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When Harry was hit by the killing curse, a horcrux was created. In this story, Harry is affected by the piece of Voldemort's soul inside his head in a more noticable way than in the books. Muggles, not knowing any better, decide he must be mentally ill. What effects might the treatment on a psychiatric ward have for the boy-who-lived and the wizarding world?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 40 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2013 / 04 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 40: Into the future 26 Dec 2013
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Even with the distractions caused by numerous typos, misspellings, and misused words, this was a thoroughly engaging tale with a well thought out and original premise.
    Good for you!

Harry is horrified to find that he has to interview Snape for a school project. However, the tables get turned and the Potions Master discovers that he has more in common with Harry than he thought.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Mar 2014 / 18 Mar 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Turning Tables 08 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Whew, YES! Another 'As it could/should have been', had 'JKR' had an ounce of compassion or common sense, regards CHILD ABUSE!
    Thank you!
    MelJ

Harry Potter is located in London in the dead of night. How exactly did he end up there, and what has he been doing? Well, any kid with half a brain knows not to talk to strangers.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Mar 2015 / 03 Apr 2014
Series: To Trust - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 22: Always There 30 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    OMG! What an absolutely, amazingly precious GEM of a story! I can hardly begin to express the level of my admiration. When a fan fic story writer starts his tale by stating that this is their first effort at writing HPff, I'm of course interested, but I also steel myself for the inevitable, illogical scenarios, inane and nauseating 'homages' to Rowling's 'vision' (gag!), and, above all else, the now common place demonstrations of the piss-poor writing skills being 'taught' in our 'Palaces of "Learning"'. But I feel wrong-footed, instead: Like an expected 'step' was not there and I feel embarrassed and hope nobody else saw my misstep.
    You are a marvelously, welcome exception: Your writing skills are flawless; your execution and premise are BRILLIANT and YOU 'GET IT'! I understand that you decided to show the abuse that Harry suffered as CANON-PLUS, but, considering that Rowling wouldn't know ABUSE if it hit HER in the face, I believe that she would have downplayed it and dismissed it, just as callously and cavalierly as she did in canon, BUT YOU DIDN'T!!
    Thank you, THANK YOU for doing what was RIGHT instead of what would have been EASIER!
    I'm looking forward to reading your other offerings and anything ELSE you write, in the future!
    Brava, child, BRAVA!
    MelJ
    (54 year old bibliophile and Fantasy, Sci-Fi, and HP FAN FICTION, addict!)

[Christmas Special 2014] One Christmas Eve, after a particularly unpleasant Occlumency lesson, Severus is visited by a ghost. Lily is furious over how he has treated her son—and determined to make Severus see just how much Harry needs him. Loosely based on "A Christmas Carol".

Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape, Time Travel
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Romance/Het, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Dec 2014 / 14 Nov 2014
Series: Christmas Promises - Challenges: Christmas
Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue: First Steps 30 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Really good, but, psychologically speaking and, unfortunately, the voice of personal experience, in reality it would be too little, too late.
    Lovely story, though and I'll look for the sequel.
    Thanks!
    MelJ

It was the summer of love . . . er, no, not really. Left waiting for the Dursleys, Harry is found by the last person he'd expect to see. Written for the Summer Fic Fest 2015.

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Jul 2019 / 24 Jul 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Bonding Experience, Abandoned
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 30 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    I'm very disappointed in this chapter: Just because Rowling is too stupid and callous to realize that CHILD ABUSE leaves scars, etc., I would have thought that Poppy would, at least, have noted Harry's most recent injuries from his run-in with the local hoodlums! I find it a cause for concern when some fan fic authors are as cavalier and dismissive of child abuse as the 'original' so-called 'Children's Fiction' author! I don't believe that it bodes well for our society or its children in the long run!
    MelJ

Harry makes a wish on a glow-in-the-dark star sticker that his teacher gave him on his last day of school before summer break.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Aug 2015 / 29 Jul 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Wish upon a star
Title: Chapter 4: Wish Granted 01 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Wow! What a truly unique and amazing story! I don't know why, but it left me just a touch melancholy. I agree that it was best for Harry, to be left to believe that his time in Durskaban was the dream and that his new life was the reality, but will this Harry turn out to be the same grateful and unreservedly loving child without having lived thru hell?
    Well, it's just a story, but it's a really GREAT story!
    Thank you for sharing!
    MelJ

    Author's Response:

    Good question. Who knows how this Harry will turn out? Though I don't think it's a requirement to go through childhood hell to become a good person either, and some people end up turning out more like Snape than Harry after suriving such a childhood. Not that Snape didn't kind of redeem himself in the end, but the bitterness, and general inability to move on from what he'd gone through as a child, did not make for a very good, or long life. And then there are some who end up perpetuating the abuse they suffered, and some who end up in prison because they've killed others. There is no perfect fix for any of it. I think that Harry might have turned out to be loving, and kind without having to go through abuse as a child. Then again, I've seen too many children who are abused (neglect, physical, sexual, etc) and so many of them are not very kind, or loving, or grateful as of yet (maybe they'll get there someday), and I don't think that they should be, because they have a lot to work through. I have not turned out like Snape, myself, but I don't think I would have become a bad person, or less grateful, if I had not gone through the childhood that I had. I think I would not have as many hangups as I do now, had I been given a different, slightly better, childhood. Perhaps that's why I like to write these types of stories. And, wow, sorry for the long reply. I hope that I've not offended you, because I like your review. Your question sparked some meditation, and I hope that you don't mind that I've shared it with you.

    Thank you! 


This is my contribution to the Summer Ficfest. This short story will chronicle Harry's summers from birth to the summer after fourth year (maybe longer not certain).

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Adoption, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Aug 2015 / 29 Jul 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Oops My Mistake, Snapshots of Summer
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 01 May 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    I'm not going to 'discount' my rating for all of the various typos, 'spypos', and grammar errors because the story itself is so well thought out and entertaining that one can either ignore or forgive them, easily.
    I hope that you're planning to, eventually, return to this great story.
    Thank you for sharing!
    MelJ

Harry was determined at a young age to get away from the Dursley's forever and set out to go away to school far away from them. Harry begins attending a very exclusive school in Greece before he can receive his Hogwarts letter. There he receives a good friend in Severus Snape's secret squib son. How will this change the relatonship between him and the potions master in the future? And what happens when Dumbledore finally learns of his location. Will he attend Hogwarts or choose to stay where he is?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving
Tags: Adoption, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Nov 2015 / 09 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Real Brother, Multiple Challenges, Another School
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 01 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Excellent: A unique and intriguing premise and a great storyline, so far! Please come back and continue, soon? And please, don't make Severus be too big of a pill to Harry?
    I'd really enjoy seeing Harry be allowed to stay at his new school; I don't know how he'd be able to learn magic, too, maybe tutoring could be arranged, once he learns about his inheritance. One thing though: I'd love to see Severus fight against Dumblefuck finding out and/or trying to remove Harry to Hogwarts; I hate the MOB, in canon and fanon!
    Thanks for sharing!
    MelJ

"Speak, you will not be ridiculed for your efforts."

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Aug 2015 / 20 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Nervous Tic
Title: Chapter 1: Breaking the Silence 30 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Well, go ahead: Break my heart and then light a single candle in the darkness!
    I love to see you expand on this oneshot!
    Thank you!
    MelJ

Summer fic fest. At one point, early in their life, every wizard needs to submit to surgery. The summer after his first year at Hogwarts, it is the turn of Harry Potter to do so. It’s supposed to be a trifle, but what is ordinary about the Boy-who-lived? Complications will arise. Ghosts from the past will appear and secrets people thought buried for ever are revealed. The question is, in the middle of this ordeal, will Severus Snape at long last find something meaningful to do with his life?

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Hospitalization
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 12 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Aug 2015 / 20 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Petunia, Tell Me The Truth, Surgery
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 A glimpse of truth 02 May 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Wow! Such a deceptively simplistic premise, at the outset, but you've woven a richly beautiful and intricate tale, beyond all my initial expectations! What a delicious marvel!
    Thank you for sharing with us a most prodigious talent!
    MelJ


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