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Voldemort is gone and Harry's relatives had no desire to keep Harry for long, so he was placed into an orphanage until he was adopted by a family. But when they pass away a few years later, he is placed into the custody of another who had just moved to Spinner's End. That is when Severus first saw the boy without even knowing who he was. The little boy, seven years old, who was always forgotten, uncared for and treated like filth. Severus watches this boy and sees a reflection of his own childhood. And when they meet, Severus vows to offer kindness where no one else does, in the form of a simple piece of food the boy lacked or a warm blanket for the cold days ahead. And when things get worst, he even offers shelter to the child the world had forgotten and cast aside. The boy Severus now wants to save.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 2: A Rubbish Situation
| 20 Dec 2012
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Reviewer: Wicked Kisses (Signed)
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I have to say this is a fascinating story. I do think, though, that you shouldn't foreshadow events so much. I like the way you brought Severus into the story. I'm pretty sure, though, that 'The Trace' would be able to keep track of Harry, unless you have decided not to use it.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. The Trace won't work for other reasons, which would be explained later. Also, you said I was foreshadowing events quite a lot, however to my knowledge I have not foreshadowed much at all, only enabled my readers to make assumptions. Could you please tell me some examples and what parts is "so much", in case I missed something? And I am very curious to understand your comment. Thank you for your feedback :)
Harry only defeated Voldemort because he wanted a good night’s sleep. Entry in the 2012 Prompt Fest. Prompts: blood-curdling scream, graveyard shift
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 26 May 2012 / 26 May 2012
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Good Night, Harry
| 08 Dec 2012
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Reviewer: Wicked Kisses (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 7: Dear Minerva
| 06 Dec 2012
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Reviewer: Wicked Kisses (Signed)
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Too cute. I love the idea of 'Tuney' as a semi dark witch. I always thought that her hatred of magic was really jealousy.
Title: Chapter 4: Eternal Gift
| 26 Dec 2012
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Reviewer: Wicked Kisses (Signed)
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That was lovely... and yes I can see where you were going with this. Perhaps a sequel in time?
Author's Response: I never say "never" regarding a sequel, but I didn't have one planned. Still, if I ever get stuck for a story idea, it's something to keep in mind. Many thanks for reading and reviewing, and Happy New Year!
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