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Harry starts training at the summer before fifth year and continues it during the school year with Snape. Snape will be discovered, the Order will save him, Harry has nightmares; you know, just the usual stuff. In the last chapter Harry duels with Voldemort and shows us how powerful he really is.
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Reverse Roles > Healer Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 04 May 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Harry seems to be getting some intense training. I wonder how well Moody and Snape are getting along since they don't like each other?
I think some back story would be helpful here. Like: Who decided that Harry needed extra training? Is Harry going home to the Dursley home or staying somewhere else while he is training? What does he think of his new schedule? Maybe you have this in the next chapter and I am just getting ahead of things, but I thought I would make the suggestion.
I always admire people who have the courage to write a story in a language that isn't their own. You are doing a good job with it.
Author's Response: Moody and Snape *have* to get along because Dumbledore told them that Harry must be trained. You know how it goess with Dumbledore, one can't just start arguing with him about something he already decided :D he always has too good reasoning. Harry is staying at Grimmauld Place since his training takes place there.
Thank you :) I'm really afraid sometimes that my grammar is incorrect, but I'm trying to correct it.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 04 May 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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It sounds like Harry is training too much. His body needs some rest to recover from all the exercise. He will end up injuring himself if he keeps it up. He is also going to need to slack off some to keep up with the school work.
Author's Response: He's a wizard so I think his magical core would heal him faster after exercising. He is very determined to beat Voldemort, that's mostly why he sleeps less, but Dobby's Wideye potions are also helping him.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 05 May 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Harry would probably felt something through the connection with Voldemort if Severus had been killed.
Author's Response: Yes, I won't kill Severus :)
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 08 May 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Poor Severus. It sounds like it will be a while until he is up and around. At least Malfoy has changed sides.
"This is a nice hiding spot," Harry lies. The little professor scoffs. "I know better ones," he declares. "Oh yeah? Like what?" Harry inquires, actually a little curious to see what he'll say.
Takes Place: 4th Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Deaged!Snape, Deaging
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 20 Jun 2016 / 18 Jun 2016
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Tight Spaces
| 20 Jun 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I liked the interaction between little Snape and Harry. They both learned some things they hadn't known about the other. I wonder if Severus will keep those memories when he is deaged?
Author's Response: I've considered that myself. While I want to say yes, just because it seems like the nicer route for both, I much more enjoy the idea that Severus doesn't. Then, what he knows is all second-hand from everyone but Harry, because he's too stubborn to ask, and Harry won't just tell him because he's sure Severus must know since he'd be more of an ass to him than usual to remind Harry he's not that scared little kid anymore and Harry would take it to mean he doesn't want to discuss their little bonding moment. Though, I leave the decision up to you as the reader, honestly :) Thanks for the review!
Harry and/or Snape find themselves reliving the same span of time over and over again. What caused this phenomenon, and just how are they to get out of it? Are both wizards aware that time is repeating itself, or just one of them? And just what is it about this one day that it just refuses to end?
Takes Place: 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #21 Springfest 2016, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 21 Jun 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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That was a fun story and I enjoyed the ending. Having Snape give them detention with Filch was a nice touch. Severus must have had enough of them to last for a long time.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 21 Jun 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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That didn't sound good. Too bad Harry ignored Hermione. It sounds like Harry did more damage than Malfoy could have during the class. Good start!
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 21 Jun 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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They must really be getting sick of reliving the same day over and over. I enjoyed Harry and Hermione's way of coping with it though. Hermione must have especially enjoyed their act in Trelawney's class.
Title: Chapter 1: Yourself to Blame
| 23 Jun 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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That was definitely a crack!fic. I loved the whole house elves furious at Harry scene. Snape as Easter bunny reminds me of one of the Christmas fics a few years back where Severus takes over as Santa. Snape does get around.
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
| 25 Jun 2016
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Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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Poor Minerva. I can see why Severus was uncooperative about this story. Interesting that Fawkes brought Harry the Sorting Hat. Harry is so young that I wouldn't think he would be able to do much in a large scale fight yet.
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