Unsorted!
Response to the Potions and Snitches.net Fic Fest Challenge # 5 by Bil. Although I’m not sure it is completely compliant. I tried though.
Harry gets up one morning and begins to make breakfast (for the Dursleys, if that's where he is). Hearing a noise at the door he cautiously goes to investigate - to find a battered Snape collapsed on the front doorstep. What happened to Snape, why is he in Harry's neighborhood and what in Merlin's name is Harry going to do with him?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry, Reverse Roles > Healer Harry, Reverse Roles > Big Brother Harry
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Gryffynsfyre
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Oct 2006 / 22 Mar 2006
Series: None - Challenges: Battered Snape for Breakfast
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Oct 2006 / 22 Mar 2006
Series: None - Challenges: Battered Snape for Breakfast
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 28 Oct 2006 |
| Reviewer: Gryffynsfyre (Signed) |
An excellent chapter! I have long awaited an update to this story, and am very pleased with the results. You have a true talent for writing. Hopefully it will not be as long a wait for another update to this or your other stories on the site.
Gryffyn
During Occulmency lessons in the course of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Severus notices something... off in Harry's memories.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Dec 2010 / 27 Mar 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Dec 2010 / 27 Mar 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 11: Libertas | 22 Jun 2006 |
| Reviewer: Gryffynsfyre (Signed) |
- Another great chapter! I really like how you're mixing canon facts with AU. Please keep up the great work and update as often as possible.
Author's Response: Thank you. Soon, however, we will depart almost completely from canon and venture into undiscovered territory.
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AU. Harry is Sorted into Slytherin and Snape is confronted with some disturbing realizations.
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Sep 2006 / 24 Apr 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Sep 2006 / 24 Apr 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 16 Jun 2006 |
| Reviewer: Gryffynsfyre (Signed) |
Excellent chapter! I love the way you present the characters, you seem to be able to give them a dimension of life that not even J.K herself could. I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this story and where you want to take it. Please update as often as possible.
Gryffyn
Author's Response:
Wow, what a compliment - thanks!
I\'m trying to update as often as I can. Hope you like the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 03 Aug 2006 |
| Reviewer: Gryffynsfyre (Signed) |
- Another excellent chapter. I do like how realistice you've made the characters. I'm no sure if you're planning this for the story, however, I do hope that Severus eventually learns that revenge isn't everything. Especially when it turns people into the very thing they despised in the first place.
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 04 Aug 2006 |
| Reviewer: Gryffynsfyre (Signed) |
I do not know if my words will be able to convince you, but I thought that this chapter was fantastic! You have such a way of keeping with the right emotions in each scene. I am honestly glad that Severus seems to be recognizing what his plotting has cost him. Whether it has truly opened his eyes will remain to be seen. Keep up the great work. I know that August is a busy month for you and I am sad that there will be fewer updates, I look forward to what you do post both here and Like Poppy and Memory.
May your muses be many and constant,
Gryff
Harry is beaten and then rescued by an unlikely savior. But, can he cope with the riveting news that follows? SlytherinHarry, GoodLuciusDraco. Very alternate universe!!!
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jul 2007 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jul 2007 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 8: Malfoy Manor | 01 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Gryffynsfyre (Signed) |
- Interesting story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing where you plan on taking it.
Not to be overly critical, however you've misspelled dilema in the first couple of chapters. You have it spelled as delima.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for you feed-back! I appreciate it greatly~ I have now fixed the spelling errors!
| Title: Chapter 11: More Revelations | 31 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Gryffynsfyre (Signed) |
- I'm really enjoying this story. Please post again soon!