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Voldemort is dead, but the world is going to hell anyway. Harry is forced to go into hiding as Snape's son. Little does he know, it isn't just a useful disguise.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 29 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Oct 2013 / 21 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 22 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Infinity Ltd (Signed)
    Just read your story through to this point. Your character development is great, and you build a very strong sense of anticipation. My one suggestion is that I'd be more sympathetic to your version of Harry if he had a few more positive attributes. It's hard to feel sympathy for his position if he is being a jerk. Great story though- I'm really enjoying it!

    Author's Response:

    Canon Harry can be an arrogant, disobedient, rude, lazy, bad tempered, stubborn, uncooperative little rule-breaker. He leaps to conclusions and he is dismissive of adults who have greater knowledge and experience because he thinks he knows better. Until the bitter end, he continues to divide people into good and evil based on whether they're NICE to him. He shows almost no ability to change his mind about people he doesn't like. I'm not sure what positive qualities he would display under the circumstances (high stress, being kept from doing what he wants, etc.).

    It would be nice for Harry to be a more sympathetic character, because people might start to treat him better. Although that sounds a bit like victim-blaming, because they should be treating him better no matter how he's acting. It might also be a tall order because some of his good qualities are precisely the things Snape doesn't like about him and/or can get him and his friends killed right now.

    Thanks for reviewing!

After Snape's visit to Surrey, Harry writes a thank-you letter that triggers an extended correspondence and a tentative friendship between the two of them.



Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Age Difference Romance, Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Sep 2009 / 25 Aug 2007
Series: Chivalry - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 17: Postscript 26 May 2011
Reviewer: Infinity Ltd (Signed)
    One of the best hurt/comfort genre. Truly memorable.

Eleven year old Harry Potter is not the boy everyone expects him to be. Unpopular, picked on, and unable to perform magic correctly most of the time because of a stutter, Harry is the boy nobody wants to be around. What happens when Severus Snape, the Potions Master currently spear heading the anti-Potter party, gets a glimpse of the boy’s true personality and inner workings?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Adoption, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Runaway
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Oct 2010 / 20 Jun 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Hagrid's Pets 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Infinity Ltd (Signed)
    Love this story - read it through again today. Well developed... Hope you continue it.

When he can no longer stand the half-truths and whole lies, Harry seeks out the truth in an epic journey that will change his outlook on life forever. “Tell me… tell me please.”

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Amnesia, Spying!Harry, Time Travel
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Misc > No category on the site fits, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 8 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Apr 2011 / 06 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Image Inspiration - Into the Past
Title: Chapter 7: Past Tense 25 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Infinity Ltd (Signed)
    Great chapter. Thanks for posting!

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