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Penname:
| Severa [Contact]
| Better be Slytherin!
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| Ashley (female)
| Member since: 20 Jun 2010
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| I am not a writer. However, I am something of a grammar nerd, so I am definitelly availible as a beta reader. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 16: Volare Percipio
| 31 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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It has been years since you've updated, but you did just respond to a review a few days ago. Any chance we'll be getting a few more chapters? This has become one of my favorite stories on this website!
Title: Chapter 17: Postscript
| 07 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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This was absolutely beautiful. Thank you.
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
| 13 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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I know I'm a bit late in reviewing this, but I am definitely enjoying this story. Since I am only on chapter 17, I have a feeling it will be a late night for me. This is really good!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm late in replying to you too! Sorry about that. I'm really glad that you're enjoying Slave Child. I hope you've caught up on sleep since then, lol. Thanks so much!
Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
| 11 Aug 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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Thanks for the update! I hope the next chapter arrives soon... (hint) :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 68 is up now. Chapter 69 may be a couple weeks as I've just started teaching again and it's a busy time at first. But I'll get to it asap.
Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all... NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat'
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 33: Reality
| 10 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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I love this story. One chapter left...please tell me you are going to finish it? I truly hope that Severus will make it permanent.
Author's Response: Yes, of course I'm going to finish it! It was not a one-chapter-and-then-I-abandon this, I promise.
Title: Chapter 35: His Child
| 24 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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That last speech by Severus was brilliant; I almost cried. Thank you for a wonderful story.
By third year, Harry was starting to think he knew his own identity. Then, the discovery of an old secret threatens to throw his world into turmoil, yet again. Nor is he the only one who finds his life affected... Who is he, anyway?
Takes Place: 3rd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 39
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 15 Sep 2015 / 04 Mar 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
| 26 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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This is such a great story! I can't wait read about their first Christmas together.
While waiting in Dumbledore's office, Harry and Snape are suddenly transported into a series of unending memories. In response to 'Through the eyes of Severus Snape' challenge by watercrystals.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Time Travel
Categories: Misc
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 28 Dec 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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Ahh! I hate cliffhangers! My only advice would be to make the chapters longer :)
Author's Response: Haha yes, that cliffie was rather evil of me xD I know this was pretty short, but hopefully the next one will be longer. Thanks for reviewing ^.^
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Christmas is all around
| 07 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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This chapter really touched me. I'm not sure why, but I think it is because you captured exactly what having a first "real" Christmas would feel like to someone who was neglected for most of their life. You are also becoming really effective at the sentimental Harry-Snape moments; they seem very real and very special, without coming off as sappy or out of character. I can't wait to read more!
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 29 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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I love the interaction between Harry and Neville at the end of this chapter. Snape was horrible to Neville, yet he still supports Harry and wants him to be happy. You're right, Neville is definitely a Gryffindor - I think Neville's reaction here is very much in character. Thanks for another great chapter! Oh, and can Rita Skeeter be *very* publicly humiliated?
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