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Victoire [Contact] Better be Slytherin!
Call me: Karolina (female) Member since: 30 Nov 2010
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About me:

21st of May, 23:48 CET time, if you looked there, you would find just one sentence stating: "Just a teenager from Poland, interested in HP ff."

I realized that it probably doesn't help much if someone wants to know me better and you have only one story availaible and one sentence. 

So, first off, I would like to state that I am reading this website every day but I log in rarely. Why? I usually forget my password and I am too lazy to remind myself it by an e-mail.

So, yes, I am a teenager from Poland. I love Snape mentors Harry fan fictions, though I prefer ones who are not placed in pre-Hogwarts era. I prefer Harry, who can say everything for himself. I mean, he is a teenager and those usually have a bunch of hormones (like me;-)) so of course they cannot be responsible for every their action... But still Harry can think and suffer consequences himself. I hope that I explained it properly :p.

My interests, other than fan fiction, are: writing in general, history, IT things and some several other things.

You may also want to know, why there are so little stories of me availaible there. Well, the thing is that I have a looot of ideas but when I start making something out of them, they suddenly change themselves... or end... or other things... and I have a lot of stories in progress. But maybe I'll improve.

Oh, I've written a lot there. Interesting, considering that I hate writing 'about me' infos. Just the fact that I prefer it to be written by other people.

As a reward that you got to this place, here, have fun fact - I like English language but I hate English lessons :( 

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Past Featured Story A Place for Warriors by owlsaway starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 554]
Snape and Harry are locked in the Room of Requirement by Dumbledore. Harry's magic works, and Snape's doesn't. Will they kill each other? In response to the 72-Hour Challenge.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue 07 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    I'm conducting a summer action of reading all stories on PnS that have been completed, so I went through your story too!

    I usually really don't like stories based on this challenge on being locked for 72h. This one though is extraordinary. As much as I believe that Rowling's Albus Dumbledore would never run to such means just to ensure peace between Snape and Potter — this one story sounds... like everything in its place, like everything has its base. I'm not sure how to explain it, but I liked the plot and the events, really. I also liked how your Snape isn't all running around and hugging Harry everytime something happens to him. Nope, the relationship between them is developing very slowly, and it makes these small gestures like Snape helping Harry with his burnt hands or stroking his hair — it makes them mean so much.

    Hoping to read more of yours :)

Past Featured Story Slave Child by Kristeh starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1252]
A duel with Draco leads to drastic and permanent consequences for both Harry and Severus.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Master Snape > Slave Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 79 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Nov 2011 / 27 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 18 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    I looove you for mentioning my homecountry Quidditch team! :D :D :D

    Awesome chapter, as usually. Can't wait for the next one :)

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  No problem, and I'm glad you liked the chapter!

An Uncertain Future by Pandora starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 287]
After the final battle, Harry goes back into Snape's memories. What he finds, shocks him and turns what should have been his happiest days, into a living hell.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 2012 / 27 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Post-DH Sevitus
Title: Chapter 33: Auld Lang Syne 01 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    Awesome story, you evil cliffhangerer :)

    Author's Response: OOops...sorry about that! Happy New Year and thanks for reviewing.

Past Featured Story A May 2nd Carol by Attackfish starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
After Nagini bites him, Severus is visited by the spirits of the Marauders.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #6 Winter > Christmas, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: T - Warnings: Suicide Themes
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Dec 2008 / 26 Dec 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Title: Chapter 1: A May 2nd Carol in Prose, Being a Ghost Story of Hogwarts 07 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    I'm conducting a summer action of reading all stories on PnS that have been completed, so I went through your story too!

    Oh my... I'm not sure why I've missed it earlier but I surely regret it! I dropped a few tears over this story. It's great. Just great plot, great ending. I don't think anyone of us likes how Snape died in 7th part of book, so anybody that messes with that and is doing it well deserves a 10/10 grade on story. Hope you're gonna write some more awesome stories like that. And... let May the 2nd Carol sound!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it!  It's always nice to get a review on old stories.  It's been a long time since I wrote anything in the HP fandom but I do have a story I'm working on set in the Good People and Death Eaters series.  I hope you get to see it and like it when it's finished.

A Strange Turn of Events by Kristeh starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Harry is summoned to the time of the Founders during an Occlumency lesson with Snape. Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. In response to the Back in Time Challenge by Mystery.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 May 2009 / 11 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Back in Time
Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue 07 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    I'm conducting a summer action of reading all stories on PnS that have been completed, so I went through your story too!

    The plot is interesting, although in my opinion, getting to Salazar was too easy. And what disappointed me is that you decided to skip all the events that have happened after return. I'd love to see some complicated development of Severus and Harry relationship, and you presented it kinda like "they came back and they were happily living after". But yeah, the plot is good. And the writing style is nice too. Hope you're gonna write more and longer :)

    Author's Response: Thank you for such a thoughtful review.  Yes, parts of the story are rushed.  I wrote this for a Fic Fest here on P&S so there was a time constraint.  Also I had never really meant for it to be a terribly in-depth story.  I think I was writing 'Slave Child' at the time and it was my main interest; I only took a break to participate in the Fest.  But yes, I did skip over some bits and it's not as in-depth as it could have been. 

Grief by Ebbtide starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Harry expresses his grief. Snape helps. Reply to the Barenuckle Boxing challenge by Miss Teinge

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: Character Bashing
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Aug 2010 / 30 Aug 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Barenuckle Boxing
Title: Chapter 1: Grief 08 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    A brilliant story with a very depressing ending. I love such snapshots :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. You give the most awesome reviews. <3 <3. I'm glad you loved the story. 

Cursed Life by Ebbtide starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Umbridge attacks Harry, Snape comes to the rescue! Response the OOTP: Crucio C challenge by Royalnavigator

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Character Bashing
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Aug 2010 / 31 Aug 2010
Series: None - Challenges: OOTP: Crucio C
Title: Chapter 1: Cursed Life 08 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    Another brilliant snapshot. I just love those... So short and yet so full of love. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. That is one of the most beautiful reviews. <3. Thanks. :). 

Perseverance by cara-tanaka starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
After 4th year, Harry hasn't had it easy. With everything that's going on and school, how much more can he take before he reaches his breaking point? He finds help in the least expected person. Eventual Severus adopts Harry fic. AU

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Sep 2011 / 21 Sep 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Talks and Thoughts 01 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    I have to admit to a big sin. I have read this story sooo many times, and especially this one particular chapter, and the one before. And I haven't commented. Now, when I looked once again at it and saw the amount of reviews you have received, I felt I have to write something.
    So, dear cara-tanaka, you are really an awesome writer. Maybe a slow one (well, I suppose we all prefer reading than writing in a longer perspective), but really, really good. I loved the scene, when Snape got to know about Harry's migraine and how he treated it. Also, I am very interested in how Harry will exploit his interest in Art, since it seems to be really calming for him!
    I hope your RL issues will disappear and you will be able to provide us with another awesome chapter soon! :)

    Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you so much Victoire. Your review made my day. :D I'm so glad you like it and that you think I'm a good writer. This is my first story so I've very happy with the response and more than pleased and flattered you think so highly of my writing. It's alright. It happens, so I can understand wanting to read more than write. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I have five pages of the next chapter written so far so I'm going to try and work on that more tomorrow, so we'll see how far I get though I do hope I won't take so long posting again. I'm slow in writing because I want that when I write, for the characters actions and dialogue to feel natural and not forced or rushed so it takes time for me to iron it out to satisfaction. Thank you so much again and I hope to have more for you soon and that I see you around when the next chapter comes out :D Thanks again :D

LADTH shot #4: Harry Potter and the Pretty Rock by RhiannanT starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Harry, Blaise, Ron, Hermione, and Theo decide to check out what Dumbledore is hiding through the trapdoor.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Nov 2011 / 05 Nov 2010
Series: Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Responsibility 10 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    Love the story :) As all of yours. And those cute bunnies! Hopefully your muse will be back for loooong time :)

Simple Wisps of Snow by silvermoonfae starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 39]
Winter has come again and all seems well in the castle. Christmas is all but around the corner. And even Snape seems more...approachable. But is it really? Is it all too good to be true? What secrets does the castle hide? And what is the enigma of The-Boy-Who-Lived?(Edited recently)

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Self-harm
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 10 Jan 2011 / 30 Nov 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Dazed 10 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed)
    Aww... I think that Daphne could be an interesting addition to Harry's life &_&. Just, well, don't forget about Sev!

    Author's Response: Coolio, thanks for the feedback :) of course we couldn't forget about sevie could we, we all loves him too much for that :) Thanks a mill got the review :D


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