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Totally love all types of Harry Potter stories; crossovers, mentor, guardian, apprentice, creature fics, romance, slash, deaging stories, manipulative Albus Dumbledore.

Trying to write my own story on FanFiction.Net, but haven't yet descided if I've managed or will do justice to the wonderful characters that were all allowed to play with even if we can't own them....sigh!

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Just a father by watercrystals starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 270]
It was the start of his second year when Harry couldn't force his realization away any longer. He needed a father, even if it was a bad, uninterested father...he still needed one. So what motivated him to ask Severus Snape?

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 19 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Dec 2010 / 05 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Spinner's Christmas 14 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Upon reading this story which by the way I think its absolutely wicked...I'm totally hooked on stories of this nature.

    Its amazing just how different canon-Harry's school years would have been if he'd truly trusted & had relied upon Severus as a mentor or parental figure.....as the events of the books might have turned out differently, I wonder!

Evan by writeurlife starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 87]
After the war, Harry Potter is given the option of being reincarnated. He takes it, asking Snape to be his new father. This is the story of Evan Snape.

Not Deathly Hollows Compliant. Songfic.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging, Resorting
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Dec 2010 / 19 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: We Know that There's Always Tomorrow 14 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Wow...it truly seems as if little Evan really is good for Severus. But will it be revealed what did happen to all those that Harry previously knew? How was Harry blinded....and just how did he get rid off Voldemort in the end?

    Whilst its clear that both Albus and Severus will undoubtably miss the young/but old Harry...who never really had the chance of truly being a child this first time. So in someways both Albus and Severus will get to meet who "Harry" could have been if circumstances had been different.

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 14 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Hmm....its a shame that Severus didn't have a stuffed bear to give Evan to cuddle during the night for comfort. Though I'd have made the bear wear a black robe like Severus's....what do you think?

    Severus really does need to know about little Evan's past and the 3yrs this version of Evan spent with the Dursleys? Perhaps Severus should read some child psychology books about how to help an abused child? Try to find ways for Evan to express himself about how he feels at any given time; when he's scared, confused, etc. This could be done through drawing or play activities.
    Perhaps Severus should consult a mediwizard who specialises in the care of children but also knows how to aid abused children? So Evan has Severus as his papa, and possibly (in the future, if he allows it...and Albus minimises his meddling) Albus as a grandfather, but what about a female figure in Evan's life.....either Minerva or Poppy? Will any of the Hogwarts staff be making an appearance?

Title: Chapter 3: But if we are Wise 11 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I do feel that if Severus had not brewed that potion then Harry might have found another way to achieve a second chance at a childhood that he never had. Hope Severus won't be charged with his murder or something. After all hasn't Harry offered up enough for the wizarding world - he deserves something from them for a change?

Title: Chapter 4: We Know that There's Always Tomorrow 11 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Hmm....perhaps Harry and Severus should have talked about Harry's childhood. Even if it was vaguely so Severus would have some clue - feel sorry for him being left in the dark. Then there's Albus disappointment that Severus brewed the reincarnation potion for Harry.

Title: Chapter 6: When You're Not Strong 11 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Severus best get himself a parenting book and some literature on dealing with abused children of Evna's age.

Title: Chapter 7: And I'll Be Your Friend 11 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Evan without his/or any memories migh be 4yrs old - but some of his behaviour makes him seem much younger. Also I think that Evan almost took Severus telling him to stay on couch literally. Little Evan's afraid of doing anything wrong - as if he's waiting to be punished. Yet doesn't realise he's waiting to be punished - this might be linked to him not liking the words "thank you" - Dursley related?

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 11 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    So Will Severus ask Albus to perhaps be a grandfather to Evan or will he ask him something else? What happened to Harry's friends - won't they wonder where he is? Perhaps Severus should place a spell on Evan or a charm on something he wears - that lets Severus know where he is & his status, location? Perhaps Severus should give Evan a little more background information -because the wee boy is emotionally/socially much younger than 4yrs old - but in otherways he's much older as well. I do think Severus should have a house elf with him at his home to help with Evan & think about finding the boy some little friends as well. Wonder how Minerva, Poppy, Filius and Ponmona (if they've survived the war) would react to Harry taking the reincarnation potion and that Severus agreed to raise him as his on?

Playing Pretend by watercrystals starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 76]
During their third year, Harry and Draco take their rivalry too far while in the Room of Requirement. As a result, a magical accident transports them to a make-believe world where they had grown up from toddlers and their caring father is...Severus Snape.
Desperate to get back to their own world, the boys try to get along and play the part, but to Snape nothing has changed. And what happens when they return to their rightful time and place?
Their illusionary adventure will have them realize the man that is capable of being family and cause them to form the friendship they hadn't thought possible to obtain.
Playing pretend is the one that starts it all: it's part 1 of 4 in the “Shifted Reality” series that will eventually have two boys and one man learning to be a family.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Nov 2010 / 21 Feb 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: Touch a Snowflake 21 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Totally wicked story...I just love how being in a family home & with a very different Severus Snape as there father is starting to have a profound effect upon both boys. It
    does appear as if both Harry & Draco have many similiarities in that neither of there childhoods were seriously wanting...neither of them were simply allowed to be a child. Neither of them were allowed to feel a sense of safety, care, protection or parental love that other children experience.
    Though I'm surprised that Severus
    hasn't made further attempts to question the boys both together or even separately? Also what affect will it have upon them if/and when
    they return to there "true home" where they weren't raised as brothers...will they still be able to friends, tolerate each other..and what about there relationship with Potions Master Severus Snape?

Harry, The Werewolf by Black Banshee Girl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Harry finds out that Snape is his father but then he gets bitten by Remus Lupin. In response to The Werwolf Challange by Tina Evens

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 31 Mar 2010 / 08 Mar 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Werewolf Challenge
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Visiting the Dursleys 22 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Hmm...guess the ministry truly is controlled by a large number of idiots, because just how do they think the wizarding population will react when they learn that there savior "the-boy-who-lived" was bitted by a werewolf? Also if the ministry (and wizarding population)
    treat Harry with bigotry and contempt for something that isn't his fault...I mean he didn't ask to be bitten, did he...then if and when
    Voldemort returns then why should
    Harry even consider aiding such a
    society that threw him aside & treated him as trash but also tried to remove all of his families wealth
    from him?

    Somehow I kinda hope that Ron doesn't react well to his best friend
    Harry either being a werewolf or the
    fact that he's Prfoessor Severus Snape's son...because it certainly makes it much more interesting? But exactly how does Albus feel about his Gryffindor golden boy hero suddenly not only being a werewolf but also Severus Snape's
    son....suddenly his hero image is looking a little tarnished, hmm? Will he try to interfer in the father
    and son getting to know each other
    properly...and will Severus allow Remus to get reacquated with Harry?


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