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| Hi, I'm Gatewaygirl (Gg) of Livejournal, InsaneJournal, Dreamwidth, etc. My first post here was my old, epic Severitus challenge piece, Blood Magic. I don't write a lot of gen, but that one makes up for it in length. :-) I recently posted a new (much shorter) story in that universe, Blood and Choice. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
| 08 Jan 2013
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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Greatly enjoying this story!
When Harry was hit by the killing curse, a horcrux was created. In this story, Harry is affected by the piece of Voldemort's soul inside his head in a more noticable way than in the books. Muggles, not knowing any better, decide he must be mentally ill. What effects might the treatment on a psychiatric ward have for the boy-who-lived and the wizarding world?
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Title: Chapter 20: In his mind
| 29 Jun 2013
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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Very much enjoying this. I like how the wizards and witches can't readily map Harry's treatment to anything. Severus will figure out the "mud" eventually, I suppose!
Title: Chapter 8: Helpfulness
| 30 Jul 2013
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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Yay, Sirius! And Harry has no idea why he was reassuring, does he? :-)
Happily waiting for more!
Title: Chapter 4: Blackness
| 01 Jul 2013
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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You've done a great job developing this scenario while keeping Snape and Harry in character! I'm enjoying the story. :-)
Do you want minor corrections? For example, you have "curse through" rather than "course through." (This is probably a typo, but if not "course" in this sense means to race swiftly, from the term for hunting with a greyhound, whippet, or other hound that hunts by sight.)
In the Wizarding World, Father Christmas exists. Of course, not all witches and wizards know this, because only children who would not receive presents otherwise are given a present from the man himself. But when something unexpected comes up Christmas Eve, he’s in the market for two substitute Santas to tag-team his complicated route. Who better to ask than the boy whose name has been on his list almost ten years running, and the man who has forgotten what Christmas once meant for him? Either Father Christmas is crazy to put Harry Potter and Severus Snape on the same team, or he knows something they don’t. One way or another, it’s going to be one heck of a gamble if he wants all the gifts delivered on time. Entrant in 2013 Holiday Fic Fest.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
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Categories: Fic Fests > #15 Winter Fest 2013, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 9
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 11 Jan 2014 / 10 Jan 2014
Series: A Christmas Gamble
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 9: Time Returns
| 14 Jan 2014
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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That was delightful. I never would have read something of this description if it wasn't by a writer I liked. Harry and Snape fill in for Father Christmas? Crack syrup, right? But no! You made the premise believable, and hit a good balance with the complexities of Snape's bitterness and Harry's pride.
Thank you! I'm home with a head cold and this was a perfect cozy read. :-)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you GatewayGirl! I am glad that you had faith enough in my writing to convince you to read this insane idea! Believe me, when I first came up with the premise I was wondering how on earth I could make it believable. I tried really hard to make it that way, so I am glad you feel I passed the test. Crack syrup ... haha, I like that. This idea does fit that bill, doesn't it? Nice to know I helped make your evening cozy considering you have a cold. Get better soon! Oh, and I would definitely recommend making some ginger lemon tea with lots of honey (good for sore throat, cough, and sinuses I have found) - there should be a recipe somewhere online. You can buy teabags of the stuff in stores, but it doesn't take long to boil yourself, and is so good homemade provided you have ginger root/powder, lemons, and honey! Best of wishes, Whitetail.
Title: Chapter 8: You are Not Alone in This
| 22 Apr 2014
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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I adore your alternate timeline characters! I want them to be off being happy in some AU. :-)
Thanks for this story!
Author's Response: Aw I'm so glad to hear that. Like I said to Moon Willow: Sev's second journey was initially only going to be one or two chapters, but I totally just ran with it and had so much fun crafting this whole other world. I'm glad you like it. I know some people really want the Severus to go back to reality, so it's good to hear people like the AU. Thanks for taking the time to review
Title: Chapter 15: The Beginning
| 02 May 2014
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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And ... it's 1:36 AM. On a weeknight. *sigh* Excellent story! I like how Jason was an easier first step for Severus than Harry.
(And yes, I'd like an epilogue.)
Title: Chapter 15: The Beginning
| 28 Jan 2016
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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I love this story! I certainly hope I have reviewed it before, but I might have been too busy bawling the first time. I reread it all over the last two nights. Your Severus is wonderfully difficult while remaining sympathetic, and I feel so for poor Harry, having to be the one to end the dream of everything he wants most, and in such a terrible way.
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: An Enemy and A Goblin
| 11 May 2017
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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Very happy to see more of this engaging story!
Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the new chapter! :D
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Rescuer
| 28 Aug 2014
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Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed)
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Ooo! More, please! :-)
Author's Response: Coming soon! Thanks for reviewing!
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