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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 4
| 04 Feb 2015
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Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed)
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I believe you have the makings of an excellent story here. Having read the chapters posted I'm concerned that there is no depth to the plot. I'm not sure if you are relying on canon or using an Alternate Universe. There is no reason in your story why Snape would be hostile to Harry. Is the reason canon & James Potter was a bully to Severus? I'm impressed that you have found the voice of a 4yr old in your story. Looking forward to reading further updates.
Title: Chapter 1: A Promise He Could Trust
| 19 Feb 2015
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Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed)
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Well done on submitting your first story for us to read. Its a big step! Your story covered all the salient points for Severus to discover the years of abuse Harry had suffered through. I liked how your Snape immediately took charge of Harry to ensure that he was placed under medical care. Nicely written story. Congrats.
Author's Response: Thanks! Aha yeah, I've been reading fanfiction for a while now, and I thought it might be fun to write a one-shot. I'm glad you liked it :)
Title: Chapter 1: The Boy Who Ran Away
| 07 Nov 2021
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Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed)
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A fitting tribute to a mostly misunderstood character. Thankyou.
Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Gifts
| 28 Oct 2021
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Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed)
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Liked the tone of your story from Snape's POV.
Harry Potter comes to Hogwarts and lands in Severus' House. A new screening procedure, however, shows that something isn't quite right with the boy. Severus and Harry are in for quite the unconventional year, full of heartbreaks, unexpected allies, and revelations.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Quivering boy, tell me your sorrows
| 07 Aug 2020
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Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed)
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Definitely got the mood of the story in your writing. Certainly wonder how Dumbledore will react when he is informed of Harry's abusive history by the hands of the family who he left him on the doorstep of.
Author's Response: Well, chapter 2 is up and now I can safely answer this: not happily. I briefly considered doing the classic Evil Dumbles where he believes that suffering will give one character and create a hero out of a child, but it made more sense for him, as leader of the light and headmaster of a school, to react with anger and horror instead to the news of a child under their care being abused.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 07 Aug 2020
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Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed)
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Interesting beginning to what I hope is going to be an enthralling story. Bringing in the machinations of Dumbledore and Harry's true father definitely got me excited. Hoping to read further updates.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Further updates will soon be forthcoming...
Harry squinted past his glasses, looking into the mirror again. This was... the strangest thing. Childfic, fluff, set at the beginning of 2nd year. Oneshot
Takes Place: 2nd Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 02 Nov 2021 / 31 Oct 2021
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Erised
| 07 Nov 2021
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Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed)
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Delightfully gentle story providing us with a person who actually has Harry's care foremost in his mind. Thankyou.
It is the week after Christmas, 1991, but for Harry Potter that is no longer true. Instead, he finds himself stepping off the Hogwarts Express at Kings Cross Station at the beginning of the Christmas hols. His parents greet him with hugs and Harry is drawn into a loving Christmas holiday at Godric's Hollow. They have been dead for years but now they are alive-- and it's the best thing that has ever happened to Harry. It is the week after Christmas, 1991, and Harry Potter gazes into the Mirror of Erised, unmoving. He will die, soon enough-- unless something is done-- for the Mirror has him in its power.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 8
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 18 May 2022 / 06 Nov 2021
Series: None
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Challenges: A Mirror of Lies
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 07 Nov 2021
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Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed)
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Interesting beginning to what reads as a fascinating plot. Looking forward to reading further updates.
Author's Response: Thankyou! If my plot lives up to "fascinating" it will be the highest of praise!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Happenstance
| 03 Dec 2021
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Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed)
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Reading your first chapter, the plot has all the makings of a one person watching a train knowing its going to crash and unable to look away. Did so like the 'somewhat' anxious Snape fretting on how to produce the mysterious scion.
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