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A Life Missing by AllisonMadness starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Harry is trying to move on after a loved one’s death. Entry in the 2012 Prompt Fest. Prompts: thunderstorm, buttons in a jar

Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012, Misc
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 May 2012 / 09 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Life Missing 10 May 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Really beautiful and touching story; I loved how you sketched out the adult personalities and all the little details you put into Harry and Hermione's lives.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Planning Ahead by Bil starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
In which Voldemort’s plans are upset, Severus is annoyed, and Harry has a new career goal. There is also a kitten, because kittens are cool. Entry into the 2012 Prompt Fest

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 May 2012 / 09 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Planning Ahead 10 May 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Nuts but in a good way. Loved the Harry/Severus conversation- very lively and, in a strange way, believable

Past Featured Story Good Night, Harry by Bil starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Harry only defeated Voldemort because he wanted a good night’s sleep. Entry in the 2012 Prompt Fest. Prompts: blood-curdling scream, graveyard shift

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 May 2012 / 26 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Good Night, Harry 03 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Loved it- very funny and unusual take :)

Always by writtenword1 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
The Potters survived Voldemort's attack, ending his reign of terror. The Wizarding world is back in balance, but for how long? And at what cost?

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Jul 2012 / 24 Jun 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Eleven 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Facinating twist at the end- really unexpected and original. I loved the dialogue throughout and am looking forward to more

Psychosis by SnowWhiteOwl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]
When Harry was hit by the killing curse, a horcrux was created. In this story, Harry is affected by the piece of Voldemort's soul inside his head in a more noticable way than in the books. Muggles, not knowing any better, decide he must be mentally ill. What effects might the treatment on a psychiatric ward have for the boy-who-lived and the wizarding world?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 40 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2013 / 04 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Lily's child 05 May 2013
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Interesting premise, I like your portrayal of the characters though you might want to try reading dialogue aloud- mostly it flows and sounds realistic but some parts sound a little stilted.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing!

    When I wrote the first chapter, I had just started writing in English (I'm not a native speaker) so I hope my skills will have improved by now! (Though I must admit, I thought it rather difficult to write Vernon and Petunia in a halfway credible way)


Title: Chapter 2: Becoming mad 05 May 2013
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Very good progression, minor characters feel rounded and the thought processes of the major characters and their reactions are consistant and realistic (given who they are) Good chapter

Title: Chapter 3: The in-between 05 May 2013
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Another good chapter. I like the way you have portrayed Harry's thoughts and the detail in the medical world

Title: Chapter 4: Killing him or killing himself? 05 May 2013
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Nice dramatic chapter. Petunia seems to be getting attached to Harry, which is natural.

    Author's Response: Yeah, I always thought that Petunia must feel something for Harry, and after the incident with the Dementor's in book 5 I think even Rowling portrayed her this way, so I though something as dramatic as this would bring out another side of her.


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