the Snowy owl
Slytherin!
When he learns about the Dursleys, Dumbledore forces Snape to adopt Harry. Harry is frightened knowing that Snape and his father were rivals in school, but things are even worse than he had imagined. As Harry learns of the real connection between Snape and his father, the line between good and evil starts to blur. What will Harry do when he learns about how the death eaters started and he finds himself sympathizing with them? Will Snape overcome his horrendous past and give Harry love and support as his world view crumbles around him?
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate
Tags: Adoption, Spying!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by SHallow
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Bashing, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Jan 2016 / 25 Nov 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Jan 2016 / 25 Nov 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 12: Goroth's Doom | 25 Jul 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- Wonderful chapter... Perfect summing up of psychology of characters
Author's Response: Thanks. I enjoy hacking into the characters' minds.
After a year away at Hogwarts, Harry expects his summer to be like all the rest. For better or for worse, there's a big difference this time.
Takes Place: 2nd summer, 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 2nd summer, 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Mar 2015 / 13 Dec 2014
Series: To Build a Home - Challenges: Harry's move
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Mar 2015 / 13 Dec 2014
Series: To Build a Home - Challenges: Harry's move
| Title: Chapter 5: Lemon Drops | 11 Jun 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- continue please?
Author's Response: I shall! It's just very slow going. But it's going.
After his potion is sabotaged by Draco, Harry is assigned detention, when it all gets too much his glamour drops in Snape's presence revealing his abused, scar-ridden form to the hated professor. But despite Gryffindor beliefs, Snape does have a heart. Can the two find happiness and family? Of course, it's not a smooth ride. De-aged!Harry
Takes Place: 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Deaged!Harry, Deaging
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Deaged!Harry, Deaging
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Romance/Het, Self-harm
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Mar 2015 / 14 Dec 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Mar 2015 / 14 Dec 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 3: Released | 07 Jun 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- I would rather you don't deage him, and let the story continue from where it is... it poses more of a challenge to build a relationship without the baby factor, but it will make it a lot better. (My opinion, you are the writer so its really up to u)
Snape puts Harry under a magical leash to keep him out of trouble. But unbeknown to him, Harry has been turned into a vampire, and the leash is causing far more harm than good. Terrified of losing his friends, Harry would rather starve than risk the truth coming out.
Takes Place: 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Runaway, Spying on Harry! Snape, Vampire!Harry, Vampires
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Takes Place: 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Runaway, Spying on Harry! Snape, Vampire!Harry, Vampires
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Rated: T
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Warnings: Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Jun 2015 / 03 Feb 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 21 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Jun 2015 / 03 Feb 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 16: Safe | 26 Apr 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- As good as the entire story has been I wonder if you slacked in this chapter. In a way it beats a lot of what I have read till now; but I think you could do way better. Best of Luck in the next chapter.
Author's Response: In what way do you think I slacked?
| Title: Chapter 16: Safe | 27 Apr 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- You slacked only because of the lack of detail... Its not much, but it made the whole thing lose its high appeal... I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep writing, you are really good. I suppose I am just disappointed at the lack of activity in this chapter unlike the previous ones... don't mind me.
| Title: Chapter 17: Being Stubborn | 02 May 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- Excellent! a86;
| Title: Chapter 18: Shot in the Dark | 10 May 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- Short and sweet, its really good, in fact I could swear that each chapter is topping the last one now.
| Title: Chapter 21: Reasonable Trust | 23 Jun 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- True, not up to usual standard, but a great attempt all the same.Keep Writing! :P
This story is adopted and given permission from Severus Addicted. Albus has kept a secret about two people for eleven years. The time has come for when the truth should be announced. Can Severus be a father? Severitus. Warnings: small mention of abuse/foul language/corporal punishment. No slash. Be kind, leave a review. No flamers please.
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Out of Character, Profanity
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jul 2020 / 14 Feb 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jul 2020 / 14 Feb 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Finding Family | 21 Sep 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- This story needs a lot more work.... It has a fair train of thought, but it is not up to par by my reckonings
Author's Response:
As this story was adopted from someone else, I agree that the first chapter was rough around the edges. I'm sorry it was not to your standards, but I do appreciate that you took the time and at least read a chapter. The next chapters I did put my spin on them, but I completely understand if you do not want to give it any more of your time.
Thank you for taking the time to give my story a chance. I hope that this one story will not dissuade you from reading my other stories.
<Mandancie>
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Dinner at Hogsmead | 21 Sep 2015 |
| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) |
- As per your request, I read till this chapter. I apologize for being rash, but the beginning does need a lot of work. This chapter displayed the verbose and emotive flow of thought far better than the first. Please accept my apologies, I know how hard it is to write when one has lost a close someone or something ; and this attempt has shown your strength in the face of adversity. I did try some of your other works, although I have not reviewed any, they are very good. Keep writing, it is a known cure to depression. I will watch out for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I graciously accept your apology, though it was not needed. I respect anyone's opinion. I am glad that you gave this story another look. I will let you in on a secret; it was very hard to read the original. But looking pass the flaws of it, I saw a good story behind it. That's why I asked to adopt the story.
Please know that I respected your opinion as you came at with respect. I have had reviews that was just harsh and mean and those hurt, but what you did didn't do that and I thank you for that. I am honored that you are looking at my other stories and I hope that you will give me you HONEST opinion if and when you do leave a review.
Thank you for your kind words. For losing someone is hard, losing 4 loved ones in 6 months is gut wrenchingly heartache. I will continue on with this story as well as my other ones. Have a wonderful day/evening/night. :)
Many thanks
Amanda