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Awaited by many, dreaded by one in particular; Harry Potter takes his first steps in the Wizarding World. But he is not exactly as expected. How will the world react to the REAL Boy-Who-Lived?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Physical Impairment, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2012 / 22 Feb 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: The Bank 28 May 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    The characters have been played well... I am enjoying it. There are some parts which could be improved, but as for gripping the reader you have done a great job.

After helping Draco Malfoy escape the custody of Sirius Black, Harry endures the wrath of his Godfather. When Snape comes looking for Draco, Harry tells him that Draco has run away, and that he won’t tell him where Draco is unless Snape takes Harry with him. **Note** I'm aware that some of you don't like bad!Sirius stories. Don't worry, Sirius isn't actually in the story much, however there is redemption in the end. It's not so much that he's just bad, more that he's fallen. This story is about how people fall, and how they can make it back out in the end, getting a second chance. It is NOT a character bashing story.

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Addicted!Harry, Animagus!Harry, Azkaban Character, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Runaway
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Drug use, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jul 2015 / 26 Feb 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Unforgivable Sirius
Title: Chapter 30: Invictus 28 Jul 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    Awesome..... Cngratulations on finishing it. The story has been a great read

Challenge by WhiteTail about a Natural Disaster at Hogwarts. When he looked out the window all he could see was thick smoke, and the smell of burning sulfer in the air. He swallowed the fear thickly, unable to believe that something like lava had penetrated Hogwarts

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Physical Impairment
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Nov 2020 / 21 Apr 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Natural Disaster at Hogwarts
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Sometimes Time Doesn't Heal All Wounds 13 Dec 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    Brilliant chapter... I need to find a few tissues. I almost did the same thing Malfoy did a few months ago... I knw exactly how it feels and u captured it perfectly, curbing any lingering thoughts of it as well. Thanks

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you fought through what you were dealing with. Definitly a strong person and I'm glad you liked my story.  I needed tissues when I wrote this bit almost a year ago, it hurt to go back amd add to it. Ao I'm glad I've managed to capture everything I was trying to do. Thank you!

In response to the "It's Kind of a Funny Story" challenge by Mellow Moon. A four author story.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 May 2020 / 03 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: It's Kind of a Funny Story
Title: Chapter 6: Whispers and Warnings 02 May 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    I am Kenyan... and while the Theluji Kiumbe sounds interesting, it translates to ice man/ ice monster... and besides mount Kenya we have never experienced ice... great story though... love the reference to both my country and Kiswahili.

One unlucky hit with a strange spell. That's all it took to alter the course of Harry's life - and everyone else's life around him. Bound to stay within ten feet of each other, Harry Potter and Severus Snape have to learn to get along or die trying.

But sometimes in the hardest of times, one can learn things never imagined possible. After all, the past doesn't define the future.

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 50 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Mar 2020 / 11 Jan 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!, Multiple Challenges, Harry's Rant, Joined at the Hip, Secrets
Title: Chapter 20: Twenty: Her Last Detention 29 Nov 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    Horrible Umbridge, seriously how can you keep making her worse and worse, it's an incredible gift Anthezar! Poor poor Harry, so goodbye hogwarts and hello hell

Title: Chapter 19: Nineteen: Someone Said Otherwise 24 Nov 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    I hate umbridge..... She is the foulest of all of JKRs characters.... Voldy was insane... She was a bloody maniac.... Awesome way to show her vile demeanor.... She is a proper depiction of a terrorist

Title: Chapter 18: Eighteen: Like the Father Before Him 21 Nov 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    Awesome!!!!!!

Title: Chapter 17: Seventeen: Life Isn't Fair 20 Nov 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    Delightfully heart wrenching piece of work there Anthezar! I would feel the same way in his place, and still feel that way - it'd hard to blame anyone else but yourself when you have been led to believe you are the leader and the only one whose life is truly a trahic reminder of evil

Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen: Butterfly Tears 19 Nov 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    I felt the same way as Harry when someone cried to me. Golly that is difficult. Awesome way to sum that up, and Snape was awfully nice compared to normal to give Harry a chance. Great work!

Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen: Misadventures of Treacle Tart 18 Nov 2015
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
    Luna is awesome. I guess she is that wonderful character because she is so weird and odd (you have captured that really well). This chapter has helped me heal a bit too... Thank you


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