus felt the need to tell Harry about his role when it came to the deaths of Lily and James and am totally unsurprised by Harry's reaction. I am really happy that Severus finally told Harry how he feels and that he wants to adopt him. He has finally given Harry the one thing he truly wants, a family that loves him.

The killing curse which was cast upon Harry as a baby had some unknown, yet devastating, effects on his ability to function in both the wizarding and muggle worlds.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 May 2010 / 25 Mar 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: We Do What We Must 08 May 2010
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    So far my favorite part is what Severus means in Parseltongue, but I am finding this a wonderful story beyond that. I hope that Harry will be able to worm his way into Severus' heart at some point. I wonder if the portrait of Slytherin could help teach Harry to speak English?

Drabble. Severus gets a little too eager to teach his young son about Potions...

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Apr 2009 / 15 Apr 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Just a Boy 19 Jan 2010
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    Ah..that was so sweet. Aren't little boys just wonderful at that age?

    Great little fic!

    Author's Response:

    They are; it was so much fun to write this with such a young and inquisitive Harry.  Thanks for reading!

    -P.G. 


Harry discovers something interesting about Snape. Entrant in the 2009 Challenge Fest. Response to the Weird Collection Challenge by Ponytail Goddess.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > #7 Challenge Fest
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2009 / 03 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Weird Collection
Title: Chapter 1: My Little... Collection 28 Oct 2009
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    Oh, that was priceless! Fabulous really! Hermione is an amazing personality and a wonderful friend, but Lord help anyone who crosses her.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  The female of the species really *is* the most dangerous, after all...!  ::snickers with madly twinkling eyes::

Title: Chapter 1: My Little... Collection 28 Oct 2009
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    Oh, that was priceless! Fabulous really! Hermione is an amazing personality and a wonderful friend, but Lord help anyone who crosses her.

Harry cannot forget Sirius’ death and feels guilty. When all the pain becomes too much, he decides to end his life. Will someone be able to stop him? Warning: explicit description of self harm, suicide attempt in ch.1

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Nov 2009 / 09 May 2009
Series: The Final Breeze - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 – Plans 11 Jan 2010
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed)
    You are a fabulous writer! I really enjoyed this one as well and look forward to it's sequel. Keep up the amazing work!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!


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