Membership status: Member
Title: Chapter 1: Just Another Quiet Day
| 19 Apr 2012
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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Fluffy *smuggle*
Author's Response: :) Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: What do you Believe In?
| 19 May 2012
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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Not my taste, but somehow it's interesting and I am still reading it. And your writing skills got better, congratz :)
Author's Response: Cool thanks for reading
Severus and Harry make a deal.
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 23 Jun 2012 / 23 Jun 2012
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Deal
| 24 Jun 2012
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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I'm not in love with this. Was there limit of words or something? Cos I believe it would be better if Severus try to haggle more, react more emotional on this request or something. Like that I think it's plain, blank even... and there is few moments when I had simple question - who, what, why? Well, for me it's just to little, it could be good prologue to something, though.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review and your honest opinion, Sirena. I will keep in mind what you’ve said when writing my next story. My goal is to improve my writing skills. Thank you for helping me.
After getting sixteen year old Harry out of jail over the summer, Severus Snape must deal with a number of things, including: trying to maintain a relationship with his future wife, building a relationship with his future step-son, and trying to figure out the ever-changing enigma that is Harry Potter.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Runaway, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 2: Startling Realities
| 06 Jul 2012
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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Bonding part was really funny one, somehow is hard to see Sev wanted to bond to some boy because of his mother XD
Title: Chapter 3: Riddling Out The Truth
| 06 Jul 2012
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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Ohhh, someone going to have a big time fit... And such no heart, shame on you Sev >.> His family left him behind and move over and you think just how to get rid of him too, pfff And in what manner! Orphanage please! >.< I don't know what will make you see if something this horrible had no effect :/
Title: Chapter 1: Kissed
| 27 Aug 2012
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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Petunia finally has an excuse to get rid of Harry, who finds himself in another abusive home. But then there is Severus living nearby, who - at first reluctantly - will try to help the boy. Will they find common ground?
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Abuse Recovery, Adoption, Injured!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Healer Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Morning at the Dursley's
| 21 May 2013
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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Dostane to samo jeśli przeczytam polska wersje z ff czy polecasz angielską? ;)
Author's Response: :D W polskiej Jest cały drugi rozdział :D
Title: Chapter 46: Do you know why you are being punished?
| 14 Nov 2014
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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I really enjoy this story. I think you got what you wanted with this chapter, cos one being punished is more angry with punisher then punishment itself ;) or it just seems like that since it is easier to be angry with something material not with concept ;) Your lecture was good too... I am getting really put out with though I will need to get better with things like that if I get kids... lectures are hard!
Title: Chapter 11: An iron cylinder on wheels
| 05 Aug 2013
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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You don't have to be a genius to see he got to much potion in his body and it becoming somehow toxic, so Snape will find out sooner or later, depend how much you want to torment Harry ;)
Harry has a little problem, followed by a little freak out, and compounded by a confusing conversation with the Sorting Hat, who has special things in mind for him and Professor Snape. A (sort of) Christmas story as a lot of it revolves around Harry's wish for a good Christmas. [About the selected warnings] most of those were just to be safe. The Dursley's and their abuse is hardly mentioned, the corporal punishment is for the way the other students treat Harry (as well as the violence warning), and the limited use of profanity is mild.
Takes Place: 2nd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean
Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 7: Breaking The Fall
| 26 Dec 2014
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Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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Cried my eyes out once again... great story 10/10.
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