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Past Featured Story Finding a Father by LilPadfoot16 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 72]
[COMPLETE] What happens when Harry finds out that his father is alive? How about when said father is his hated Potions professor? Harry has to deal with the fact that he is a Snape while trying to cope with Sirus’ death in OotP. Summer before and during sixth year. OotP spoilers. This is in response to Severitus Challenge.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Suicide Themes, Torture
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Aug 2005 / 22 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: A New Day 05 May 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    oh my God, i didn't even know that there was such thing as FFN portal for Harry and Snape and i was really happy to find this and that your story was the first one i read!! it took me almost 24 hours to finish, i even sacrificed my sleeping time to read haha
    anyway, Finding a Father is a really good story, i love how you described the bond between Harry and Snape. You are an awesome writer! Good luck for your next writing :)

Past Featured Story Mine by Gillian starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 112]
Against his better judgement Severus Snape let a part of himself be used in a spell six years earlier. Now the consequences of his actions cannot be avoided any longer and Snape finds himself the father of a five year old boy-Harry Potter!

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Feb 2007 / 15 Feb 2007
Series: Mine - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue 16 May 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    This is such a very heartwarming story, the one you can shed a tear reading it ;") i'm so glad i found this. You made Harry sooooo freakig adorable here that even a cold person like Snape could not resist him. Or maybe i think, he did because he was as damaged as Harry so they completed each other. I love how Snape handled Harry. I can tell that you had a lot of experience with children.
    Good luck for your future endeavor in writing!

Lily's Charm by Potions and Snitches starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 697]
In a story that spans two decades, Lily and Severus look for a way to control the powers of the Dark Mark after Lily's life is threatened by Eileen Prince. Seventeen years later, Harry realized he has no idea who he is. SS/LE H/G RL/NT

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 55 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2008 / 18 Nov 2007
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Echoes 16 May 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    This is a very neat and fine story. Ordinary, but you have the ability to make and write it extraordinarily.
    Some mistakes i pointed out is you have a little problem with paragraphing. But it does get better to the end. I think you really deserved it to be mentioned at The Economist.
    Good luck for your future endeavor in writing!

Vows by Zarathustra starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 278]
When Vernon discovers Harry can't do magic during his first summer back from Hogwarts, he loses it when the cake falls on his clients. Completely AU version of the Severitus challenge beginning during the summer after first year.

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Rape, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Nov 2008 / 21 Jul 2008
Series: Vows Series - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 28: Term Ends 11 May 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    I'm a bit ashamed & guilty to admit that i only reviewed after i read til the 4th series. I just wanted you to know that you are a really talented writer. I was really glad that i got to read such excellent stories. You know, i think the challenge for HP fanfiction writers who manage their stories within the seven time frames of the series is writing it without seemingly redundant. And you have done a very great job so far for providing more creative story lines. I really love that you wrote the story in a very neat plot. I love how you developed Snape character here & i think all the readers agree that he is an ideal vision for a father. I just love how he loves Harry and Draco. I dare say that you are or were a psychology student, no? Since you had a very perfect way to describe Harry's predicament with the Dursley, where you really emphasized the psychological effect for the victim. Sorry for the long babble, i just really love this story & i'm currently rereading it again from the first series, which i rarely do unless i consider the story really exceptional. I'm really sure that you will be a great writer & i'm wishing all the success for your endeavor. Oh and don't worry, i'll put reviews in every series later ;)
    Cheers!

Vows II: Duty by Zarathustra starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Sequel to Vows. Join the Snapes as they explore their new family relationship and solve the mystery of why an Azkaban escapee has followed Harry all the way to Hogwarts.

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Oct 2009 / 30 Jun 2009
Series: Vows Series - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 12 May 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    What i really loved from the Vows II was the friendship between Paddy and Crooks! They were just soooo adorable together! Another great improvisation on the story as well. Even though i was a bit frowny at Narcissa since i think that her reason for neglecting Draco was a bit unreasonable. Any i loved to see that the bond between Severus and Harry was getting stronger.

The Boy Who..? by Dream Painter starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 224]
By third year, Harry was starting to think he knew his own identity. Then, the discovery of an old secret threatens to throw his world into turmoil, yet again. Nor is he the only one who finds his life affected...

Who is he, anyway?

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 39 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Sep 2015 / 04 Mar 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 18 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    Fast update, please! I'm addicted!

Vows III: Honour by Zarathustra starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Sequel to Vows and Duty: Join the Snape boys as they face the dangers of Harry's fourth year.

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Feb 2011 / 08 May 2010
Series: Vows Series - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 13 May 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    Well, another amazing continuation fro you. I especially liked how you improvised the first task w/ Harry using Parseltongue. That was really Slytherin :D
    But i was a little disappointed when you decided to pair Draco w/ Hermione. Because since the Vows 2, you already made the chemistry between Draco and Luna. I am a freak Dramione shipper, but i just didn't find them here :'(
    And i really liked too that you are being very consistent about Dumbledore's nature in meddling in Harry's life.
    Even though Snape's character was very OOC, the contrary, i really liked a very kind and caring Snape (i'm a normal human being who believes in goodness of every person :P). I know it's too naive, but you depict it perfectly via Snape.
    I also found it a little bit weird about Snape's relation w/ Narcissa. But i guess he could not be a lonely man, right :P

Through a Glass, Darkly by Sita Z starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Harry Potter is not a happy child. He carries a danger inside him that manifests itself soon after he arrives at Hogwarts, and it falls to his new Head of House, Severus Snape, to protect Harry, even from himself…

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2011 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor 02 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    Love this story. You succeeded to give me creeps!

Different, Not Defective by awesomelyglorious starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 138]
Everyone said Harry was different, but what if the differences were more than just surviving the killing curse? What if Harry had Autism? How would the wizarding world react and adapt to The Boy Who Lived?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 May 2016 / 12 Sep 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 13: Batman 19 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    This is one of those heart warming stories that can make you shed tears! Great job, awesomelyglorious! Will be patiently waiting for update! :)

Baby in a Box by Sita Z starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 61]
Every year on Christmas, Harry wants to hear the story of how he arrived at Spinner's End... in a box.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Baby fic, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Dec 2011 / 23 Dec 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Part 2/2 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed)
    Good story :)


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