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Reviews by rusulka7
Left with partial paralysis after being tortured by Voldemort, Severus is sent to Bell Point, a secure location on the seaside owned by the Order of the Phoenix. However, he is not the only one who will be there, for Harry, refusing to express his emotions regarding Sirius’ death, has unknowingly invoked an ancient kind of magic that will force him to deal with them. Deaged to four years old, he has to contend with a bitter and broken Snape, who, like Harry, is being forced to live in a body that does not work the way it used to. These two vastly different people have beat the odds many times over, and somehow prevailed in a world that has tried time and time again to destroy them. But the challenges they now face are nothing like they’ve ever seen before. Will they rise to the occasion, or become prisoners within themselves?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Deaging, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2013 / 12 Jan 2013 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I love when people review past chapters. I am glad that you feel that the hopelessness and frustration is portrayed well in this. Hmm, well, in their situation, they must eventually get to know each other somewhat. Maybe then, things won't be so hostile between them. I guess you'll just have to read further to find out. Cheers!
The addition of Hermione, phew wasn't expecting that or the horrible circumstance she had to arrive with. Very sad, and her coping with her own grief may well give Harry some pointers. Im hooked.. roll on updates!! ...No pressure!:>) Author's Response: It is great to hear that you are enjoying the story, and Snape's change of heart. Yes, I imagine Hermione's situation came as a shock, especially considering how many chapters in I pulled that stunt. I update every Thursday, generaly! It helps that this story has been practically finished for months. I just have to write like the last two chapters, and polish them, so pressure ... I can take it, haha. Thank you so very much for sharing your thoughts!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! It is wonderful to hear that you are enjoying Snape in this story, and that he doesn't feel that out of character. Great to hear you liked the Hermione thing too! Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I am so glad you enjoyed my portrayal of the characters. Haha, I'll miss the updates too! I sure hope you find my next projects to your liking, and you are very welcome for the hard work. Hearing from readers makes it all worth it! It’s another normal evening for Harry Potter, serving detention in the dungeons, that is until he notices water at his feet… water that keeps getting deeper. Harry never expected Hogwarts to flood, or that Severus Snape would come after him when he’s swept out of the castle by the ever present water. A story in response to the 'Natural Disaster At Hogwarts' Challenge by Whitetail.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Physical Impairment Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Nov 2020 / 18 Apr 2013 Series: None - Challenges: Natural Disaster at Hogwarts
Author's Response: It's ok, there's really no holes you can poke at this point. 1) A heating charm would be too easy and it doesn't have to exist in a story. If we use magic to fix everything then there's really nothing to write about. 2) Who's to say that Dumbledore taught his staff how to use a patronus at this point? The books only say that he came up with this way to use them, but I do not believe it says when he taught his staff or when he came up with it. Even if Dumbledore did know Snape and Harry's location, there's no guarantee that there's a good way for a human to get to them. At this point all they know is that there was an airpath large enough to get an inhaler to them. 3) (Though you didn't ask rusulka7, this is addressing other reviewers questions): They can't get out via floo because Hogwarts isn't connected to the Floo Network. That's why Dumbledore had to use Fawks to get out when he escaped in his office from Umbridge.
Thanks for your review (and thank you to the rest of the reviewers as well). What was Potter doing, showing up at Hogwarts looking like Snape’s son? Snape is not Happy to discover that his son Ian has an older clone in Harry Potter.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel Tags: Sibling Addition Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect
Chapters: 46 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Nov 2014 / 10 May 2013 Series: None - Challenges: Real Brother
I own nothing. AU to Shattered. Harry has Dissociative Identity Disorder. He's 8 years old when his aunt and uncle decide to abandon him. Lost and confused, he has nowhere to go...or does he?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Jun 2014 / 25 May 2013 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you! The wizarding world does, but it's quite rare...you'll have to see who recognizes it first. ;) And in this story, Harry's not integrating. :)
Harry and Severus are struck by rare magic-infused lightning, triggering de-aging and altering effects. Four-year-old Harry and twenty-one-year-old Severus move to the Burrow, but Fate isn't finished with them yet...
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaged!Snape, Deaging, New Identity!Harry Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Neglect, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Dec 2014 / 20 Aug 2013 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, Poppy wasn't letting him get away with that. Thank you very much for reviewing!
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