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a respond to Spring Fic Fest! "What makes the little bastard think I don't care about him?"
That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did.
He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Fmh
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 18 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- I love the interaction between them but spend a bit of time trying to sort out which scene we are in. Just a suggestion but could we have a break between the scenes to help us? Thank you for updating and I'm so glad you are feeling better
Author's Response: thank you for the review and i did put up line breaks... don't worry i will fix them ( it must have been messed up in the editing or something), you won't have to sort the scenes out anymore though, this chapter was the last one with flashbacks ;) stay tuned and i will be back soon!
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 15 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you for updating
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 06 Nov 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Brilliant and very angsty thank you. I can't believe any justice system could work like that but as they put Sirius away without a trial I suppose I must!
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 30 Nov 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you for updating. Severus will have to think fast to get them out of this hole.
Author's Response: thank you as always for reviewing ;)
Author's Response: thank you as always for reviewing ;)
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | 04 Jan 2018 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Very well written thank you. I'm not sue why James and Lily suddenly wanted Harry, is it revenge on Severus?
Author's Response: thanks and the back story is revealed in the last few chapters so you have every right be confused. stay tuned ;)
| Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 | 24 Apr 2018 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Very good chapter thank you for updating
Author's Response: thanks you for your great review!
At the beginning of her sixth year, Harriet Potter has a hard time dealing with Sirius's death. And when Moaning Myrtle discovers a terrible secret, Harriet's world begins to crumble. Can a certain Potions Master help? (Sorry, terrible summary. The story is better, I promise).
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Girl!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Girl!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Drug use, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Jun 2017 / 17 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Jun 2017 / 17 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 23 Jun 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Very well written and dramatic can't wait for the next chapter thank you so much
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
With the anniversary of the defeat of Voldemort fast approaching, the Wizarding World is finding it hard to bounce back. It is then that a certain Trio (plus one) find a chance to fix things the first time around far too good an opportunity to pass up. Harry hopes to save those he lost, including a certain Potions Master.
Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Time Travel
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Time Travel
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jul 2021 / 18 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jul 2021 / 18 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 02 Jul 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you a very perceptive chapter
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 03 Jul 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- I agree Hagrid had worked so hard to give an entertaining and unusual class, good for you in giving him a good response!
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 03 Jul 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Tantalising last sentence! Thank you for your updates they are much appreciated!