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Call me: Selene (female) Member since: 11 Dec 2012
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Hello. I'm Selene. I really enjoy fanfictions, and I am really interested in all the different scenarios other people can come up with. I hate grammar and spelling mistakes, and consequently have to drop good fanfics because of it. To anyone interested, I am very willing to be a beta. [Report This]
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Office Meeting. by preety_lady_serenity starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Harry visits the Headmistress office for a chat but she is called out unexpectantly. Twenty years after the fall of Lord Voldemort Harry has to face the one man he never wished to. Snape. (One-shot, complete, takes place after the Deathly Hallows, includes minor spoilers).

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Nov 2007 / 04 Nov 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Office Meeting 08 Jan 2013
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    It was pretty good... but there was a lot of comma misuse, especially in the first few paragraphs.

Arielle Potter : Book One by Serena Snape starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 50]
AU Book I. Instead of there being a Harry Potter, there is an Arielle Potter, the girl-who-lived. Her life was totally changed when instead of Hagrid being the one that came for her to that hut on the rock, it was Severus Snape. The storyline is not what you expect. Arielle actually has a personality of her own. XD

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Girl!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Jul 2008 / 10 Dec 2007
Series: Arielle Potter - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: And the Story Begins! 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    Hmm. A very nice concept and spin on the original book with some of your own flair thrown in. However, there are quite a few grammatical mistakes and other things that make it a little difficult to read. Id recommend having a friend help edit and fix it.

Fate's sense of irony by Cicci Green starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 74]
What if Dudley was a wizard? And went to Hogwarts? Things aren't looking too good for Harry Potter, or for Severus Snape. AU, of course.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Sep 2010 / 02 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Dudley Goes to Hogwarts
Title: Chapter 2: Intermezzos in a hallway 13 Dec 2012
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    This is very good, except, if transfigurations was Harry's very first class, how could snape know that harry was bad at potions? Maybe that could be changed to snape saying he was arrogant, like his father, feeling as though the rules never applied to him. Just a thought. Thanks very much!

Of Love, in Unexpected Places by ObsessiveaboutSnape starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 366]
Summer after fourth year is finally over, and things are not as expected when Harry makes it back to the magical world. Badly broken and determined for it to stop, Harry turns to, surprisingly, a certain Potions Master, who in turn finds within himself, of all places, a heart still beating and waiting to love, and be loved in turn.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 35 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 May 2013 / 23 Sep 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 28 Jan 2013
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    This is a very, very evil place to stop. Update soon!

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 19 May 2013
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    FINALLY! I thought you had given up on this story. Please update soon, I adore this fic.
    -Darke

Better Off Forgotten by Scorpia starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Waking up in a vacant field, with no memory of his past, Harry finds himself being dragged to the house of Tobias Snape. Will Harry find his way home, or will Voldemort find him first?

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Mar 2009 / 17 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Unexpected Rescuer 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    Very nice start! Not a lot of grammatical or spelling mistakes, which is excellent. Normally in fanfictions there are a lot of those. Very unique idea too. Loving it. Keep up the great work!

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Two Taken, One Returned 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    I think this is really good! Snape isn't OOC at all. Very snappy and angry, perfect Snape. Maybe add some inner monologue? Doing great!

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    This is great! Loving the Severus perspective!

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: So Close And Yet So Far 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    Yay, more Snape!

Just another Average Double Potions Lesson by FireballFicAuthor starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
One-Shot. What if Harry finally stood up to Snape's put-downs? Slightly AU Snape didn't die in TDH. Slightly Snape-Bashing.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Jan 2009 / 26 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Just Another Average Double Potions Lessons 08 Jan 2013
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed)
    Errmm... it was quality writing, however, I felt that it was a little short, even for a one shot. There's no detail for anything. Again, I do understand its one shot, but there is room to expand on the concept without changing the one shot status.


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