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Reviews by Dream Painter
Due to a Potions accident, both Severus Snape and Remus Lupin have been de-aged. Both are now three months old, and it's up to Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy to put their rivalry aside for long enough to take care of them until an antidote can be found.
Takes Place: 7th Year, 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaged!Snape, Deaging Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Mar 2017 / 26 Feb 2017 Series: None - Challenges: The Lupin-Snapes
Nice update - my favorite bit is how Harry and Draco are already behaving like an old married couple. :P That sort of dynamic always amuses me too much. Oh, they are going to be doing some learning, all right. Not only about taking care of infants, but putting up with each other! When everything Draco and Harry knew about their lives crumble, can Severus be there to pick up the pieces and give the twin boys a family they'd always wanted?
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern Tags: Kidnapped, Ravenclaw!Harry, Runaway, Spying on Harry! Snape Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 10 May 2017 / 08 Apr 2017 Series: None - Challenges: None
Great start! Author's Response: That was a really rough day for him indeed. I had a little trouble writing it at first, poor Draco. But you're right, at least he's found Harry. Thank you for the review! :)
Ah, Severus. I agree with Minerva - a little heavy on the dramatics there, Sev. Author's Response: Yay! I was actually surprised while planning this chapter that there were so many similarities, which worked really well for the characters so that was fun. Glad you're happy about Tonks :) Haha, yeah, Severus is doing a lot of sulking at the moment. He just found out he has not one, but two Potter brats coming to Hogwarts. Thanks for the review.
Oh, but I don't want them to be separated into different Houses! D: D: I mean, I suspect they will be, and I have every confidence that they will find a way to remain close regardless, but it will still make me a little sad. They just found each other, dagnabit! Wonderful chapter - I look forward to the next update! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback, it means a lot and has been helpful. It's also reassured me I'm doing some things right at least haha. Draco's got so much conflict going on, and it's why I chose to make him the main character POV as he does have quite a journey ahead of him. I can't say anything about the sorting, spoilers and all that, but really enjoyed reading your thoughts on it. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far, and thanks again for the reviews - absolutely made my day!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!! I'm also glad you approve of Ron being in Ravenclaw. :)
Great chapter, over all. I am so with Ron about the stairs. Once upon a time, I attended a college with lots of stairs everywhere and lemme tell you, running late was hell. Lots of things to enjoy in this update, which I did. Nicely done! Author's Response: Perhaps ;)
Thanks! And yeah, I'm with Ron about the stairs too. Severus and Remus raise Harry after his parents are killed.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape Tags: Child fic Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character
Chapters: 6 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Aug 2017 / 26 Apr 2017 Series: None - Challenges: Moony & Sev's Child
Author's Response: Thanks! It's mostly written, so I hope you like where it goes.
Author's Response: I know, right? Sometimes we, as adults, don't really get how kids see the world (and they don't get us either). |
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