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A keen Harry Severus reader who thinks the writers on the site are fantastic. No time for beta reading but if you need a Brit Picker I can help!

i used to read on Fanfic but can't leave reviews there  although I can log in! I love to review good well written stories but I do not flame!

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Youth Is The Gift Of Nature by beargirl1393 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Due to a Potions accident, both Severus Snape and Remus Lupin have been de-aged. Both are now three months old, and it's up to Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy to put their rivalry aside for long enough to take care of them until an antidote can be found.

Takes Place: 7th Year, 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaged!Snape, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Mar 2017 / 26 Feb 2017
Series: None - Challenges: The Lupin-Snapes
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 03 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Sevy sounds OK but not Remy but can't think of anything else at the moment. Thank you a good chapter

    Author's Response: I had the same thought, to be honest. 'Sev' or 'Sevy' is okay for baby Severus, but I got stuck on trying to find a nickname for Remus. 'Remy' was the best I could come up with at the time, so that's why it stuck for now. Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a lovely chapter

Color in Darkness by WitchLips starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Hagrid sends an urgent message requiring Albus Dumbledore and Severus Snape to meet him at The Leaky Cauldron after giving Harry his school letter citing unforeseen circumstances in need of immediate attention. Unbeknownst to the Wizarding World, Harry has been mostly blinded, and is most certainly not a Potter. A BiologicalFather!Snape and Blind!Harry AU.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Out of Character, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Apr 2017 / 11 Mar 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Revelations 14 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    I love your "magical sight" ideas they give an extra dimension to the magical world thank you a great start.

A New World by Morgaine starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Hogwarts offers an informational meeting for all the muggle-raised first years. Harry decides to go. The only trouble is that his relatives would never take him.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Apr 2017 / 04 Apr 2017
Series: None - Challenges: Parent informational meeting
Title: Chapter 1: A New World 13 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Loved it! Thank you so much a delightful tale and told so well

    Author's Response: Thank you :) I am really happy you think so and liked it.

Geminus: Year One by watercrystals starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
When everything Draco and Harry knew about their lives crumble, can Severus be there to pick up the pieces and give the twin boys a family they'd always wanted?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern
Tags: Kidnapped, Ravenclaw!Harry, Runaway, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 10 May 2017 / 08 Apr 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Promises Kept 16 May 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Loved the lily in the vase a wonderful touch. Great chapter with clever turn of the cannon potions thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks!

Title: Chapter 3: King's Cross 17 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Loving although I hope they end up being friends with Hermione. I want them to be in the same house I hope they are. Thank you for your thoughtful story I love seeing Draco develop and change. I'm also hoping Severus will be at the sorting!

    Author's Response:

    Hermione isn't a main character in this fic, but if they're friends or not you'll have to wait and see. The sorting is next chapter, and Severus will certainly be there to see it.

    Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story and Draco's development! 


Title: Chapter 4: The Hogwarts Four 23 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Love your Harry he has a lovely smile! Fantastic chapter and I loved the fact that they decided to remain friends, didn't see Ron in Ravenclaw! Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Thank you!

Title: Chapter 1: The Lost Boy 13 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very dramatic a good start to the story thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Title: Chapter 2: Lies Don't Become Us 13 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very good chapter I like how you are developing the characters, thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you!! That's one of my key focuses with this series. 

Title: Chapter 5: Promises Kept 15 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Just re-read this again and it is so good that I wonder if you might consider updating it sometime you would make a lot of people happy I think


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